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Roman policier 2/2
Message de jammy posté le 19-05-2005 à 00:09:34 (S | E | F | I)
:Hello!
Voici la deuxième partie du texte... Très
Prière de consulter le dictionnaire, jammy est un peu surmené ces temps ci faites lui plaisir en faisant de votre mieux ...
Nous entrâmes dans une salle de séjour. Je m’assis dans un fauteuil, et madame Florian alla dans la cuisine. Tout d’un coup, j’entendis une voix d’homme étouffée : quelqu’un parlait à voix basse à Madame Florian.
- je ne me souviens de personne appelé Val, dit-elle quand elle revint. – Comment était cette fille ?
Tiens, elle parlait déjà de cette fille au passé.
- j’ai une photo d’elle. Regardez, c’est elle !
- C’est une belle fille ! Mais nous ne nous sommes jamais rencontrées, j’en suis sûre, me répondit-elle. Elle parlait fort. Puis elle se pencha sur moi :
- Val … En fait, ce nom me rappelle une chanson. Le fils aîné de mon pauvre mari aime composer parfois des chansons. Il n’a jamais obéis à son père, une vraie tête de mule, il m’a toujours refusé le droit de lui dire quelque chose. Enfin bref, il a écrit une chanson « Val tu me manques… », un truc comme ça. En ce moment, il voyage…
La femme avait peur, la maison était étrange. J’étais sur le point de découvrir ce qui était arrivé à Val Smith
Allez, c'est pas évident je sais mais ça fait tellement de bien quand c'est fini! Correction Samedi matin au réveil
Message de jammy posté le 19-05-2005 à 00:09:34 (S | E | F | I)
:Hello!
Voici la deuxième partie du texte... Très
Prière de consulter le dictionnaire, jammy est un peu surmené ces temps ci faites lui plaisir en faisant de votre mieux ...
Nous entrâmes dans une salle de séjour. Je m’assis dans un fauteuil, et madame Florian alla dans la cuisine. Tout d’un coup, j’entendis une voix d’homme étouffée : quelqu’un parlait à voix basse à Madame Florian.
- je ne me souviens de personne appelé Val, dit-elle quand elle revint. – Comment était cette fille ?
Tiens, elle parlait déjà de cette fille au passé.
- j’ai une photo d’elle. Regardez, c’est elle !
- C’est une belle fille ! Mais nous ne nous sommes jamais rencontrées, j’en suis sûre, me répondit-elle. Elle parlait fort. Puis elle se pencha sur moi :
- Val … En fait, ce nom me rappelle une chanson. Le fils aîné de mon pauvre mari aime composer parfois des chansons. Il n’a jamais obéis à son père, une vraie tête de mule, il m’a toujours refusé le droit de lui dire quelque chose. Enfin bref, il a écrit une chanson « Val tu me manques… », un truc comme ça. En ce moment, il voyage…
La femme avait peur, la maison était étrange. J’étais sur le point de découvrir ce qui était arrivé à Val Smith
Allez, c'est pas évident je sais mais ça fait tellement de bien quand c'est fini! Correction Samedi matin au réveil
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de bridg, postée le 19-05-2005 à 08:44:49 (S | E)
Eh jammy on a toujours fait de notre mieux pendant que tu gravites entre la plage et les boites de nuit mais on gagnera une fois de plus ce défi, un membre de la SPAF ne baisse pas les bras
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de bridg, postée le 19-05-2005 à 11:56:03 (S | E)
Bon, j'essuie les plâtres en espérant ne pas m'être complètement trompée dans les temps
We came in a living room. I sat down in an armchair, and madam Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a suppressed voice man: somebody was whispering words to Madam Florian.
-I don’t remember anybody named Val she said by coming back
- What was that girl like ?
That’s curious! She was already speaking about that girl using the past.
- I have got her picture. Take a look!
- She’s a pretty girl! But we never met each other, I am sure about it, she answered me. She was speaking hardly. Then she bent over me:
- Val … In fact, this name reminds me of a song. My poor husband’s eldest son likes sometimes composing songs. He never obeyed his father, really as stubborn as a mule; he never wants me my opinion. In short, he wrote a song «Val I miss you ", stuff like that. Now he’s travelling …
The woman was frightened, the house was strange. I was about to discover what happened to Val Smith.
