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Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction
Message de lucile83 posté le 08-10-2005 à 08:13:18 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
voici la suite 
Correction par MP
Il ferait aussi un bon mari, cela ne faisait aucun doute, car il était avant tout bon et attentionné. Qui plus est, il était beau, grand, mince et blond. Quelle femme ne serait heureuse avec un homme comme celui-là ? Et puis, affirmait-elle, il l’aimait et, pour autant qu’elle le sût, elle l’aimait.
Au déjeuner, assise à la cantine avec les femmes et les jeunes filles, elle leur racontait comment, lors d’un premier rendez-vous, un jeune homme lui avait lancé un mot déplaisant, et comment Arthur s’était retourné et l’avait presque aplati contre le mur. Mais les femmes soutenaient que même si Doreen avait un petit ami, elle n’était pas encore fiancée, et que c’était cela qui comptait. Car un petit ami pouvait disparaître un beau soir sans laisser d’adresse, tandis que quand vous étiez fiancée il y réfléchissait à deux fois.
See you soon
Message de lucile83 posté le 08-10-2005 à 08:13:18 (S | E | F | I)
Hello,
voici la suite Correction par MP
Il ferait aussi un bon mari, cela ne faisait aucun doute, car il était avant tout bon et attentionné. Qui plus est, il était beau, grand, mince et blond. Quelle femme ne serait heureuse avec un homme comme celui-là ? Et puis, affirmait-elle, il l’aimait et, pour autant qu’elle le sût, elle l’aimait.
Au déjeuner, assise à la cantine avec les femmes et les jeunes filles, elle leur racontait comment, lors d’un premier rendez-vous, un jeune homme lui avait lancé un mot déplaisant, et comment Arthur s’était retourné et l’avait presque aplati contre le mur. Mais les femmes soutenaient que même si Doreen avait un petit ami, elle n’était pas encore fiancée, et que c’était cela qui comptait. Car un petit ami pouvait disparaître un beau soir sans laisser d’adresse, tandis que quand vous étiez fiancée il y réfléchissait à deux fois.
See you soon
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de bridg, postée le 08-10-2005 à 09:43:16 (S | E)
Superrrrr! Lucile
mais honnêtement avec le casse-tête des conjugaisons, une étoile de plus serait la bienvenue 
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Edité par bridg le 08-10-2005 09:55
Après réflexion et 2 aspirines, avec les tournures d'il y a 2 siècles et le style un peu lourd et déprimant du texte
je propose 4 étoiles 
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de bridg, postée le 08-10-2005 à 11:04:02 (S | E)
Y a t-il un médecin dans la salle ???
ce n'est pas en étoiles qu'il faut coter ce texte mais en cachets d'aspirine It's a try
Undoubtedly he could be a good husband, because above all he was a good (nice) and attentive person. Besides, he was tall, slim with fair hair. Which woman couldn’t be happy with such a man? Then, she asserted that he loved her and as far as she knew, she loved him. (she did too).
Seating at the canteen for lunch with women and girls, she narrated them how, during a first date, a young man had launched her a disagreeable word, and how Arthur had turned round almost flattening him against the wall. But women asserted that even if Doreen had a boy friend she wasn’t engaged yet and it was the most important thing because a boyfriend could go away one of these evenings without address to join him whereas when you were engaged he could hesitate.
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Edité par bridg le 08-10-2005 13:57
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de aimen7, postée le 08-10-2005 à 17:29:41 (S | E)
Hello lucile,
He could also make a good husband, there was no question about that, for he was kind and full of consideration after all.
Moreover he looked handsome, tall, slim and fair-haired. Which women wouldn't be happy with a man like that one? Besides, she said, he loved her and as far as she knew, she loved him.
Sitting at the canteen, having lunch with the women and the maiden, she told them how during a first date, a young man had uttered her an unpleasant word, and how Arthur had turned round and almost flattened him against the wall.
But the women argued that even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she wasn't engaged yet and that was the most important. Because a boyfriend could vanish by a nice evening without leaving any address, whereas when you were engaged he had to think twice about it.
