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Message de chou12 posté le 27-05-2012 à 14:28:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
Je suis étudiante en BTS Négociation Relation Client et j'ai mon épreuve à l'oral d'anglais cette semaine ( eh oui je m'y prends très tard....)
J'ai réalisé un premier rapport de stage corrigé ou presque par ma prof mais le souci c'est qu'à mon oral blanc elle m'a dit en gros que cela n'avait pas de sens...
Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me dire donc ci cela est compréhensible au final ? Et corriger les fautes si besoin ?
Merci pour votre aide
Voici mon rapport traduit en anglais et globalement déjà corrigé :
My name is …., I am a student in … during my 2 yaer course, I had to make a 16 week work placement.
The name of the firm, where I did my work placement, is "....." . It’s a company providing service. It was created by "......" , the only employee in two thousand and ten (2010). It is situated in "....." , more precisely in "......" The main activity of this company is to support the commercial of firms to make better results. "....." worked with “La Dépêche du Midi”, an important newspaper and with “Garden centre”.
During my work placement, I worked for La Depêche du Midi during three months (3).
I had to prospect people and companies to suggest subscriptions to the newspaper. Also I was responsible for training students to the different types of subscriptions, along with my tutor, during commercial animations in shops.
I was satisfied because the students were very attentive during the formation (à verifier) and very efficient. However, it was a failure with the persons because I have more and more dishonest commercial so it was very difficult for me to suggest subscriptions to the newspaper.
I was working nine (9) hours a day.
Personally, tanks to this work placement, I’m more tenacious during the talks with people and companies. I’m less shy and stressed out. So it was rewarding because I benefitted from this experience.
But I was disappointed because It’s a very difficult and tiring job. It has enabled me to realize I had made the wrong choice for my work placement and my professional orientation. It has convinced me to continue my studies in professional licence in bank insurance. I’m very curious to discover this profession, particularly in the bank sector because I think it’s very interesting to advise customers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-05-2012 14:32
Message de chou12 posté le 27-05-2012 à 14:28:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous
Je suis étudiante en BTS Négociation Relation Client et j'ai mon épreuve à l'oral d'anglais cette semaine ( eh oui je m'y prends très tard....)
J'ai réalisé un premier rapport de stage corrigé ou presque par ma prof mais le souci c'est qu'à mon oral blanc elle m'a dit en gros que cela n'avait pas de sens...
Pouvez-vous s'il vous plaît me dire donc ci cela est compréhensible au final ? Et corriger les fautes si besoin ?
Merci pour votre aide
Voici mon rapport traduit en anglais et globalement déjà corrigé :
My name is …., I am a student in … during my 2 yaer course, I had to make a 16 week work placement.
The name of the firm, where I did my work placement, is "....." . It’s a company providing service. It was created by "......" , the only employee in two thousand and ten (2010). It is situated in "....." , more precisely in "......" The main activity of this company is to support the commercial of firms to make better results. "....." worked with “La Dépêche du Midi”, an important newspaper and with “Garden centre”.
During my work placement, I worked for La Depêche du Midi during three months (3).
I had to prospect people and companies to suggest subscriptions to the newspaper. Also I was responsible for training students to the different types of subscriptions, along with my tutor, during commercial animations in shops.
I was satisfied because the students were very attentive during the formation (à verifier) and very efficient. However, it was a failure with the persons because I have more and more dishonest commercial so it was very difficult for me to suggest subscriptions to the newspaper.
I was working nine (9) hours a day.
Personally, tanks to this work placement, I’m more tenacious during the talks with people and companies. I’m less shy and stressed out. So it was rewarding because I benefitted from this experience.
But I was disappointed because It’s a very difficult and tiring job. It has enabled me to realize I had made the wrong choice for my work placement and my professional orientation. It has convinced me to continue my studies in professional licence in bank insurance. I’m very curious to discover this profession, particularly in the bank sector because I think it’s very interesting to advise customers.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-05-2012 14:32
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