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Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction
Message de lucile83 posté le 19-06-2005 à 16:24:48 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
ne perdez pas la main !!!!
Il était 11h , le petit garçon ferma le livre qu’il lisait et se lava les mains. Il était mort de faim, ce qui n’était pas surprenant puisqu’il n’avait pas déjeuné le matin. Il alla chez le boulanger et chez le boucher puis rentra chez lui , donna à manger à son chien et avala ce qu’il avait acheté. Ensuite il se remit à lire le livre tant aimé et arriva à la fin sans remarquer qu’il faisait nuit. Il essaya d’allumer les lumières mais il ne réussit pas car il était trop petit, un orage terrible éclata, le vent ouvrit les fenêtres, son livre fut emporté et il se réveilla alors que son réveil sonnait à 7h afin qu’il puisse aller au travail, car il ne faisait qu’un rêve puisqu’il était devenu professeur.
See you soon
Message de lucile83 posté le 19-06-2005 à 16:24:48 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
ne perdez pas la main !!!!Il était 11h , le petit garçon ferma le livre qu’il lisait et se lava les mains. Il était mort de faim, ce qui n’était pas surprenant puisqu’il n’avait pas déjeuné le matin. Il alla chez le boulanger et chez le boucher puis rentra chez lui , donna à manger à son chien et avala ce qu’il avait acheté. Ensuite il se remit à lire le livre tant aimé et arriva à la fin sans remarquer qu’il faisait nuit. Il essaya d’allumer les lumières mais il ne réussit pas car il était trop petit, un orage terrible éclata, le vent ouvrit les fenêtres, son livre fut emporté et il se réveilla alors que son réveil sonnait à 7h afin qu’il puisse aller au travail, car il ne faisait qu’un rêve puisqu’il était devenu professeur.
See you soon
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de magmatic_rock, postée le 19-06-2005 à 17:51:05 (S | E)
Coucou Lucile, pas facil facil tout ça!
It was 11 o'clock, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, it wasn't amazing because he hadn't taken his breakfast the morning. He went to the baker and the butcher then he came back home where he gave to eat for his dog and gulp what he's bought. Then he started to read again the book so loved and got to the end without notice it was night! He tried to switch on lights but he didn't manage it because he was too small, a terrible storm exploded, the wind opened the windows, his book was carried away and he woke up whereas his alarm clock rang at 7.00am so that he could go working because it only was a dream since he was become teacher.
à bientot.Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cat3, postée le 19-06-2005 à 19:11:23 (S | E)
,Lucile,j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu,mais je crois qu'il y a plein d'erreurs!!!It was 11 o'clock,the little boy closed the book,who he was reading,and washed one's hands
He was starving ,what it wasn't surprising,since he had had a breakfast
He went to the baker's and the butcher's,then he came back at home,he gave something to eat at his dog and swalled that he bought.Afterwards,he still started reading the book he liked very much,and when he finished,it was dark
He wanted to turn on the lights,but he couldn't manage it,because he was too small,a terrible storm explosed,the wind opened the windows ,his book took off,and he walked up ,when the alarm sounded at 7 a.m,in order he could go working ,because it only was a dream,since he was become a teacher
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de jardin62, postée le 19-06-2005 à 21:13:50 (S | E)
Hello lucile!
It was 11 o'clock, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, which was not surprising since he had not have his breakfast in the morning. He went to the baker's then to the butcher's then came back home. Afterwards he resumed the reading of his beloved book and got to the end without noticing it was dark. He tried to switch the lights on mais he couldn't because he was too small, an awful storm broke out, the wind blew the windows open, his book was swept away and he woke up while his alarm clock was ringing at 7 o'clock so that he could go to work, for he only had one dream as he had become a teacher.
La fin! j'ai 'ramé'! lucile.Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de bridg, postée le 19-06-2005 à 21:55:27 (S | E)
It was eleven o’clock; the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving,
He tried to switch on the lights but he couldn’t because he was too small, a terrible thunderstorm burst out, the wind opened the windows, his book was blown off and he woke up while his alarm clock rang at 7 am so that he could go to Work, because it only was a dream as he had become a teacher
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Edité par bridg le 21-06-2005 07:52
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cam3, postée le 19-06-2005 à 22:25:48 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile,
It was eleven o'clock, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, which was not surprising as he had not had any breakfast. He went to the baker's and to the butcher's then he got back home, fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. After that, he resumed reading the book he loved so much and got to the end without noticing it was dark. He tried to switch on the lights but he couldn't because he was too small, a terrible thunderstorm broke out,the wind blew the windows open, his book was blown away and he woke up when his alarm-clock was ringing at seven o'clock so that he could go to work, because it was only a dream as he had become a teacher.
