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my cover letter
Message de oreli posté le 08-04-2005 à 20:47:22 (S | E | F | I)
Hello, I'm french and before sending my cover letter I would like to make sure that there is no grammatical, spelling etc. mistakes in it, so please have a look for me...

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COVER LETTER:
"As a well-known company in brokerage, it would be a great opportunity for me to earn my
spurs at your company. I think have the maturity, skills, and abilities to embark
successfully on a career as a junior broker.

I will be soon graduating in Finance and International Capital Markets; this
postgraduate degree is recognised as providing professional training to students
wishing to understand the stakes of financial markets.
I have acquired through my studies and my various internships a good communication
skills as well as a specialised knowledge of financial markets for example exotic options, quantitative mathematics, preparatory course for the Eurex Examination, technical
and financial analysis, data processing applied to trading (including VBA), etc.

Highly motivated, I am sure to be able to bring a real human value added to
your team, and as a letter cannot fully reflect my character and my motivation,
I would appreciate the opportunity to come to London to meet you in order to convince you.
Yours Sincerely"
Does "earn my spurs" means "achieve success" ?
Many thanks for your help
Oreli
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Edité par bridg le 08-04-2005 20:55
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Réponse: my cover letter de felin, postée le 08-04-2005 à 21:10:15 (S | E)
Bonsoir Oreli

J'habite à Londres. Je vais vous donner un vrai model de covering letter.
Où devez vous envoyer cette demande? Si c'est pour l'Angleterre c'est bon si
c'est pour un autre pays je ne peux pas vous aider. Dans chaque pays qu'il y
a sans doute un model différent.

Voici le model de covering letter.

A Cover Letter
A covering letter is to go with your CV or application form to show
you have the skills the employers are looking for An example is shown below:

Your Address

Company Address Date

Dear Sir or Madam
Reference:

I enclose my application for the post of (Job Title) as advertised
in the (Name of Newspaper) on (Date when advertised).
My reason for applying for this job is that I have the relevant skills and
qualities that I want to use and to gain further skills to enhance myself.
> I have experience of inputting and retrieving information from the computer systems.
> I have 3 years experience of administration work. (More information of your skills and experiences)

I am currently unemployed so I will be ready to start work when you want me to do so.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information.
Yours faithfully
(Your Signature)
(Your Full Name in Print)

Je vous donne encore un autre exemple sur personal profile:
Personal Profile:

A hard working, friendly and talented individual with excellent communication
skills, who also has the ability to work well within a team. Works well under
pressure and has the ability to remain calm in stressful situations. Have excellent organisational skills and doing a good job.

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Edité par bridg le 08-04-2005 21:27

Réponse: my cover letter de oreli, postée le 08-04-2005 à 21:22:49 (S | E)
Bonsoir Felin,
oui c'est pour Londres.
"Je vais vous donner un vrai model
de covering letter", ma lettre n'est pas satisfaisantes ? Toutes
vos propositions seront les bien venues.
Merci de votre aide, et j'attends le modèle que vous voulez m'envoyer.

Bonne soirée

Réponse: my cover letter de oreli, postée le 08-04-2005 à 21:25:25 (S | E)
Désolée je n'avais pas vu les modèles joints.
Thanks

Réponse: my cover letter de felin, postée le 08-04-2005 à 21:33:00 (S | E)

Réponse: my cover letter de oreli, postée le 08-04-2005 à 21:45:16 (S | E)
Sinon, y a t-il des fautes ?

Réponse: my cover letter de bridg, postée le 08-04-2005 à 23:12:13 (S | E)
Hello
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Réponse: my cover letter de felin, postée le 08-04-2005 à 23:46:08 (S | E)
Bonsoir Eroli
J'ai cherché par internet
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