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Edité par bridg le 20-05-2005 12:11
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de woodyrun, postée le 19-05-2005 à 12:50:30 (S | E)
Hello !
Je n'étais pas là pour la première partie, alors je m'essaie à la seconde.
Ah mon dictionnaire a bien pris l'air aujourd'hui !!!
Ca nous a fait du bien, à lui et à moi !
Merci jammy
We came into a dining-room. I sat in an armchair, and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a hushed male voice : someone was speaking to Mrs Florian in a low voice.
- I don't remember of anyone called Val, she said when she came back.
What was this girl like ?
There whe was, she was already speaking of this girl in the past.
- I have a picture of her. Look, that's her !
- Lovely girl ! But we've never met, I'm sure of that, she answered me.
She was speaking loud. Then she leaned towards me :
- Val... This name reminds me of a song, actually. The elder son of my late husband likes writing songs sometimes. He never obeyed his father, a real stubborn one, he always denied me the right to tell him something. Well anyway, he has written a song 'Val I miss you...', something like that. He is traveling right now...
The woman was afraid, the house was weird. I was about to find what had happened to Val Smith.
Allez, j'ai mérité un bon verre d'eau glacée pour rafraichir mes neurones...
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Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de marie37400, postée le 19-05-2005 à 15:33:31 (S | E)
Hello Jammy
En attendant Saturday morning ou…… devrais-je dire Saturday night…. (cf. Bridg !)
We entered a living-room. I sat in an armchair and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen. All of a sudden, I heard a muffled man's voice : someone was speaking softly to Mrs Florian.
-I can’t remember anyone called Val, she said when she came back.
-What did this girl look like ?
Oh, she was already talking about that girl in the past tense.
-I’ve got her photograph. Look, that’s her !
-She is a pretty girl ! But we have never met, I’m sure, she replied to me.
She was speaking loudly. Then, she bent over me :
-Val…. Actually, this name reminds me of a song. My poor husband’s eldest son likes
The woman was frightened, the house was strange. I was about to discover what had happened to Val Smith !
Surmené toi, Jammy ! Je n’ai même pas eu le temps de finir tes dernières « Herculean tasks » !
Mais en digne membre de la SPAF, one of my favourite quote is : ‘Never give up’ as my good old friend Winston said.
At any rate, many thanks to you, Jammy,
Marie
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Edité par marie37400 le 20-05-2005 09:44
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de masselotte, postée le 19-05-2005 à 17:45:17 (S | E)
Bonsoir à toutes et à tous
merci jammy
We came into the living room. I sat in an armchair,and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a stifled voice from a man.someone was whispering to Mrs Florian. I remembered people calling Val.She said when she returned from. What was like girl ? Well,she spoke already of her in the past. I have got a picture of her. Would you see this one, that's she! She is a pretty girl ! But I have never met her, I'm sure, answered to me, she spoke loudly. Then she bent on me: Val... in fact, this name remember one of me a song . The elder son of my poor husband sometimes likes composing some songs. He wasn't obedient to his father, he's as stubborn as a mule, he had always refused the right to tell something to him.Well in short, he has written a song.<< Val I miss you. >> Something like that ,at the moment he is travelling...
The woman was fear,the house was strange, I was on the point to about to what was happened to Val Smith
Billions of blue blistering barnacles flyweight jammy
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Edité par masselotte le 20-05-2005 08:14
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de regine_lyon, postée le 19-05-2005 à 18:28:16 (S | E)
Hi everybody !!
We came in a living room. I sat down in an armchair and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a muffled masculine voice : someone was whispering something to Mrs Florian.
- I don't remember anybody named Val, she told when she came back. What did this girl look like ?
Good heavens! She was already speaking about this girl in the past tense.
- I have a picture of her. Look, this is her !
- She's a pretty girl ! But we've never met together, I am sure, she answered to me. She was speaking loudly. Then she bent her head forwards me :
- Val … In fact, this name reminds me a song. My poor husband's elder son like sometimes composing songs. He has never obeyed to his father, he was as stubborn as a mule, I have always been forbidden to tell him anything. Finally, he wrote a song "Val, I miss you ..." or something like that. Currently, he's travelling ....
