Correction/The Crows

Correction/The Crows
Message de speediz posté le 09-03-2015 à 20:12:25 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
Pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes de grammaire, d'orthographe svp s'il vous plait ^^
Merci pour vos réponses.

The Crows
The Crows, called Ravens belong to the linguistic branch Siouane.
These are a Native American tribe who lived in the Yellowstone River valley. They were moved by the government of the United States of America on reserve south of Billings.
The tribe was divided into two groups, the Crows plains and Crows mountains.
They were buffalo hunters , and they were peaceful to white men.
They are at war against their neighbors Sioux.
The Crows lived in tepees made from buffalo skins and wooden stakes.
The costumes of Crows depended on gender. Women dressed normally. They wore dresses made of sheep or deer skins, decorated with elk teeth. The women wore short hair crows , unlike men. Men wore the shirt, leggings held by a belt, a robe, and moccasins.
The Crow Nation was recruited by George Armstrong Custer to serve in the army as Indian scouts.
The only mission was to find the scouts Indian camps.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-03-2015 22:16

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de speediz, postée le 10-03-2015 à 21:30:23 (S | E)
Tout est juste ?
Merci

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de speediz, postée le 10-03-2015 à 22:12:28 (S | E)
Qui pourrait corriger mon texte sur The Crows s'il vous plait?
Merci.

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de gerondif, postée le 11-03-2015 à 10:24:03 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
The Crows
The Crows, called Ravens belong to the linguistic branch Siouane.
These are(plutôt they were) a Native American tribe who lived in the Yellowstone River valley. They were moved by the government of the United States of America on (pluriel ou singulier, ? si singulier il faut un "a")reserve south of Billings.
The tribe was divided into two groups, the Crows plains and Crows mountains.(mauvais ordre, l'adjectival vient en premier the Plain Crows)
They were buffalo hunters , and they were peaceful to white men.
They are(pourquoi ce présent ?) at war against their neighbors Sioux.
The Crows lived in tepees/teepees made from buffalo skins and wooden stakes.
The costumes of (article défini)Crows depended on gender. Women dressed normally. They wore dresses made of sheep or deer skins, decorated with elk teeth. The women wore short hair crows(sens ? des corbeaux à poil court ?) , unlike men. Men wore the shirts, leggings held by a belt, a robe(vous êtes sûr du mot ?), and moccasins.
The Crow Nation was recruited by George Armstrong Custer to serve in the army as Indian scouts.
Their only mission was to find the scouts(ce mot est-il juste et utile ici ?) Indian camps.

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de speediz, postée le 11-03-2015 à 14:21:45 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup.
Est-ce juste maintenant ?

The Crows
The Crows, called Ravens belong to the linguistic branch Siouane.
They were a Native American tribe who lived in the Yellowstone River valley. They were moved by the government of the United States of America a reserve south of Billings.
The tribe was divided into two groups, the plains Crows and Crows mountains.
They were buffalo hunters , and they were peaceful to white men.
They were at war against their neighbors Sioux.
The Crows lived in tepees made from buffalo skins and wooden stakes.
The costumes the Crows depended on gender. Women dressed normally. They wore dresses made of sheep or deer skins, decorated with elk teeth. The women wore short hair , unlike men. Men wore shirts, leggings held by a belt, and moccasins.
The Crow Nation was recruited by George Armstrong Custer to serve in the army as Indian scouts.
Their only mission was to find the Indian camps.

Merci.

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de bluestar, postée le 11-03-2015 à 15:14:39 (S | E)
Bonjour..

The Crows, called Ravens belong to the linguistic branch Siouane.
They were a Native American tribe who lived in the Yellowstone River valley. They were moved by the government of the United States of America a reserve to a reservation south of Billings.
The tribe was divided into two groups, the plains Crows and Crows mountains mountain Crows.
They were buffalo hunters , and they were peaceful to white men.
They were at war against with their neighbors the Sioux.
The Crows lived in tepees made from buffalo skins and wooden stakes.
The costumes the Crows...verbe?... depended on gender. Women dressed normally. They wore dresses made of sheep or deer skins, decorated with elk teeth. The women wore short hair , unlike men. Men wore shirts, leggings held by a belt, and moccasins.
The Crow Nation was recruited by George Armstrong Custer to serve in the army as Indian scouts.
Their only mission was to find the Indian camps of the Indians who had left the reservations

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Réponse: Correction/The Crows de speediz, postée le 12-03-2015 à 19:10:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Merci beaucoup pour vos aides

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