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Jessica (correction)
Message de cames6 posté le 09-11-2005 à 18:34:51 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour à tous est-ce-que vous pourriez me corriger mon texte s'il vous plaît ?
merci
Jessica lives in wolfsburg near berlin. She was born the 22 th may 1992. She has got one sister. SHe practise the trampoline. Her favourite film is Mr and Mrs SMITH. Her favourite actor is Brad PITT. She doesn't like reading. During her free time she tchat on the web and phone to her friends. In the scool sher learns the french, english...Her favourite subjects are sportz and german but she hates maths and chimie. She doesn't carry a uniforme at school. She goes to school with the bick. She has visited the Grece. She is nine days in france and sleeps at her penfriends.
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Edité par bridg le 09-11-2005 18:47
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Message de cames6 posté le 09-11-2005 à 18:34:51 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour à tous est-ce-que vous pourriez me corriger mon texte s'il vous plaît ?
merci
Jessica lives in wolfsburg near berlin. She was born the 22 th may 1992. She has got one sister. SHe practise the trampoline. Her favourite film is Mr and Mrs SMITH. Her favourite actor is Brad PITT. She doesn't like reading. During her free time she tchat on the web and phone to her friends. In the scool sher learns the french, english...Her favourite subjects are sportz and german but she hates maths and chimie. She doesn't carry a uniforme at school. She goes to school with the bick. She has visited the Grece. She is nine days in france and sleeps at her penfriends.
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Edité par bridg le 09-11-2005 18:47
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Réponse: Jessica (correction) de babyscot59, postée le 09-11-2005 à 18:52:17 (S | E)
Jessica lives in wolfsburg near berlin. She was born on the 22 th may 1992. She has got one sister. SHe practiseS the trampoline. Her favourite film is Mr and Mrs SMITH. Her favourite actor is Brad PITT. She doesn't like reading. During her spare-time she chats on the web and phones to her friends. In the scool sher learns French, English...Her favourite subjects are sportz and German but she hates Maths and Chemistry. She doesn't carry a uniforme at school. She goes to school by bike. She has visited Greece. She stays nine days in france and sleeps at her penfriends.
voili voilou, Attention à vos S à la 3éme personne
et aussi les majuscules aux matières
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Edité par babyscot59 le 09-11-2005 18:53
Réponse: Jessica (correction) de cames6, postée le 09-11-2005 à 18:56:05 (S | E)
mmmemrci !!
Réponse: Jessica (correction) de jardin62, postée le 09-11-2005 à 19:07:01 (S | E)
Bonsoir.
Attention à ces détails :
- on the 22nd of May /ou/ on May the 22nd
- ...phones her friends (pas de 'to' après le verbe 'phone')
- ...at school
- She
- sports
- wear a uniform
- She cycles to school
- She has spent nine days in France and slept at her penfriends'.
( apostrophe pour dire 'chez' )
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