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Message de hydrakenn posté le 08-10-2016 à 12:15:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une présentation à faire pour la semaine prochaine en anglais niveau B1, et j'aimerais savoir si vous pourriez corriger mon texte, et peut-être me donner quelquestrucs éléments à mettre en plus?
Merci d'avance!
Hey everybody!
So my fisrtname is (Prénom) ! My surname is (Nom)! As you can see i have got Brown eyes and Brown hair. I'm 1"80 Tall. I'am extremely impatient, but i'am very helpful. I think i'm reliable. I'am always enterprising, but i can sometimes be adventurous! So I was born on the (date de naissance). I was born in France, in Grenoble. Grenoble is a rather big city in the southeast of France! At present i live in a little town next to (Ville). I Have two big brothers then name are (Prénoms)and they are (âge). They are still students.
My favourite subjects are Sport, Mathematics and English. I play HandBall since 2012, and i very love that! I enjoy listen music and i'm very fond of playing computer and video-games. I've got a girlfriend for almost 9 months. I would like to become a computer scientist. This is what I'm very keen on Mathematics and English.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-10-2016 12:52
Message de hydrakenn posté le 08-10-2016 à 12:15:06 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai une présentation à faire pour la semaine prochaine en anglais niveau B1, et j'aimerais savoir si vous pourriez corriger mon texte, et peut-être me donner quelques
Merci d'avance!
Hey everybody!
So my fisrtname is (Prénom) ! My surname is (Nom)! As you can see i have got Brown eyes and Brown hair. I'm 1"80 Tall. I'am extremely impatient, but i'am very helpful. I think i'm reliable. I'am always enterprising, but i can sometimes be adventurous! So I was born on the (date de naissance). I was born in France, in Grenoble. Grenoble is a rather big city in the southeast of France! At present i live in a little town next to (Ville). I Have two big brothers then name are (Prénoms)and they are (âge). They are still students.
My favourite subjects are Sport, Mathematics and English. I play HandBall since 2012, and i very love that! I enjoy listen music and i'm very fond of playing computer and video-games. I've got a girlfriend for almost 9 months. I would like to become a computer scientist. This is what I'm very keen on Mathematics and English.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-10-2016 12:52
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