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Résumé de livre / correction
Message de darkspirit89 posté le 05-11-2006 à 15:52:11 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour chère membre du site anglaisfacile .J'ai du faire un résumé d'un livre mais n'étant pas bon en anglais je voulais savoir si on pouvais essayer de corriger mes fautes et nombre en sont je le sais .Désolé d'avance si certaines personnes vont s'arracher les cheveux rien qu'en voyant les fautes.
voici le texte :
In the life of ninety-five years , a man who was Silas .He had a lot of time and he became a gravedigger . He had for company except birds. A day of may , during the spring who was dry and cold , he was digging when he decided drink and eat .After have dinner he slept for fifteen or twenty minutes. When he wake up and in front him .a woman who had a umbrella was upright .but it wasn’t a woman but a female .The female was irritated on her because he didn’t have respect of death . Silas left him for five minutes. Then he returned near the female and said to him good afternoon. The female wasn’t satisfied , even if he left , because his disrespectful behaviour . She asked why Silas drunk here. Silas explained that it wasn’t the beer but a cold tea. The female tasted the drink and it was good a cold tea. The female was afraid because she was young. Silas convince that she appeared a woman of twenty years. After a moment of discussion ,the female stopped looking like a female and became a woman .Then she asked if it was a long fight to stopping the drink. For that Silas told his story .He told that he was born the hungry time and the eat and the drink was very but very bad . there were a lot of disease .In the time , there was that beer and it was for that that it was a long fight . He continued and explained that he had to tea. A summer tea with a little alcohol and a winter tea with nearly a cupful .For the moment , he drank the winter tea because these days are cold. After have tell the story , he shook his hands and her , and said good afternoon. A little time after he was in the gare station .He saw a woman who had a umbrella and who told everywhere that she met a good man.
JE remercie tout ceux qui m'aideront dans cette lourde tâche .Merci beaucoup
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Modifié par bridg le 05-11-2006 15:55
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Message de darkspirit89 posté le 05-11-2006 à 15:52:11 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour chère membre du site anglaisfacile .J'ai du faire un résumé d'un livre mais n'étant pas bon en anglais je voulais savoir si on pouvais essayer de corriger mes fautes et nombre en sont je le sais .Désolé d'avance si certaines personnes vont s'arracher les cheveux rien qu'en voyant les fautes.
voici le texte :
In the life of ninety-five years , a man who was Silas .He had a lot of time and he became a gravedigger . He had for company except birds. A day of may , during the spring who was dry and cold , he was digging when he decided drink and eat .After have dinner he slept for fifteen or twenty minutes. When he wake up and in front him .a woman who had a umbrella was upright .but it wasn’t a woman but a female .The female was irritated on her because he didn’t have respect of death . Silas left him for five minutes. Then he returned near the female and said to him good afternoon. The female wasn’t satisfied , even if he left , because his disrespectful behaviour . She asked why Silas drunk here. Silas explained that it wasn’t the beer but a cold tea. The female tasted the drink and it was good a cold tea. The female was afraid because she was young. Silas convince that she appeared a woman of twenty years. After a moment of discussion ,the female stopped looking like a female and became a woman .Then she asked if it was a long fight to stopping the drink. For that Silas told his story .He told that he was born the hungry time and the eat and the drink was very but very bad . there were a lot of disease .In the time , there was that beer and it was for that that it was a long fight . He continued and explained that he had to tea. A summer tea with a little alcohol and a winter tea with nearly a cupful .For the moment , he drank the winter tea because these days are cold. After have tell the story , he shook his hands and her , and said good afternoon. A little time after he was in the gare station .He saw a woman who had a umbrella and who told everywhere that she met a good man.
JE remercie tout ceux qui m'aideront dans cette lourde tâche .Merci beaucoup
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Modifié par bridg le 05-11-2006 15:55
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Réponse: Résumé de livre / correction de naflnija, postée le 05-11-2006 à 16:33:25 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je ne suis pas bonne en anglais mais je vais essayer de t'aider un peu, au moins pour la première partie. Je crois que tu pourrais dire :
By a dry and cold day of may,at the age of ninety-five, Silas a gravedigger who has no compagny but birds, decided after lunch to have a rest. When he woke up after a twenty minutes nap or so, he saw above of him, a woman with an umbrella.
Bonne continuation
Réponse: Résumé de livre / correction de darkspirit89, postée le 05-11-2006 à 17:08:07 (S | E)
merci beaucoup j'ai vu et votre texte paraît beaucoup plus anglais que le mien.Si d'autres personnes veulent corriger ils sont les bienvenues et je les remercient d'avance.
Réponse: Résumé de livre / correction de pyan, postée le 05-11-2006 à 17:33:30 (S | E)
I tried to do some corrections on the first few sentences. What is the difference between a "female" and a "woman"?
In his ninety-five years of life Silas had a lot of time and became a gravedigger. He had no company except the birds. One day in May, during the cold, dry spring, he was digging when he decided to eat and drink. After he had had his dinner he slept for fifteen or twenty minutes. When he woke up there was a womon standing in front of him. It was a woman with an umbrella ...
I hope this is some help. I cannot correct the rest because I cannot understand it very well.
Good luck
Pyan
Réponse: Résumé de livre / correction de darkspirit89, postée le 05-11-2006 à 20:58:35 (S | E)
merci beaucoup
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