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English exercise
Message de ptipoireau posté le 16-09-2006 à 15:32:47 (S | E | F | I)
Hello!
I'm in BTS class and I must write an English conversation about to computer attacks called "XXX ".In this exercise, I speak with the teenager who attacked the XXX site in 2004.
Do you want to correct my conversation please?
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me : "hello mister"
teenager : "hello"
me : "are you the man who attacked the XXX web site in 2004?"
teenager : "yes,I am". So what?
me :"Do you want me to explain your method?"
teenager : "well, I went into the XXX and then, I modified the XXX features, that is to say I changed the IP address in hosts file to put an other server 's IP address.
me :"okay. Why did you do this? "
teenager : "I like to find errors on the wide web site. It's hard but so exciting.
me :"You said me that you have changed the server 's IP address? What is the new IP address?"
teenager : "I type the unlawful server 's IP address in order to do panic them. Unlawful web site have often a lot of viruses. Therefore, XXX's clients who will be connected on the web site will be attacked by viruses.
me : "Oh dear... You worry me...Thank you to have answered my questions. Goodbye."
teenager : "goodbye".
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Thank you
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Modifié par bridg le 16-09-2006 16:19
Merci de ne citer aucune entreprise
Message de ptipoireau posté le 16-09-2006 à 15:32:47 (S | E | F | I)
Hello!
I'm in BTS class and I must write an English conversation about to computer attacks called "XXX ".In this exercise, I speak with the teenager who attacked the XXX site in 2004.
Do you want to correct my conversation please?
______________________________________________________________
me : "hello mister"
teenager : "hello"
me : "are you the man who attacked the XXX web site in 2004?"
teenager : "yes,I am". So what?
me :"Do you want me to explain your method?"
teenager : "well, I went into the XXX and then, I modified the XXX features, that is to say I changed the IP address in hosts file to put an other server 's IP address.
me :"okay. Why did you do this? "
teenager : "I like to find errors on the wide web site. It's hard but so exciting.
me :"You said me that you have changed the server 's IP address? What is the new IP address?"
teenager : "I type the unlawful server 's IP address in order to do panic them. Unlawful web site have often a lot of viruses. Therefore, XXX's clients who will be connected on the web site will be attacked by viruses.
me : "Oh dear... You worry me...Thank you to have answered my questions. Goodbye."
teenager : "goodbye".
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you
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Modifié par bridg le 16-09-2006 16:19
Merci de ne citer aucune entreprise
Réponse: english exercise de jean31, postée le 16-09-2006 à 16:10:54 (S | E)
Bonjour, Voici ma correction,
me : "Good morning, Sir"
teenager : "Hello"
me : "Are you the man who attacked XXX site in 2004?"
teenager : "Yes, I am". So what?
me :"Do you want to explain your method to me?"
teenager : "Well, I went into the XXX server and then, I modified the XXX features, that is to say I changed the IP address in host files to put another server 's IP address.
me :"Okay. Why did you do this? "
teenager : "I like to find errors on the wide web sites. It's hard but so exciting.
me :"You told me that you have changed the server 's IP address? What is the new IP address?"
teenager : "I typed the unlawful server 's IP address in order to panic them. Unlawful web sites often have a lot of viruses. Therefore, XXX's clients who will be connected on the web site will be attacked by viruses.
me : "Oh dear... You worry me...Thank you to have answered my questions. Goodbye."
teenager : "Goodbye".
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Modifié par bridg le 16-09-2006 16:23
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