The woman was afraid, the house was strange. I was on the point of discovering what had happened to Val Smith.
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Edité par regine_lyon le 20-05-2005 18:06
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de hyppoblue, postée le 19-05-2005 à 18:52:51 (S | E)
Hello,
We came in a living-room. I sat down into an armchair and Mrs Florian went in the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a hushed men’s voice : someone was speaking in a low voice (whispering) to Mrs Florian.
I don’t remember anybody called Val, she said coming back.
What did she look like ? She was already talking about this girl in the past tense.
I’ve a picture of her. Look ! That’s her.
What a pretty girl! But we never met, I’m sure she answered me.
She was speaking loudly. Then she bent over me : Val …This name reminds me of a song, in fact. My poor husband’s elder son likes to score songs sometimes. He never obeyed his father, a true jenny, he always denied to me the right to say anything. At least he wrote a song « Val, I miss you » something like that. Now he’s travelling. The woman was frightened, the house was strange. I was about to discover what had happened to Val Smith.
Jammy
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Edité par hyppoblue le 20-05-2005 20:38 voici mes erreurs corrigées! merci Jammy
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de jardin62, postée le 19-05-2005 à 19:42:17 (S | E)
Moi aussi je suis fatiguée et puis si je me trompe je ne ferai plus de punitions! C'est difficile comme tout! Bon assez râlé.
'We came into a living-room. I sat (down) in an armchair and madame Florian went to the kitchen. All of a sudden, I heard a hushed male voice: someone /was talking in a whisper/ was whispering /to madame Florian.
- I can't remember anyone named Val, she said when she came back.
What was that girl like?
There we were! She was already talking about the girl as if she was passed.
- I have got a photo of hers. Have a look! That's her!
- (That's a) /A beautiful girl indeed! But I am sure we have never met before, she answered. She was speaking in a loud voice. Then she leant towards me:
- Val... In fact this name reminds me of a song. My late husband's eldest son likes composing songs at times. He has never obeyed his father, a true jenny, he has always turned me down when I ventured to say something to him. Well, in short, he has written a song 'I miss you, Val...' something of the kind. He's travelling at present.
The woman was afraid. The house was strange. I was on the verge of finding out about Val Smith.'
*Ma doué! Bonne mère!
jammy!
(Qu'est-ce qui lui est arrivée, au fait, à Val Smith?)
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de isa71, postée le 19-05-2005 à 23:34:37 (S | E)
coucou
we came into a living-room.I sat down in an armchair,and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen.All of a sudden I heard a muffled man voice:Somebody was talking in a low voice to mrs Florian.
-I don't remember anybody named Val,she said when she came back
-how was that girl?
well,she was already talking about this girl in the past.
-I've got a picture of her.look,that's her!
-this is a beautiful girl! but we've never met,I'm sure she answered me.
She was speaking loud.Then she bent over me:
-Val...in fact,this name reminds me of a song.
My poor husband’s elder son likes composing songs sometimes. He never obeyed his father,a true as stubborn as a mule , he had always refused to tell me something. In short, he wrote a song “Val I miss you….”, a thing like that. At the moment, he’s travelling…..
The woman was frightened, the house was strange. I was about to discover what had happened to Val Smith
trés trés dur pour moi heureuse que ce soit terminé!!
isa
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de jammy, postée le 20-05-2005 à 03:46:13 (S | E)
Coucou j'ai commencé à envoyer quelques pm!
La suite c'est pour demain! Je suis fatigué Dur dur d'être professeur!
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de marie37400, postée le 20-05-2005 à 09:51:19 (S | E)
Jammy, pour ta correction, rien ne t'échappe
Ne t'inquiète pas, ta carrière ne fait que commencer, bon j'avoue qu'avec les membres de la SPAF ce n'est pas tout cui........cui......
