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Message de madnessx posté le 04-01-2005 à 18:51:17 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour!
J'ai écri un petit texte que j'aurais aimé traduire, mais mon anglais étant moyen, je ne suis aps du tout sur de moi! si vous pouviez m'aider!
I 've made a dream
where I belonged to you
I was yours
I've woken up in your arms
As the sun was rising
where All your radiant smiles
were for me
you were my angel
I had the privilege to have you close to my heart
In that feeric dream
I was able to deposit my lips on yours
and in a tending kiss
express all my love
But why my eyes are burning me
why I feel this deep pain
growing up in my body
why this water's streaming on my face
why my tears are so heavy
and my love so painful
because it was only a dream
because the love is a betrayer
You are my angel
my inaccessible love
a reason to live
a reason to die
a heat for my soul
a dagger for my heart
I've so much love for you
nothing will ever replace you
because I love you as I never loved
because I love you as I will never love
You're My angel
J'ai un doute surtout sur le faite de dire "where" pour un rêve!
merci
Message de madnessx posté le 04-01-2005 à 18:51:17 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour!
J'ai écri un petit texte que j'aurais aimé traduire, mais mon anglais étant moyen, je ne suis aps du tout sur de moi! si vous pouviez m'aider!
I 've made a dream
where I belonged to you
I was yours
I've woken up in your arms
As the sun was rising
where All your radiant smiles
were for me
you were my angel
I had the privilege to have you close to my heart
In that feeric dream
I was able to deposit my lips on yours
and in a tending kiss
express all my love
But why my eyes are burning me
why I feel this deep pain
growing up in my body
why this water's streaming on my face
why my tears are so heavy
and my love so painful
because it was only a dream
because the love is a betrayer
You are my angel
my inaccessible love
a reason to live
a reason to die
a heat for my soul
a dagger for my heart
I've so much love for you
nothing will ever replace you
because I love you as I never loved
because I love you as I will never love
You're My angel
J'ai un doute surtout sur le faite de dire "where" pour un rêve!
merci
Réponse: re:Correction de clarinette, postée le 05-01-2005 à 00:06:31 (S | E)
Absolutly beautiful. Pas de problème avec were is correct. Where + adv de lieu. Bravo.
I've made a dream pourrait etre I had a dream.
magic dream au lieu de feeric.
I could join my lips to yours.
Why do I fell this pain
It was just a dream
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Edité par clarinette le 2005-01-06 00:38:40
Réponse: re:Correction de madnessx, postée le 05-01-2005 à 18:16:41 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide
Réponse: livre de jeux de caterpillar, postée le 05-01-2005 à 18:47:32 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Il est préférable de dire:
I woke up ...
As the sun was rising (2 temps du passé)
Why are my eyes burning?
Why do I feel ...?
Why is ...-ing ? (interrogative= inversion avec aux)
Because love (mots abstraits= article 0)
Congrats!
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