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Message de cordoba posté le 05-06-2011 à 17:43:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici un petit exercice que j'ai essayé de faire; si vous pouviez me corriger s'il vous plait! Merci d'avance.
Rephrase the sentences using the prompts:
1. Please don't shout like that.
I wish ...
2. I didn't take your advice. It was a mistake.
I wish...
3. They had planned to visit us, but Mary fell ill.
If Mary ...
4. It is necessary for children to learn good manners.
It is necessary that ...
5. If I hadn't met you, I wouldn't have known about his arrival.
Had ...
6. The court ordered the prisoner to be shot at dawn.
The court ordered that...
7. If you don't stop smoking, you'll have a lung cancer.
Unless...
8.She hated coffee but she drank it to get warm.
Despite...
9. Would you like to go to Rome in September.
How...
10. Hardly had I my car repaired before it broke down again.
No...
11. I regret going to the party yesterday.
If only...
Mes réponses:
1/ I wish he would stop shouting like that.
2/ I wish I wouldn't take your advice.
3/ If Mary didn't fall ill, they would had planned to visit us.
4/It is necessary that children learn good manners.
5/ Had ???
6/The court ordered that the prisoner has to be shot at dawn.
7/Unless you stop smoking, you'll have a lung cancer.
8/Despite hating coffee, she drank it to get warm.
9/How about going to Rome in September?
10/No... (là j'avoue que je ne vois pas vraiment comment tourner ma phrase)
11/If only I didn't go to the party yesterday.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-06-2011 18:21
Message de cordoba posté le 05-06-2011 à 17:43:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici un petit exercice que j'ai essayé de faire; si vous pouviez me corriger s'il vous plait! Merci d'avance.
Rephrase the sentences using the prompts:
1. Please don't shout like that.
I wish ...
2. I didn't take your advice. It was a mistake.
I wish...
3. They had planned to visit us, but Mary fell ill.
If Mary ...
4. It is necessary for children to learn good manners.
It is necessary that ...
5. If I hadn't met you, I wouldn't have known about his arrival.
Had ...
6. The court ordered the prisoner to be shot at dawn.
The court ordered that...
7. If you don't stop smoking, you'll have a lung cancer.
Unless...
8.She hated coffee but she drank it to get warm.
Despite...
9. Would you like to go to Rome in September.
How...
10. Hardly had I my car repaired before it broke down again.
No...
11. I regret going to the party yesterday.
If only...
Mes réponses:
1/ I wish he would stop shouting like that.
2/ I wish I wouldn't take your advice.
3/ If Mary didn't fall ill, they would had planned to visit us.
4/It is necessary that children learn good manners.
5/ Had ???
6/The court ordered that the prisoner has to be shot at dawn.
7/Unless you stop smoking, you'll have a lung cancer.
8/Despite hating coffee, she drank it to get warm.
9/How about going to Rome in September?
10/No... (là j'avoue que je ne vois pas vraiment comment tourner ma phrase)
11/If only I didn't go to the party yesterday.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-06-2011 18:21
Réponse: Phrases /correction de headway, postée le 05-06-2011 à 17:57:14 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Voici une première correction:
"...Mes réponses:
1/ I wish he would stop shouting like that.Pourquoi changer le pronom?
2/ I wish I wouldn't take your advice.Il faut exprimer un regret.
3/ If Mary didn't fall ill, they would had planned to visit us.Reprenez la construction de la phrase #5.
4/It is necessary that children il manque un mot learn good manners.
5/ Had ???
6/The court ordered that the prisoner has to be shot at dawn.incorrect
7/Unless you stop smoking, you'll have a lung cancer.(Je demande confirmation mais il me semble qu'on dit: to have cancer/to have lung cancer/to be diagnosed with lung cancer...?)Phrase cependant correcte.
Je laisse la main pour le moment.
A plus tard.
Headway.
Réponse: Phrases /correction de willy, postée le 05-06-2011 à 18:11:23 (S | E)
Hello!
10. No sooner ...
11. Revoir le verbe et le temps. = français.
Réponse: Phrases /correction de cordoba, postée le 05-06-2011 à 18:11:31 (S | E)
Merci pour votre réponse, oui effectivement c'est to have lung cancer c'est moi qui me suis trompée ;)
1/ I wish you would stop shouting like that.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 05-06-2011 18:24
Réponse: Phrases /correction de cordoba, postée le 05-06-2011 à 18:18:40 (S | E)
2/ I wish I had taken your advice ...?
3/If Mary hadn't fallen ill, they would had planned to visit us
10/ No sooner I had my car repaired, it will broke down again ...?
Réponse: Phrases /correction de headway, postée le 05-06-2011 à 18:22:04 (S | E)
Re-bonjour,
Après "no sooner", il faut inverser le sujet et le verbe ;)
Headway.
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Modifié par headway le 05-06-2011 18:23
No sooner..., than...
Pourquoi avoir rajouté "will"?
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Modifié par headway le 05-06-2011 18:24
Réponse: Phrases /correction de notrepere, postée le 05-06-2011 à 18:29:11 (S | E)
Hello#2 I wish + subject + past perfect ...
It is necessary that children learn good manners.
It is necessary that children should learn good manners.
Sans "a" avant "lung cancer".
Modestement
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Modifié par notrepere le 05-06-2011 21:57
According to the articles below, the subjunctive has been all but eliminated from British English except for "if I were" and some formal writing. I keep forgetting about this difference.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-06-2011 06:00
La 4 est correcte avec 'learn' ou 'should learn' ,que ce soit en AE ou en BE.
Réponse: Phrases /correction de headway, postée le 05-06-2011 à 20:12:59 (S | E)
A notrepère: je pensais qu'on disait: It is necessary that children should learn... My mistake si je me suis trompée
Bonne soirée.
Headway.
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Modifié par headway le 05-06-2011 20:13
Réponse: Phrases /correction de lucile83, postée le 05-06-2011 à 20:52:56 (S | E)
Hello,
4/It is necessary that children learn good manners.
ici learn est au subjonctif,forme de l'infinitif ,ce qui est moins courant en BE qu'en AE.
It is important/necessary that she write that letter.
He requested that his secretary be present at the meeting.
Should peut être employé bien sûr.
Réponse: Phrases /correction de willy, postée le 06-06-2011 à 06:48:29 (S | E)
Hello!
11 : correction ?
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