Mais oui, je me joins à Jardin(nette)? Qu'est-il arrivé à Val, car le suspense est à son comble
Have a great sunny day, Jammy
Marie
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de axis, postée le 20-05-2005 à 10:56:31 (S | E)
Bonjour Jammy....
le ridicule ne tue pas ..... alors
We came into a living room. I sit down in a easy-chair and madam Florian went in the kitchen. Unexpected, I intended a suffocated voice of man : someone spoke à low voice to madam FLORIAN.
I do not remember name Val about people, tell she when she come back. How was this girl ?
She talked previously from this girl in past.
I have one photo of she. Look, it’s she !
That is a beautiful girl ! but we are not never met, I am sure, answered to me. She talked strong, after, she inclined over me :
Val…Of course…. This name remember to me a song.
The elder son of my regreted husband like compose sometimes songs.
He has not never obeyed to his father, it is a true mule, he refuses always that I talk something. Finally, short, he wrote a song “ VAL, you lake to me “ a knack as like.
In the moment, he makes a trip…
The women had fear, the house was strange.
I was on the point of uncover that whose was coma to Val Smith.
Bon je crois que je vais définitivement rester dans mon jardin.....
Merci pour cet exercice et bonne journée.
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de serena, postée le 20-05-2005 à 16:36:44 (S | E)
Hello Jammy !
J'ai fait vite avant demain, au réveil !! (C'est à l'heure de Greenwich ? )
We came into a living room. I sat on an armchair and Mrs. Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a stifling male voice: somebody was speaking in a whisper to Mrs. Florian.
- I don’t remember anybody called Val; she said when she came back. How was that girl
Oh! She was already talking about this girl in the past tense!
- I have a photo of her. Look! This is her.
- It’s a beautiful girl. But we never met before, I’m sure, she told me.
She was speaking loudly. Then she leaned towards me:
- Val……well, this name reminds me of a song. My poor husband’s elder son likes to write songs often. He never obeyed his father, so pig-headed, I’d never been allowed to say a word. Well anyway, he wrote a song “I miss you Val…” something like this. Just now, he’s traveling….
The woman was scared. The house was strange. I was about to bring to light what had happened to Val Smith.
Oh la la !!!! The mere thought of it makes me shudder ! Will you tell us what happened to Val?
By the way, I hope she's not Will Smith's daughter......he won't feel like teaching us how to chat up anymore then.
Jammy !!!
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Edité par serena le 20-05-2005 16:46
Un mot sur les feelings de mes collègues qui ont fait l'exercice :
Je partage ô combien profondément votre desarroi.
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de jammy, postée le 20-05-2005 à 18:20:00 (S | E)
SALUT !
j' ai corrigé d'autres traductions, pas mal!
ca arrive pour le reste...
Et bien Val on l'a tuée la pauvre!
à bientôt!
N'oubliez pas de réviser votre vocabulaire sur la nourriture.
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Edité par jammy le 20-05-2005 18:20
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de kathleen, postée le 20-05-2005 à 19:48:05 (S | E)
Hello Jammy!
We came into a living room. I sat in a armchair, and Madam Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a choked male voice: somebody was speaking in a low voice to Madam Florian.
- I don’t remember anybody called Val; she said when she came back. What was that girl like?
Listen, she was already talking about this girl in the past.
- I have a picture of her. Look! This is her?
- This is a beautiful girl! But we are never met, I’m sure, she told me. She was speaking loudly. Then, she leaned towards me:
- Val…In fact, this name reminds me of a song. My poor husband’s elder son likes to write songs sometimes. He has never obeyed his father, a true jenny; he has always refused me the right to tell you something. Well, in short, he wrote a song “you miss you Val …”, a thing like this. At the moment, he’s traveling…
The woman was afraid, the home was strange. I was about to bring to light what had happened to Val Smith.
Et ben voilà, nous, on l'a traduit et c'est sûr que ça n'a pas été facile du tout (même avec un dictionnaire ), mais on l'a terminé et c'est maintenant à ton tour de corriger nos fameuses réponses et de vivre ce qu'on a subit comme torture pour pouvoir terminer cette traduction (il faut quand même qu'il y ait une égalité entre nous ).
