Thèmes généraux, jeux, chansons, traductions...
Tout ce qui n'a pas un rapport direct avec les difficultés liées à la langue anglaise: par exemple, les thèmes généraux sur l'apprentissage de la langue, les jeux, les demandes de traductions de chansons etc.
correction lettre motiv pr entrée école
Message de skapgoat posté le 04-03-2007 à 11:54:45 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour !
J'ai écris une lettre de motivation pour entrée dans une école, j'aimerais seulement savoir si quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon mail s'il y a des fautes, ou peut-être corriger le style, si certaines choses sont incorrectement dites. Merci beaucoup de votre aide !!
Dear Madam/Sir,
Your school offers the opportunity of following an anglophone training open to foreigners and delivering a diploma recognized by the State. Carrying out this one in your school would materialize my personal plan for the future.
Wealth (Blossomed out ?) from one year of enriching experience in Asia (le fait est que je ne viens pas de revenir ("returning from...") cela date déjà de 7 ans), I passed my bachelor’s degree in Japanese in 2006. Currently doing my 1st year of Master, I am completing my international cultural and economic knowledge and wish to finalize my course by a program specialized in the fields of fashion.
Having a passion for relationship, languages and art, I have developed, through my experiences, abilities for adaptation and observation; major assets to succeed in a trade which evolves permanently in a context of global exchanges.
To become an actor of today’s world and live a true passion, here is my professional and personal challenges. You will find my full application form herewith. Looking forward to our future interview, I remain, Madam/Sir, yours truly.
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Modifié par bridg le 04-03-2007 11:57
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Message de skapgoat posté le 04-03-2007 à 11:54:45 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour !
J'ai écris une lettre de motivation pour entrée dans une école, j'aimerais seulement savoir si quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon mail s'il y a des fautes, ou peut-être corriger le style, si certaines choses sont incorrectement dites. Merci beaucoup de votre aide !!
Dear Madam/Sir,
Your school offers the opportunity of following an anglophone training open to foreigners and delivering a diploma recognized by the State. Carrying out this one in your school would materialize my personal plan for the future.
Wealth (Blossomed out ?) from one year of enriching experience in Asia (le fait est que je ne viens pas de revenir ("returning from...") cela date déjà de 7 ans), I passed my bachelor’s degree in Japanese in 2006. Currently doing my 1st year of Master, I am completing my international cultural and economic knowledge and wish to finalize my course by a program specialized in the fields of fashion.
Having a passion for relationship, languages and art, I have developed, through my experiences, abilities for adaptation and observation; major assets to succeed in a trade which evolves permanently in a context of global exchanges.
To become an actor of today’s world and live a true passion, here is my professional and personal challenges. You will find my full application form herewith. Looking forward to our future interview, I remain, Madam/Sir, yours truly.
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Modifié par bridg le 04-03-2007 11:57
Divers