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Message de ghost04 posté le 05-02-2009 à 22:06:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, voici mon expression d'anglais, je sais que je n'ai pas un bon niveau, mais accepteriez de me corriger le plus gros de mes fautes, vous remerciant par avance.
Saturday morning, Eddy was go in home from outside late yesterday evening. His parents are angry.
You goes home late yesterday evening, where were you? Ask his mother.
I was at the bar with Jack and Richard ! Answer he
Have you drunk alcohol ?
Yes, i have drunk two Beer !
Oh my god ! Are you crasy ?
Why this question ?
This is not an age for drinking alcohol !
There is no age for give pleasure.
Alcohol is very dangerous !
And then ?
So i don't agree that you drink this,
I don't need your agreement !
You're under my responsibity, you must obey me, I'm your mother !
I do what i want !!!
STOP ! I heard enough ! Listen your mother. It's the last time that you drink alcohol. Howl his father. And henceforth, you will not leave any more with Jack and Richard,
Why ? Protest he
Because they are not good frequentations,
They are my friends ! You cannot prevent me from seeing them,
If you frequent them again, You will not go on holiday at Barcelone this summer !
You can't do that to me !
I'm your father, and, as you say, I do what I want,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2009 10:45
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Message de ghost04 posté le 05-02-2009 à 22:06:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous, voici mon expression d'anglais, je sais que je n'ai pas un bon niveau, mais accepteriez de me corriger le plus gros de mes fautes, vous remerciant par avance.
Saturday morning, Eddy was go in home from outside late yesterday evening. His parents are angry.
You goes home late yesterday evening, where were you? Ask his mother.
I was at the bar with Jack and Richard ! Answer he
Have you drunk alcohol ?
Yes, i have drunk two Beer !
Oh my god ! Are you crasy ?
Why this question ?
This is not an age for drinking alcohol !
There is no age for give pleasure.
Alcohol is very dangerous !
And then ?
So i don't agree that you drink this,
I don't need your agreement !
You're under my responsibity, you must obey me, I'm your mother !
I do what i want !!!
STOP ! I heard enough ! Listen your mother. It's the last time that you drink alcohol. Howl his father. And henceforth, you will not leave any more with Jack and Richard,
Why ? Protest he
Because they are not good frequentations,
They are my friends ! You cannot prevent me from seeing them,
If you frequent them again, You will not go on holiday at Barcelone this summer !
You can't do that to me !
I'm your father, and, as you say, I do what I want,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2009 10:45
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Réponse: Expression anglaise de linsey34, postée le 06-02-2009 à 09:11:59 (S | E)
Dear ghost04,
en rouge les erreurs à corriger:
Saturday morning, Eddy was go in home from outside late yesterday evening. His parents are angry.
trop de mot à mot, phrase à reformuler
You goes home late yesterday evening, where were you? Ask his mother.
tu confonds go et come
"his mother" 3° personne du singulier
contrairement au français, on n'inverse pas sujet/verbe
I was at the bar with Jack and Richard ! Answer he
idem: 3° personne du singulier et inversement sujet/verbe
Have you drunk alcohol ?
Pourquoi utiliser le present perfect ici??
Yes, i have drunk two Beer !
jamais "i" mais toujours "I"
temps à changer
beer est au pluriel !
Oh my god ! Are you crasy ?
orthographe
Why this question ?
Question à reformuler
This is not an age for drinking alcohol !
There is no age for give pleasure.
Alcohol is very dangerous !
And then ?
So i don't agree that you drink this,
I don't need your agreement !
You're under my responsibity, you must obey me, I'm your mother !
I do what i want !!!
STOP ! I heard enough ! Listen to your mother. It's the last time that you drink alcohol. Howl his father. And henceforth, you will not leave any more with Jack and Richard,
Why ? Protest he
Because they are not good frequentations,
They are my friends ! You cannot prevent me from seeing them,
If you frequent them again, You will not go on holiday at Barcelone this summer !
You can't do that to me !
I'm your father, and, as you say, I do what I want,
Réponse: Expression anglaise de ghost04, postée le 06-02-2009 à 16:34:56 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup linsey34, ton aide me sera précieuse
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