Correction/letter to future

Correction/letter to future
Message de ay123 posté le 02-01-2016 à 20:05:11 (S | E | F)
Hello, Happy New year everybody
Can you please help me to correct my text?
Thank you for your answers.

Hello Future! How are you? Why have you not replied to my letters? I know you have read them.
Your my friend even if you was not always kind to me. You do what life order you to. she does not reply on my letters too. Can you ask her why? Sometimes she do what's I whant, but other time she doesn't I like here too. You told me onse if I tried I will succes, well I'm trying but were is the succes. HHHHHHH
whith my love
Ay123

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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-01-2016 20:53

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Réponse: Correction/letter to future de gerondif, postée le 03-01-2016 à 16:43:52 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert:
Hello Future! How are you? Why have you not replied to my letters? I know you have read them.
Your my friend even if you was not always kind to me. You do what life order(le s du présent simple!) you to. she( 1) majuscule. 2) pourquoi life devrait-il être une femme en she ?) does not reply on my letters too(elle ne répond pas non plus, et non pas aussi). Can you ask her why? Sometimes she do(3ème personne présent simple = s) what's I whant, but other time she doesn't I like here(comme maintenant, pas comme ici) too. You told me onse if I tried I will (conditionnel)succeed, well I'm trying but were is the succes.

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Réponse: Correction/letter to future de ay123, postée le 10-01-2016 à 10:30:03 (S | E)
bonjour;
merci gerondif;


Hello Future! How are you? Why have you not replied to my letters? I know you have read them.
You are my friend even if you were not always kind to me. You do what life orders you to. She(car la vie est comme les femmes personne ne peut comprendre ce qu'elles veulent parfois elle te donne un sourire et autrefois le contraire et aussi car on dit la vie ) does not reply on my letters either(. Can you ask her why? Sometimes she does what's I whant, but other time she doesn't I like her too. You told me onse if I tried I would succeed, well I'm trying but were is the succes.
merci beaucoup pour ta correction
bonne journée;

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Modifié par ay123 le 11-01-2016 12:57

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