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Correction dialogue/read the letter
Message de kris51 posté le 11-01-2009 à 20:13:23 (S | E | F)
bonjour

pourriez vous m'aider pour corriger ce dialogue svp j'ai beaucoup de mal en anglais. merci

Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter they are very touched to see that she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .the scene takes place in the dining room.
-Haibinh you can come one minute have would like to speak to you.
-Yes one minute I come.
-We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched a lot us.
-I think everything that I wrote inside for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
-Thank you it very pleased us that you speaks to us about it continuous so to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We too love you


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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-01-2009 21:31
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Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 21:03:28 (S | E)
Bonsoir voici mon approche merci de vérifier
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter they are very touched to see that she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .the scene takes place in the dining room.
-Haibinh you can come one minute have would like to speak to you.
-Yes one minute I come.
-We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched a lot us.
-I think everything that I wrote inside for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
-Thank you it very pleased us that you speaks to us about it continuous so to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We too love you
il manque l'outil de coordination
on dit pas that
ou est la majuscule?
vérifier le conjugaison de verbe
ou est l'inversion de sujet c'est un question nom??
come for one...
ou est le sujet??
il manque l'outil de coordination
tu sa déjà dis we
c'est mal placé "us"
réviser cette phrase
very enlève cet mot
vérifier la conjugaison de verbe
j'ai pas compris la dernière partie de la phrase.
c'est mal placé too
Tu dois refaire ta rédaction a la lumière de cette correction.
Bonne chance.

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Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de kris51, postée le 11-01-2009 à 21:28:02 (S | E)
merco beaucoup pour cette reponse rapide je viens de coriger les points que vous m'avez mentionné mais je n'est reussi a tous les corriger.

Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene takes place in the dining room.
Haibinh you can come for one minute have we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute I come.
We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.

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Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 22:08:33 (S | E)
D'accord.
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see she contains. They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene takes place in the dining room.
Haibinh you can come for one minute have we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute I come.
We have just read your letter with your father and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well.
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
ils sont très touchés de voire qu'est ce qu'elle contient, là tu dois trouver l'équivalent de "qu'est ce qu'elle"
le verbe doit etre au passé
encore, ou est l'inversion tu place le verbe avant le sujet
enleve have
enlève 'I come' et garde le reste
speak with
stp tu as déja dis 'we' tu n'as rein pour repeter "with your father"
il manque une proposition aprés think aussi il ya for juste apres alors le vebre doit etre conjugué au present perfect
Voilà.Corriges toi et je suis la.

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Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de kris51, postée le 11-01-2009 à 22:28:39 (S | E)
encore merci pour votre nouvelle reponse voila ma correction

Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see that what she contain They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene took place in the dining room.
Haibinh can you come for one minute we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute
We have just read your letter and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.

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Réponse: Correction dialogue/read the letter de azer3, postée le 11-01-2009 à 23:08:39 (S | E)
Voyons alors.
Haibinh’s parents have just read the letter and they are very touched to see that what she contain They decid to call Haibninh to speak with him .The scene took place in the dining room.
Haibinh can you come for one minute we would like to speak to you.
Yes one minute
We have just read your letter and we want to thank you because it touched us a lot.
I think everything that I wrote inside the letter for a long time but I had never taken time to say it to you.
Thank you it pleased us that you speaks to us about it Continue to work well
-Yes I am going to continue I love you
-We love you too.
what she...
ajoute le s de present pour contains
speak with
ou est le present perfect ou est la proposition après think?
Voilà.

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