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Message de car22 posté le 30-09-2012 à 22:45:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide car j'ai une image à décrire.
J'aimerais que quelq'un puisse me corriger s'il y a des erreurs.
Merci d'avance pour l'aide.
This document is a drawing. It was drawn by Palmer, a peinter.The document about the attack of September 11th, 2001 in New York. It praises the intervention a firemans and policemans this day there. It represents
We can see that the draftsman ,this is served of different contrasts. Behind , he used bright colors to highlight the two men and the flag . In front of, it is a close-up, we can see two men, there are a policeman and a fireman. They have a fixed and neutral look. Behind them, there is the American flag with bright colours ,which symbolizes the nation they serve.
To the right and to the left, we can see three firefighters one of them holds a child in her arms, and another holds a fire hose to extinguish fire.et two policemen. It shows the different work of this men :rescue and help.
In the foreground,you can see buildings in flames and destroyed. And lots of firefighter clear away the rubble, of buldings.
The aim of the draftsman is to show devotion, the courage of these men. Who are sacrificed to help the victims of the attack. And He wants to emphasize that these men are somehow heroes, and that many of these men are dead. The draftsman wanted to make a tribute to all those men who are gave their lives to be saved others.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2012 22:56
Message de car22 posté le 30-09-2012 à 22:45:49 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide car j'ai une image à décrire.
J'aimerais que quelq'un puisse me corriger s'il y a des erreurs.
Merci d'avance pour l'aide.
This document is a drawing. It was drawn by Palmer, a peinter.The document about the attack of September 11th, 2001 in New York. It praises the intervention a firemans and policemans this day there. It represents
We can see that the draftsman ,this is served of different contrasts. Behind , he used bright colors to highlight the two men and the flag . In front of, it is a close-up, we can see two men, there are a policeman and a fireman. They have a fixed and neutral look. Behind them, there is the American flag with bright colours ,which symbolizes the nation they serve.
To the right and to the left, we can see three firefighters one of them holds a child in her arms, and another holds a fire hose to extinguish fire.et two policemen. It shows the different work of this men :rescue and help.
In the foreground,you can see buildings in flames and destroyed. And lots of firefighter clear away the rubble, of buldings.
The aim of the draftsman is to show devotion, the courage of these men. Who are sacrificed to help the victims of the attack. And He wants to emphasize that these men are somehow heroes, and that many of these men are dead. The draftsman wanted to make a tribute to all those men who are gave their lives to be saved others.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-09-2012 22:56
Réponse: Vérification /image de gerondif, postée le 30-09-2012 à 23:35:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
vous devriez traduire par vous-même plutôt qu'avec des traducteurs automatiques qui ne réfléchissent pas(1) ou reproduisent vos erreurs en français(2);
exemple 01: "ce jour là" traduit par "this day there" qui ne va pas.(man fait men au pluriel)
exemple 2: On peut voir que le dessinateur c'est (au lieu de "s'est")servi de différents contrastes:
We can see that the draftsman ,this is served of different contrasts.(se servir de c'est "to use" pas "to serve oneself of")
This document is a drawing. It was drawn by Palmer, a peinter.The document(verbe) about the attack of September 11th, 2001 in New York. It praises the intervention a firemans and policemans this day there. It represents ..........
We can see that the draftsman ,this is served of different contrasts. Behind , he used bright colors to highlight the two men and the flag . In front of, it is a close-up, we can see two men, there are a policeman and a fireman. They have a fixed and neutral look. Behind them, there is the American flag with bright colours ,which symbolizes the nation they serve.
To the right and to the left, we can see three firefighters one of them holds a child in her arms, and another holds a fire hose to extinguish fire.et two policemen. It shows the different work of this (pluriel)men :rescue and help.
In the foreground,you can see buildings in flames and destroyed. And lots of firefighter(pluriel) clear away the rubble, of buldings.
The aim of the draftsman is to show the devotion, the courage of these men. Who (sont sacrifiés ou se sont sacrifiés)are sacrificed to help the victims of the attack. And He wants to emphasize that these men are somehow heroes, and that many of these men are dead. The draftsman wanted to make a tribute to all those men who are gave (des hommes qui sont donnèrent leurs vies)their lives to be saved others (pour être sauvés d'autres??).
Réponse: Vérification /image de car22, postée le 01-10-2012 à 19:13:14 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de me répondre; lorsque j'ai fait cette description j’admets avoir utilisé le traducteur.
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Merci.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-10-2012 20:52
La suite sans ponctuation et remplie de fautes a été effacée car c'était incompréhensible.
Réponse: Vérification /image de car22, postée le 01-10-2012 à 21:43:12 (S | E)
Je n'ai pas compris, ce que vous vouliez dire.
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