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Edité par cam3 le 20-06-2005 21:41
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de joy813, postée le 19-06-2005 à 22:50:26 (S | E)
Good evening Lucile,
It was eleven o'clock, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed the hands.
He was starving, and that wasn't surprising because he hadn't have breakfast in the morning.
He went to the baker's and to the butcher's, then came back home, fooded his dog and shallowed what he had bought.
Afterwards, he read again the book he loved so much, finished him without noticing it was dark.
He tried to switch the lights on, without succes because he was too small, a terrible storm burst, the wind opened the windows, his book disappeared and he woke up while his alarm clock was ringing at seven o'clock, so that he could go to work, because he made only a dream as he had become a teacher.
it's always a pleasure 
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de jane, postée le 19-06-2005 à 22:57:46 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile! Bonjour à tous!
Quel plaisir d'avoir un peu de temps ce soir pour être parmi vous!
It was 11.00 am, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was
Merci Lucile pour tes traductions!
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Edité par jane le 21-06-2005 00:12
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de bertrand, postée le 19-06-2005 à 23:13:10 (S | E)
Haaaaa....un petit thême...sa fait plaisir
It was eleven o’clock, the boy closed the book he had been reading and washed his hands. He was very hungry, which wasn’t astonishing as he hadn’t had breakfast. He went to the baker and to the butcher, then he came back to home, he fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Afterward he resumed to read this book he loved so much and finished it without noticed that night had came. He tried to switch-on lamps but he didn’t manage to as he was too small. A terrible thunderstorm exploded, wind opened windows and brought away his book. Finally he waken-up as his alarm-clock rang seven a.m so that he could go at work. He was only dreaming since he has become teacher.
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Edité par bertrand le 19-06-2005 23:14
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de traviskidd, postée le 20-06-2005 à 03:08:53 (S | E)
It was 11:00, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, which wasn't surprising since he hadn't had breakfast that morning. He went to the baker's and the butcher's then returned home, fed his dog and gulped down what he had bought. Afterward he went back to reading the much-loved book and got to the end without noticing it was night. He tried to turn on the lights but he wasn't able to because he was too small, a terrible storm raged, the wind opened the windows, his book was carried away and he woke up when his alarm clock went off* at 7:00 so he could go to work, for he had but one dream since becoming a teacher/professor.
(Hmm ... I'm not sure if this passage was correctly punctuated; there seems to be at least one run-on sentence here.)
*Yes, "went off" is the expression, even though the alarm in fact came on!
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de grabuge, postée le 20-06-2005 à 09:37:22 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,
It was 11am, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving which wasn't surprising because of he hadn't had breakfast in the morning. He went to the baker's and the butcher's then, came back home, fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Then, he read again the so-loved book and finished it without observing it was dark. He tried to switch the lamps on but he didn't manage to because he was too small, a frightening storm broke, the wind opened the windows, his book was stormed and he woke up as his alarm-clock was ringing at 7 am for going to work, because he only made a dream as he had become a teacher.
Merci Lucile
J'ai la désagréable impression que tu vas me crier pour le "mot à mot"...
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Edité par grabuge le 20-06-2005 16:00 -
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Edité par grabuge le 20-06-2005 19:35
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cat3, postée le 20-06-2005 à 10:36:58 (S | E)
,en me relisant,je constate,cette erreur d'étourderieSince he had not had a breakfast(j'avais oublié le "not")
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Edité par bridg le 20-06-2005 11:17
Bonjour, vous savez que vous avez la possibilité d'éditer vos posts et de les corriger ?
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de zen34, postée le 20-06-2005 à 11:48:00 (S | E)
Salut Lucile,
It was 11am, the little boy closed the book which he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, what wasn’t amazing because he hadn’t had breakfast. He went to the baker’s and to the butcher’s and then got back home, fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Then he read the so liked book again and finished it without noticing it was dark. He tried to turn on the lights but he failed for being too small, a terrible storm burst, the wind opened the windows, his book was taken away and he woke up while his alarm clock was ringing at 7am so that he could go to work, because it was just a dream as he had become a teacher.
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Edité par zen34 le 20-06-2005 15:42
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de robinou, postée le 20-06-2005 à 12:05:29 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile 83.
It was 11 o'clock,the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands.
He was starving,which wasn't amazing since he hadn't had breakfast in the morning.
He went to the baker's and the butcher's then came back home,gave his dog something to eat and swallowed that he had bought.
