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Sea / Correction
Message de mohamedz51 posté le 13-11-2006 à 22:47:18 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
Est ce que tu peux Pourriez-vous s'il vous plaît corriger ce(tte) texte?
Can Could you correct me this text please :
"Sea is mean of transport of nearly every type of good.So, it can carry very larges quantities and bulky of every type of goods. however, her transport is slow and ports are often distant from inland cities.And the other hand,air is a mean of transport of light,small,valuable,and perishable goods.it is very speed and less damage in loading, but it is more expensive and it do not permit enough weight and space allowance."
Thinks for all
Merci bien
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Modifié par bridg le 13-11-2006 22:51
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Réponse: Sea / Correction de paraodeus, postée le 14-11-2006 à 04:05:15 (S | E)
Could you correct (my writing in) this text please :
"The sea is means of transportation of nearly every type of good. So, it can carry very larges quantities and bulk (goods of every type) of goods. However, her its transport is slow and ports are often distant from inland cities. And On the other hand, air is a means of transportation of for light, small, valuable, and perishable goods. It is very fast speed and risks less damage of goods while in loading them, but it is more expensive and it does not permit enough weight and space allowance."
Thanks for all
Merci bien

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Réponse: Sea / Correction de paraodeus, postée le 14-11-2006 à 04:06:03 (S | E)
bon travail! You have made very sophisticated sentences!

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