Bonjour

To begin, Facebook is a Web site which gather/conjugue ce verbe au présent/ people close or unknow/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/, in priority in the Anglo-Saxon countries. (Unites States, Autralie/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/, Canada)
It's the firth we/je crois que tu viens de dire web nom?/ site the/inutile de mettre le "the"/ most visited in the world. Facebook was born in Harvard in februar/vérifie de point de vue orthographe/ 2004 by marck zuckerberd/ou le majuscule?/, 19 years old at this time:/point/ on the beginning it was a closed social network for the Harvards/ça manque quelque chose juste entre le "d" et le "s" students before becoming accessible on/to/ the other American universities. The we site is open for whowever/on dit pas "whowever" vérifie/ he wants since september/ou le majuscule?/ 2006.
The fourth of october/ou le majuscule?/ 2008, Facebook announces/ça se conjugue au passé/ that he will established his seat international at dublin.
Why it's called Facebook ?
Because it's the name given to the photographs book which gathers/c'est le passé/ all the students photograph and distribut/c'est le passé/ on the end of the year to the student/nom c'est pas ça/.
Now, what is the advantage of facebook ?
First, Facebooks users are allow to enter personal information about a lot of things : for example the/their/ studies, the/de même/ religion or his/de même/ politic opinion which enables to find personn/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ who have the same point of view. This personn/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ cam/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ also form a group and invite other personns/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/. In the language Facebook, this personn/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ are friends and share automatically all the multimedia documents/ that/they published.
On the first page, Facebooks users see a list of their friend/s/, a list of friends that they have in commun/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ with their friends/??/, a list of the group which the user beling/l/, a "mini feed" which summarize/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe et conjugaison/ the last event concerning the suer and thier/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ friends and a "wall" which enables the friends users to write a little message.
Since april 2008, a chat has open in order to annnonce/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ at their friends that they are connect/ça manque quelque chose a la fin/.
But as all the good things, Facebook has negatives points not negligible/s/.
Since his creation, Facebook is/c'est le present perfect/ the object of debate. Indeed, the package uses the personnal information to introduce advertisement which correspond on our description and Facebook sell the users personnal information on/vérifier cette proposition/ private compagny. Moreover, the users information are collected too by facebook in order to improve the website.
When you are registered, Facebook consider/s/ that they have the right to use all our information and the right to archive them.
The consequences are that the information which are published of/on dit pas of/ facebook can be read and use/d/ from/on dit pas from/ personn. Maybe you don't want that his personn see them.
For example, some compagny use Facebook to see the private life of his employee/on dit pas employee/ and some parents use facebook to supervise their childrens/'s/ life.
Electronic frontier foundation or privacy international lute againt/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ this intrusion and try yo protect the private life. They are anxious of/on dit pas anxious of/ the consequences. Facebooks users aren't necesserly/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ conscious of the danger. In America even the representatives of authority can show the personnal information.

To illustrate what i/I/ said I will you/aprés show/ show a video :
I will attract your attention of the consequence that can have facebook of your future life: a lot of teeneger/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ are already fall into this trap.

To finish, i will you communicate some numbers
In france, according to "Le Figaro" Facebook attracted 3.6 millions visitors between 2007 and 2008.
However, more and more users erase thiers/vérifie ce mot de point de vue orthographe/ profile. The 4th of january 2009, a website estimate 7 millions french are facebooks users.
France is then one of the fist country which have the most users. Facebook has become the first sozialisation website with 150 millions users in the world. Moreover the audiance has double in 2008.

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