Next he started reading his book again so much loved and arrived at the end without noticing it was dark.
He tried to switch on the lights but he didn't manage because he was too small, an awful storm shattered,the wind opened the windows,his book was carried away and he woke up while his clock rang at 7 o'clock so that he may go to work,because it was just a dream since he had become a teacher.
Denis
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Edité par robinou le 20-06-2005 12:06
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Edité par robinou le 20-06-2005 20:02
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Edité par robinou le 20-06-2005 20:07
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de post-scriptum, postée le 20-06-2005 à 12:22:12 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile,
It was 11 o'clock, the young boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He
Merci de nous avoir fait partager ce rêve d'un professeur, Lucile, et à une autre fois peut-être.
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Edité par post-scriptum le 21-06-2005 21:55
Nombreuses corrections, merci Lucile
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de hyppoblue, postée le 20-06-2005 à 13:11:53 (S | E)
Hello,
It was eleven o'clock, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving to death which wasn't surprising as he hadn't have hisbreakfast in the morning. He went to the baker's and to the butcher's then he came back home, fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. After that he started reading again his beloved book and got to the end without noticing it was dark. He tried to switch the lights on but he couldn't because he was too small, a terrible storm broke out, the wind opened the windows, his book was blown off and he woke up when his alarm clock was ringing at 7.00 am so that he could go to work for it was only a dream as he had become a teacher.
Lucile hé oui sans doute quelques maladresses....et autres erreurs... et étourderies....
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Edité par hyppoblue le 20-06-2005 18:24
corrections des "fôtes" LucileRéponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de masselotte, postée le 20-06-2005 à 13:23:50 (S | E)
Bonjour lucile83 et merci pour cette traduction
It was 11 o'clock am,the little boy closed the book that he was reading
and watched his hands.He starved,that what wasn't surprising because he hadn't took his breakfast this morning.He went to the baker's and the butcher's too, and went back at home,he gave some food
to his dog and ate the meal that's he bought for him.Afterwards he started
again to read his marvelous book up to the end without acknowledging the night had fallen. He tried to turn on the lamp but without success
because he was too small,a terrible thunderstorm broke in the air, the
wind closed the windows,his book was taking away by force he woke up then what his clock had to ring at 7 o'clock AM and could go to work for he made only that a dream because he had become a teacher.
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Edité par masselotte le 20-06-2005 18:21
lucile83 Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de savoir, postée le 20-06-2005 à 14:34:04 (S | E)
Bonsoir à tous,
It was eleven o'clock AM, the little boy shut the book he was
encore pour la correction-------------------
Edité par savoir le 21-06-2005 00:06
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de lucile83, postée le 20-06-2005 à 14:46:23 (S | E)
Hello Cat ,
trop tard, je t'ai corrigée et ta faute t'a valu un petit smiley tout rouge !
prend l'habitude d'éditer tes posts sinon tant pis je considère que le devoir a été rendu
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cat3, postée le 20-06-2005 à 17:18:34 (S | E)
,LucileVoici mes rectifications:
The little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands
He gave something to eat to his dog and swallowed what he had bought
Afterwards he read again the book
And he woke up
He had become a teacher (si je comprends bien,le participe passé "become",ne s'emploie pas avec l'auxiliaire "être"?)
Pour ma correction tardive qui m'a valu un smiley tout rouge!!,J'avais essayé sur tes conseils d'éditer,mais j'avais cru comprendre que l'on me disait ,que c'était réservé aux modérateurs,.Tu m'avais alors conseillé d'en parler à Bridg,Je dois m'absenter qqjours,je lui en parlerai après si je n'ai pas règler le problème
En tous cas merci pour tout ce que tu fais
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cat3, postée le 20-06-2005 à 17:23:47 (S | E)
Lucile,je te prie de bien vouloir m'excuser,je me suis trompée,je voulais te répondre par mp
Bridg,au secours sauve -moi,svp!
Je t'envoi un mp
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de isa71, postée le 20-06-2005 à 21:56:18 (S | E)
bonsoir Lucile désolée pour le retard
It was 11 o’clock,the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands.He was starving , wich wasn’t surprising since he had not had breakfast in the morning.He went to the baker’s and the butcher’s then he came back home ,fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought.Then , he again started reading the book liked so much and arrived to the end without noticing it was dark.He tried to switch on the lights but he couldn’t because he was too small, a terrible thunderstorm broke out,the wind opened the windows,his book was blown off, and he woke up while his alarm clock was ringing at 7.00 a.m so that he could go to work,because he only made a dream since he had become a teacher.
