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Message de ellyas posté le 03-04-2010 à 23:22:46
pourriez vous me corriger ma description merci
will smith was born on September 25th, 1968 in Philadelphia in Pennsylvania in the United States
He is actor, compositor, and singer nowadays. It is enthralled by its job and very hardworking and the producers say qu 'il am easy to lead, to aim. Will smith is very famous .smtih will is afro - americain; it has the brown hair and lesson, eyes horse chestnuts and big he measures 1 metre 90. One hurts, sports, develops muscles of it, furthermore it carries jewellery as curls d 'oreilles, what gives him a nice and appealing side.
the women say about him qu 'il is appealing, c 'est a famous, cheerful man and he parried genuine and sincere, he is also very popular and liked, he is bridegroom and father of three children with whom c 'est a soft, cheerful, marvellous father, and brilliant.
i like this actor for this he represents and his model of success but especially for its kindness and its inttéligence, it everything for all films is polished, nice, simple, direct, and loyable but by top turned which have had a lot of successes thanks to his talent d 'acteur and also of singer. Lamar odom was born November 6th, 1979 in jamaique, he is players of basketball in NBA in l 'équipe of nowadays " los angoles lakers ", he is enthralled by his job and he is very famous.
Lamar odom is a jamaiquain, he is bald, eyes horse chestnuts and very big he measures 2 muscular, sports metres 08 .Très but also very rude and poor players.
it is a man famous, but very malicious contrary to smith will.
don’t like not this player of basketball because he n 'est not artful, he is very baet he plays of los angoles lakers .He play in professional then qu 'il n 'a not his place in l 'équipe has a cractère testy and very égoiste on the ground
merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 03-04-2010 23:46
Dites-vous que nous n'aidons que les membres qui ne se moquent pas de nous et qui ont réellement envie de travailler.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2010 07:19
Topic fermé.
Message de ellyas posté le 03-04-2010 à 23:22:46
pourriez vous me corriger ma description merci
will smith was born on September 25th, 1968 in Philadelphia in Pennsylvania in the United States
He is actor, compositor, and singer nowadays. It is enthralled by its job and very hardworking and the producers say qu 'il am easy to lead, to aim. Will smith is very famous .smtih will is afro - americain; it has the brown hair and lesson, eyes horse chestnuts and big he measures 1 metre 90. One hurts, sports, develops muscles of it, furthermore it carries jewellery as curls d 'oreilles, what gives him a nice and appealing side.
the women say about him qu 'il is appealing, c 'est a famous, cheerful man and he parried genuine and sincere, he is also very popular and liked, he is bridegroom and father of three children with whom c 'est a soft, cheerful, marvellous father, and brilliant.
i like this actor for this he represents and his model of success but especially for its kindness and its inttéligence, it everything for all films is polished, nice, simple, direct, and loyable but by top turned which have had a lot of successes thanks to his talent d 'acteur and also of singer. Lamar odom was born November 6th, 1979 in jamaique, he is players of basketball in NBA in l 'équipe of nowadays " los angoles lakers ", he is enthralled by his job and he is very famous.
Lamar odom is a jamaiquain, he is bald, eyes horse chestnuts and very big he measures 2 muscular, sports metres 08 .Très but also very rude and poor players.
it is a man famous, but very malicious contrary to smith will.
don’t like not this player of basketball because he n 'est not artful, he is very baet he plays of los angoles lakers .He play in professional then qu 'il n 'a not his place in l 'équipe has a cractère testy and very égoiste on the ground
merci d'avance
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Modifié par bridg le 03-04-2010 23:46
Dites-vous que nous n'aidons que les membres qui ne se moquent pas de nous et qui ont réellement envie de travailler.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 04-04-2010 07:19
Topic fermé.
Réponse: Description de lamy, postée le 03-04-2010 à 23:37:33
bonsoir
Un peu gonflée, la demande ! J'ai l'impression que vous avez fait une traduction au moyen d'un dictionnaire en ligne et que vous n'avez même pas relu la réponse. Il y a encore des mots français dans le texte...
Bon travail.
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Modifié par lamy le 03-04-2010 23:39
Réponse: Description de lucile83, postée le 04-04-2010 à 07:28:35
Bonjour ellyas,
Vous avez déjà posté votre demande ici:
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et vous avez eu une réponse de prescott qui vous incitait à corriger votre texte français,ce qui ne semble pas vous convenir puisque vous avez reposté 2 fois votre sujet dont un que j'ai supprimé pour cause de double emploi, mais vous ne lisez pas vos messages.
Quand vous serez décidé à travailler sérieusement vous nous proposerez une traduction personnelle.
Merci de votre compréhension.
Cordialement.
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