Bon assez plaisanté, c'est vraiment très intéressant de faire plusieurs traductions, et grâce à toi je crois qu'on a déjà un max de nouveaux mots enregistrés dans notre mémoire.
Jammy!
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de marie37400, postée le 20-05-2005 à 20:01:37 (S | E)
Hello everybody,
Message aux membres SPAF élèves de Jammy :
Pour alléger notre révision et les corrections de notre jeune professeur déjà bien épuisé , je suggère à tous les membres de la SPAF d'être végétariens, voire végétaliens ! Si on enlève tous les termes relatifs à la viande et aux produits laitiers, on a des chances de remonter nos notes
gastronomiques
Très bonne soirée à tous,
Marie
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de serena, postée le 21-05-2005 à 04:32:05 (S | E)
Marie, ce sera dur pour moi qui me nourris (presque) exclusivement de produits laitiers ! .....
Ok, au nom de la solidarité, au nom de notre noble combat, je ferai un effort.
Message reçu, Madam ! ().
......
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de lucile83, postée le 21-05-2005 à 08:27:50 (S | E)
Hi Jammy,
J'espère que tu me laisseras le temps de faire cette traduction ! je compte sur le décalage horaire ; éventuellement je ne regarderai pas ta correction, promis
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de lucile83, postée le 21-05-2005 à 09:00:43 (S | E)
Hello,
Pourquoi attendre en fait ?? de bon matin,l'esprit embrumé, les yeux à peine ouverts.....
We came into a living room. I sat down in an armchair and Mrs. Florian went to the kitchen. Suddenly I heard a hushed man’s voice : someone was whispering to Mrs Florian.
- I don’t remember anyone named Val, she said when she came back.
- What did that girl look like?
Well, she was already speaking about the girl in the past tense.
-I have got a photo of her. Look, that ‘s her !
-What a pretty girl ! but we have never met , I’m sure of that, she answered me. She was speaking loudly. Then she bent over me :
-Val….in fact this name reminds me of a song. My late husband’s elder son likes writing songs sometimes. He never obeyed his father, a true jenny, he always denied to me the right to tell him anything. Well, in short, he wrote a song “Val I miss you…” something like that. He is now travelling…
The woman was scared, the house was strange. I was about to discover what had happened to Val Smith.
See you soon
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de savoir, postée le 21-05-2005 à 21:47:11 (S | E)
Bonsoir tout le monde Hi Jammy ! géniale l'enquête! Bon allons y!
We came in a living room. I sat down on a chair and Mrs Florian went to the kitchen.Suddenly, I heard a shoked man's voice. Some one was talking in low voice to Mrs Florian.
I don't remember anybody called Val, she said when she came back.
How was this girl? Well, she was already talking about this girl in the past.
I have a photograph of her. Look at, It's her.
It's a beautiful girl ! but we have never came together.I am sure she answered me. She spoke loud, then she bent over me :Val In fact ,this name remind me a song.The elder daughter of my poor husband like to score sometimes songs.He has vever obey to his father,a real jenny.He has always refused me the droit to say him something.At last, he has written a song ;Val I miss you ; a stuff like that.At this time he travels .
The woman was afraid,the house was strange. I was near to discover what happened to Val Smith.
Réponse: Roman policier 2/2 de jammy, postée le 21-05-2005 à 22:49:19 (S | E)
Salut ! Vous avez bien bossé! Voici ma proposition…
We entered the living-room. I sat down in an armchair, and Mrs Florian went into the kitchen. Suddenly, I heard a muffled man’s voice: somebody was whispering something to Mrs Florian.
“I can’t remember anyone called Val”, she said when she came back. “What was the girl like?”
What about that, she was already using the past tense to speak about that poor girl.
“I have a picture of her. Look, this is her.”
What a beautiful girl!” But we’ve never met, I’m positive”, she answered. She was speaking loudly. Then she leaned towards me: “Val in fact her name reminds me of a song. My poor husband’s eldest son writes songs sometimes. He never obeyed his father, he is as stubborn as a mule and has always refused me the right to say anything to him. Anyway, he wrote a song “Val I miss you…” something like that. Right now he is travelling…
The woman was scared, the house was strange, I was about to discover what had happened to Val Smith.