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Message de alynia posté le 24-11-2008 à 18:51:27 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Je commence(s) l'anglais.
Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes s'il vous plait .
Je racontes un week-end ^^.

Saturday I went to the dance.
We prepare the regional contest with a group.
We did a choreography with my teacher.
After I went to the cinema with a friend
Because other friends prepared the food the decoration for a birthday surprised.
Well we saw the duchess.
This history speaks about a woman Georgiana who marries a man but he doesn’t’ like she. He wants just a son but she has just girls.
She has a horrible life.
It’s a splendid film but it’s sad.
After the cinema we drunk a coffee
And I ran to arrive before she in his house for the surprise….
It’s a fabulous week.

Merci.

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Réponse: Lettre/ weekend de linsey34, postée le 24-11-2008 à 23:09:15 (S | E)
Dear alynia,

tu racontes ton week-end qui est terminé donc mets tous tes verbes au prétérit.

On Saturday I went to the dance.
I had a dance class on Saturday.

We prepare the regional contest with a group.
prepared
We did a choreography with my teacher.
After I went to the cinema with a friend
Because other friends prepared the food and the decoration for a birthday surprised.
were preparing

Well we saw the duchess.
This history film speaks about a woman Georgiana who marries a man but he doesn’t’ like she. her
He wants just a son but she has just girls.
He only wants a son but she only has girls.
She has a horrible life.
It’s a splendid film but it’s sad.
After the cinema we drunk drank a coffee
And I ran to arrive before she her in his her ? house for the surprise….
It’s a fabulous week.
It was a fabulous week-end!

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Réponse: Lettre/ weekend de alynia, postée le 25-11-2008 à 18:40:01 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup ^^

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