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Message de esmax666 posté le 14-01-2007 à 14:49:30 (S | E | F | I)
Hello tout le monde!!
Alors voilà je revise mon anglais et j'ai fait 2 redactions
L'une doit être un fax ou dans lequel je demande des renseignements pour faire un voyage linguistique avec XXX...et l'autre je de demande des renseignments sur le Quebec (par téléphone)mais le problème est que je dois rajouter dans la conversation
"so","unless","although","in case","to"
et je 'ai pas trouvé où les mettre(s) ... (sauf "to")

Voici les textes

XXX
X rue principale
XXX

XXX
Date

Subject : Ask about Information about EF International.

Dear Sir, Madam

I am very interested about your advertisement but I need some information. I would like to go to England on a language course for the autumn week but I don’t know what are the dates of departure. I would like to stay in a family in order to be immerged in the English language, is that possible? Or what are the others possibilities? Moreover I would like to know the price of the lessons and how many lesson have I per week? I never went in this country , are there places of interest to visit? From where come the other students? How old are they? How are caught the meals? Must I have some documents ? What are the activities? Is it necessary to have diplomas?
Yours Faithfully
XXX
signature

2eme texte
-Good morning
-Good morning, can I help you ?
- Yes, I would like to hire a room in Edinburgh. Can I have the hotel list please?
- Certainly, there are a Formule1 Hotel and a Ibis Hotel.
- have they a restaurant ?
- yes, they both propose full-board and half-board
- Tank you, what are the places of interest to visit?
- I am afraid, I don’t know….
- I would like to hire(rent) a car, is that possible?
-Of course, there is a rent-a-car who you can hire a lot of beautiful cars
-Is there something interesting to do at night?
- Yes there are a cinema and many night club.
- Is there very expensive?
- The cinema is very cheap but I don’t know the price of the night club
By the way, is the cost life high?
-No it is cheaper than London!
-What is the weather in June
- It is like in France
-Ok that right, thank you very much.
-You are welcome, have a nice day
-Good bye

Merci !
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Modifié par bridg le 14-01-2007 14:56
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