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Message de desdehace posté le 26-01-2014 à 19:23:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Pourriez-vous corriger ces quelques phrases, s'ils vous plait ?
Merci d'avance, bonne soirée.
Dear diary,
A few days ago, I was in Washington D.C and I had to attend a garden-party organized by Sir David Manning, the British ambassador. The party was very fancy, and quite intimate. Sir David introduced me to Sally Bedell Smith, an American historian as well as her husband Stephen, who, from what I heard, work for some newspaper.
I tried to be distant, you know how much I hate journalists. Nevertheless, he intended to be nice to me, and he broke the protocol twice. Anyway, I didn't point his mistakes as he was talking about races and horses. You know, being a queen isn't easy every day. I must always watch my words and attitude. Anyway, our conversation dealt about the Kentucky Derby, especially the victory of Street Sense. This race was phenomenal, and I enjoyed speaking about something I truly like, without being judged or tested. Even if I am honoured to be the Queen of England, I wish sometimes I could be my real self. During the whole party, I went back and forth, to prolong this nice discussion and replay the race over and over.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2014 20:16
Message de desdehace posté le 26-01-2014 à 19:23:34 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Pourriez-vous corriger ces quelques phrases, s'ils vous plait ?
Merci d'avance, bonne soirée.
Dear diary,
A few days ago, I was in Washington D.C and I had to attend a garden-party organized by Sir David Manning, the British ambassador. The party was very fancy, and quite intimate. Sir David introduced me to Sally Bedell Smith, an American historian as well as her husband Stephen, who, from what I heard, work for some newspaper.
I tried to be distant, you know how much I hate journalists. Nevertheless, he intended to be nice to me, and he broke the protocol twice. Anyway, I didn't point his mistakes as he was talking about races and horses. You know, being a queen isn't easy every day. I must always watch my words and attitude. Anyway, our conversation dealt about the Kentucky Derby, especially the victory of Street Sense. This race was phenomenal, and I enjoyed speaking about something I truly like, without being judged or tested. Even if I am honoured to be the Queen of England, I wish sometimes I could be my real self. During the whole party, I went back and forth, to prolong this nice discussion and replay the race over and over.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2014 20:16
Réponse: Diary /correction de gerondif, postée le 26-01-2014 à 19:34:22 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
A few days ago, I was in Washington D.C and I had to attend a garden-party organized by Sir David Manning, the British ambassador. The party was very fancy, and quite intimate. Sir David introduced me to Sally Bedell Smith, an American historian as well as to her husband Stephen, who, from what I heard, works for some newspaper.
I tried to be distant, you know how much I hate journalists. Nevertheless, he intended to be nice to me, and he broke the protocol twice. Anyway, I didn't point (transitif? j'aurais mis point to) his mistakes as he was talking about races and horses. You know, being a queen isn't easy every day. I must always watch my words and attitude. Anyway, our conversation dealt about the Kentucky Derby, especially the victory of Street Sense. This race was phenomenal, and I enjoyed speaking about something I truly like, without being judged or tested. Even if I am honoured to be the Queen of England, I sometimes wish I could be my real self. During the whole party, I went back and forth, to prolong this nice discussion and replay the race over and over.
Réponse: Diary /correction de desdehace, postée le 26-01-2014 à 19:37:12 (S | E)
Thanks a lot for this really fast answer.
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