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Edité par aimen7 le 08-10-2005 20:09
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de grabuge, postée le 08-10-2005 à 17:36:45 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,
That was no doubt, he would be a good husband because above all he was nice and attentive. As well, he was an handsome, tall, thin and blond man. What woman wouldn't be happy with a man like this ? And then, she claimed, he loved her and as far as she knew, she loved him.
At the lunch, sitting in the canteen with women and girls, she talked them how Arthur, for a first date, a young man had launched her an unpleasant word, had turned and almost flattened him against the wall. But the women maintained that even if Doreen had a boy friend, she's not enough engaged and that was the most important thing. Because a boy friend could disappear one nice evening without let her any address whereas when you were engaged, he thought about it twice.
Dur, dur, mais.... je l'ai fait
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Edité par grabuge le 08-10-2005 22:07
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de traviskidd, postée le 08-10-2005 à 18:51:14 (S | E)
He would also make a good husband, about that there was no doubt, because he was, above all, good and attentive. What's more, he was handsome, tall, thin, and blond. What woman wouldn't be happy with a man like that? And then (also), she said to herself, he loved her and, for all she knew, she loved him.
At lunch, sitting in the canteen with the women and young girls, she told them how, on a previous date, a young man had sent an impolite word her way, and how Arthur had come back and almost flattened him against the wall. But the women maintained that even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she still wasn't engaged, and that's what counted. Because a boyfriend could disappear one fine evening without leaving an address, whereas when you were engaged, he thought twice about it.
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de masselotte, postée le 09-10-2005 à 13:24:14 (S | E)
Bonjour lucile83
He would be also a good husband,there wasn't doubt,because
above all he had been good and full of consideration for her.What is more, he was nice,tall, thin,with blond hair'.What women wouldn't be happy with a man like that ? And then, she maintained ,he loved her and, for all that she known, she loved him.
For lunch, sit down at the canteen with women and the young
girls,she related to them , during the first appointment,a young
men had told an unpleasant word to her,and how, Arthur was turned
against him and was projected him against the wall.
But the women affirmed what even if Doreen had a friend, she wasn't engaged yet,and this was the most important.Because a friend could disappear a night without leaving his address,whereas when you were engaged he thought twice about it.
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Edité par masselotte le 09-10-2005 13:40
lucile83 pour la traductionRéponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de tounette, postée le 09-10-2005 à 14:21:06 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile,
Dur, dur ......cette traduction dominicale
No doubt that he would be a good husband because , above all he was nice and kind . And, moreover, he was a hansome, tall, thin and fair-hair man. What women wouldn't be happy with a man like him! !And then he loved her -she affirmed- and as far as she knew, she did too.
During lunch at the canteen, sitting with grown and young ladies, she told them how a young man, rapped out her a disagreeable word at the time of a first rendez-vous and how Artur rounded on him and flattered almost him against the wall. But the women argued even though Doreen had a boyfriend , she was not yet engaged and that it was important because a boyfriend could disappear one evening without leaving an address while when you were engaged he thought twice about.
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de kayrol, postée le 09-10-2005 à 18:34:21 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,
Here's my try :
"No doubt he would also make a good husband, for he was first and foremost good and attentive. Furthermore he was handsome, tall, slim and fair. What kind of woman would'nt be happy with such a man ? and, she maintained, he loved her, and, as far as she knew, she loved him too.
Sitting in the canteen for lunch with the women and the young girls, she told them how, at a first date, a young boy had hurled an unpleasant word to her, and how Arthur had turned round and almost flattened him against the wall. But the women upheld that, even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she was not engaged yet, and that this was all that mattered.
For a boyfriend could disappear one of these evenings without leaving an address, whereas when you were engaged, he had to think twice about it."
Waow very very difficult..
Thanks Lucile,
Kayrol
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de post-scriptum, postée le 09-10-2005 à 20:38:38 (S | E)
Bonsoir Lucile, bonsoir tout le monde,
There was no doubt he could be a good husband too because he was kind and thoughtful above all. He was as well a good-looking, tall, slim and fair-haired man. Which woman wouldn't be happy with a man like that one? And besides, she claimed he loved her and as far as she knew, she loved him.
