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Condition féminine (correction)
Message de joy06 posté le 05-11-2007 à 21:45:38 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Est-ce quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger ce texte svp s'il vous plaît. D'avance merci
It has often been said that the 21st century will be the century of the women.
The condition of the woman has evolved since the beginning of the century, in particular for these last fifteen years as regards marriage, work and education. In fact, which allowed this Women's Liberation it‘s the possibility of making studies and consequently to be able to work and to be independent and free without discrimination. Moreover contraception played a large role compared with marriage and gave more freedom to the women. Moreover, the majority at 18 years has also contributed to the evolution of the woman in their lifestyle choices. To conclude, we can say that nowadays. Finally we can say that nowadays it s old fashioned to think that women must stays at home for look after her husband and her children in a restricted world because the woman became on equal footing with the man, she studies, works, chooses her life, and leaves his parents to live her life freely.
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Modifié par bridg le 05-11-2007 21:47
Message de joy06 posté le 05-11-2007 à 21:45:38 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour.
Est-ce quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger ce texte
It has often been said that the 21st century will be the century of the women.
The condition of the woman has evolved since the beginning of the century, in particular for these last fifteen years as regards marriage, work and education. In fact, which allowed this Women's Liberation it‘s the possibility of making studies and consequently to be able to work and to be independent and free without discrimination. Moreover contraception played a large role compared with marriage and gave more freedom to the women. Moreover, the majority at 18 years has also contributed to the evolution of the woman in their lifestyle choices. To conclude, we can say that nowadays. Finally we can say that nowadays it s old fashioned to think that women must stays at home for look after her husband and her children in a restricted world because the woman became on equal footing with the man, she studies, works, chooses her life, and leaves his parents to live her life freely.
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Modifié par bridg le 05-11-2007 21:47
Réponse: Condition féminine (correction) de TravisKidd, postée le 06-11-2007 à 01:58:18 (S | E)
D'abord, choisir entre "the woman" et "women". Les deux sont valables (on peut parler au singulier de "the woman" qui représente toutes les femmes) mais il faut choisir l'un ou l'autre et ne pas mélanger les deux.
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