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Edité par isa71 le 21-06-2005 23:24
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Edité par isa71 le 21-06-2005 23:36
merci Lucile pour la correction
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de renep, postée le 20-06-2005 à 22:38:39 (S | E)
Diantre, que c'est compliqué. Voici ce que j'en pense à 22h40!
It was 11 a.m., the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, which was not surprising for he did not have breakfast that morning. He went to the baker’s and to the butcher’s and went back home, fed his dog and ate what he had bought. Then he resumed reading the beloved book to the end, without noticing that it was night. He tried to turn on the light but failed since he was too small. A terrible storm broke out, the wind opened up the windows, his book was blown away and he woke up because his alarm clock would rang at 7, so that he could go to work, for he was just dreaming because he had become a teacher.
en tt cas
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de moudounou, postée le 20-06-2005 à 23:57:24 (S | E)
Bonjour, non d'ailleurs bonsoir.
Je me lance dans cette traduction à 23h 33.
It was 11 a.m., the little boy closed the book that he was reading and he washed his hands. He starving, which was not surprising since he had not lunched in the morning. He went to the baker and to the butcher then came back home, gave to eat to his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Then he read again his so loved book and arrived to the end without noticing it was dark. He tried to switch the lights but he couldn't because he was too small, a terrible storm break out, the wind opened the windows, his book was swept away and he awoke while his alarm clock sounded at 7 o'clock so that he can go to work, because he had only one dream since he had become teacher.
Hou, c'est plus dur qu'on croit.
See you again.
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de lucile83, postée le 21-06-2005 à 14:27:23 (S | E)
Hello Cat !! ne t'affole pas .....tes corrections sont bonnes; si tu emploies l'auxiliaire "to be" avec un participe passé tu formes le passif; le present perfect,pluperfect se construisent avec l'auxiliaire "to have" + le participe passé;
les modérateurs peuvent éditer TOUS les messages; toi tu peux éditer tes messages en cliquant sur "E" en haut de ta réponse et uniquement tes messages
; si tu n'y parviens pas c'est que tu as un problème et alors tu peux contacter un modérateur (Bridg, Joy,Emy,Serena,Marie,Webmaster... ) ils apparaissent en bleu dans la liste des connectés.see you soon
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Edité par bridg le 21-06-2005 14:29
c'est fait cat3 sait éditer maintenant
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de lucile83, postée le 21-06-2005 à 15:04:24 (S | E)
Ah Bridg !! tu es partout à la fois......
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de lucile83, postée le 21-06-2005 à 15:15:08 (S | E)
Hello everybody ,
Je vais vous laisser mijoter encore un peu, mais avant je dois dire que je suis un peu surprise de toutes les maladresses que j'ai vues dans certaines traductions; vous pensiez peut-être que j'allais vous donner un texte simple; il l'est en apparence...mais seulement en apparence, vous me connaissez quand même !!!
sans rancune !
see you soon
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de lucile83, postée le 22-06-2005 à 14:18:34 (S | E)
Hello,
encore bravo pour vos efforts et votre travail
;voici ma proposition:
It was 11.00 , the little boy shut the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, which was not surprising since he had had no breakfast in the morning. He went to the baker’s and the butcher’s then went back home , fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Then he started again reading his so much beloved book and went to the end without noticing the night had come. He tried to switch on the lights but didn’t succeed as he was too small , a terrible storm burst out, the wind blew the windows open, his book was blown away and he woke up while his alarm clock was going off at 7.00 so that he could go to work, for he was only dreaming as he had become a teacher.
see you soon
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de cat3, postée le 23-06-2005 à 18:16:04 (S | E)
,LucileBridgjoy de vos conseils,j'en mobilise du monde!cat
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Edité par bridg le 23-06-2005 21:38
Vous avez une telle envie de vaincre que vous aider est un plaisir
Réponse: Quelle vie !!!! /Traduction de jammy, postée le 02-07-2005 à 14:16:17 (S | E)
désolé de te donner du boulot.. je retourne petit à petit Lulu ... Bisous!It was 11 am, the little boy closed the book he was reading and washed his hands. He was starving, that was not surprising since he had not had breakfast. He went at the baker’s and at the butcher’s then he came back home, he fed his dog and swallowed what he had bought. Then he resumed reading the book he was so fond of and finished it without noticing it was dark. He tried to switch the lights on but he didn’t manage to for he was too short, a terrible storm thundered, the wind blew the windows open, his book was swept along and he woke up while his alarm clock was to ring at 7 am so that he could go at work, for he was only making a dream since he had become a teacher.
INDISPENSABLES : 