At
Aîe ! nos deux tourtereaux vont-ils se marier ? Vite ! la suite !
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Edité par post-scriptum le 10-10-2005 20:17
correrction, merci Lucile
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de zen34, postée le 10-10-2005 à 16:27:20 (S | E)
Salut Lucile,
He would be a good husband as well; there was no doubt about it, because above all he was good and thoughtful. Moreover, he was handsome, tall, thin and blond-haired. What woman wouldn’t be happy with a man like that one? And besides, she claimed, he loved her and as far as she knew, she loved him.
At lunch, seating in the canteen with the women and the young girls, she told them how, on a first date, a young man had sent her an unpleasant word, and how Arthur had turned round and had almost flattened him against the wall. But the women maintained that even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she wasn’t engaged yet, and that it was what counted. Because a boyfriend could disappear one night without leaving an address, whereas when you were engaged, he thought twice about it.
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de good_doggy, postée le 11-10-2005 à 00:06:54 (S | E)
He would also make a good husband, there was
At lunch, sitting in the canteen with the women and the girls, she told them how, at the time of a first date, a young man had sent an unpleasant word to her, and how Arthur had turned round and had almost flattened him against the wall. But the women supported that even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she was not
Merci Lucile
Merci Lucile pour ton aide à la correction.
J'aimerais tellement que chacun corrige ses fautes!!!
Simplement pour aider tous ceux qui arrivent et qui apprennent!
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Edité par good_doggy le 14-10-2005 01:32
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de gewurz, postée le 11-10-2005 à 13:10:03 (S | E)
Bonjour Lucile,
He would be also good as a husband, no doubt about that, for he was, before everything, a just and attentive man. And what's more, he was handsome, tall, thin and blond. What woman wouldn't be light-hearted to be with such a man ? Furthermore, she claimed, he was in love with her and to the best of her knowledge, she loved him.
At lunch, as she was sitting in the canteen with the other ladies and young girls, she would tell them how, on a first date, a young man had uttered an unpleasant word against her and how king Arthur had turned round and almost crushed him flat against the wall. But the ladies argued that even though Doreen had a boyfriend, she wasn't engaged yet, and that was what mattered. For a boyfriend could vanish one nice evening without leaving any address, whereas being engaged would make him think twice about it.
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de marie37400, postée le 12-10-2005 à 19:09:32 (S | E)
Hello Lucile,
I do hope it’s not too late !
He would also make a good husband, there was no doubt about it, for he was first and foremost kind and attentive. On top of that, he was handsome, tall, slim and blond. What woman wouldn’t be happy with such a man ? And, she claimed, he loved her, and, as far as she knew, she loved him.
Sitting in the canteen for lunch with the women and the young girls, she told them how, during a first date, a young man had launched an unpleaseant word on her, and how Arthur had turned around and almost smashed him against the wall.But the women maintained that, even if Doreen had a boyfriend, she wasn’t engaged yet, and only that mattered.
Because a boyfriend could vanish into thin air one fine evening without leaving any address whereas when you were engaged, he thought twice about it.
Please, Lucile, break the suspense !
à toiMarie
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Edité par traviskidd le 12-10-2005 21:35
First you hope it's not too late, and now you want the correction in a hurry?
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de lucile83, postée le 13-10-2005 à 17:51:30 (S | E)
Hello,
et 
car j'ai vu de très très bonnes traductions Voici ma proposition (tu vois Marie, je fais vite
)He would also make a good husband, there being no doubt of this because above all he was quiet and attentive. What’s more, he was good-looking, was tall, thin, had fair hair. What girl wouldn’t be happy with a man like that? Also, she affirmed, he loved her, and, as far as she could tell, she loved him.
Sitting with the women and girls over a canteen lunch she told them of how, on a first date, a youth had shouted an unpleasant word at her, and Arthur had turned back and nearly flattened him against the wall. But the women maintained that although Doreen may have a young man, she was not yet engaged, and that was what mattered. For a young man could flit away one fine night and never be heard of again, while if you were engaged he would think twice about it.
See you soon
Réponse: Un petit ami/Suite/Traduction de bridg, postée le 13-10-2005 à 22:34:28 (S | E)
Lucile 
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