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Message de matheuse62 posté le 14-11-2005 à 21:53:49 (S | E | F | I)
Si quelqu'un pouvait corriger mes erreurs,
Travelling abroad
I have never done the whole world and stayed one month in the Sahara but I saw a few facets of some countries
The first time I went in England I was two years old and I did not remember of a lot of things.
We visited Leedstcastle and we got lost in a vegetal labyrinth .
They are my only memories .
The second time, I came to London with the other classes of 4ème . We had lunch in Central park and we admired the treasures of the British Museum . Finally we did shopping in Oxford Street and we came back France by Chuttel . This travel was very interesting .
My next trip in England is planed a short time before Christmas with the European English students .
I went too with my parents in Spain , I came to Barcelona and I saw the Saint Ignace of Loyola ‘s basilica .
But my travel in Sicilian ,is by far the best , I spent a fantastic week with my friends and my teachers to visit in great detail , at great length this magnificent country .
Next year I will go on a cruise on the Mediterranean Sea with my parents !Dock!
Thank you very much
Chloé
Message de matheuse62 posté le 14-11-2005 à 21:53:49 (S | E | F | I)
Si quelqu'un pouvait corriger mes erreurs,
Travelling abroad
I have never done the whole world and stayed one month in the Sahara but I saw a few facets of some countries
The first time I went in England I was two years old and I did not remember of a lot of things.
We visited Leedstcastle and we got lost in a vegetal labyrinth .
They are my only memories .
The second time, I came to London with the other classes of 4ème . We had lunch in Central park and we admired the treasures of the British Museum . Finally we did shopping in Oxford Street and we came back France by Chuttel . This travel was very interesting .
My next trip in England is planed a short time before Christmas with the European English students .
I went too with my parents in Spain , I came to Barcelona and I saw the Saint Ignace of Loyola ‘s basilica .
But my travel in Sicilian ,is by far the best , I spent a fantastic week with my friends and my teachers to visit in great detail , at great length this magnificent country .
Next year I will go on a cruise on the Mediterranean Sea with my parents !Dock!
Thank you very much
Chloé
Réponse: travelling abroad de jean31, postée le 15-11-2005 à 10:41:03 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Ton anglais est globalement excellent, bravo !
Juste quelques "retouches", signalées en majuscules.
I have never TRAVELLED the whole world ...
... a few PLACES IN some countries.
... I went TO England ... remember (0) a lot of things.
... Leeds castle (2 mots séparés) ...
... with the other THIRD FORMERS ...
... in HYDE PARK
(Central Park est à New York)... we did SOME shopping in Oxford Street ...
... we came back TO France BY the SHUTTLE
My next trip TO England is planNed ...
I went TO Spain with my parents too ...
But my travel in SicilY is by far the best ONE.
... and my teachers (0) visitING this magnificent country in great detail at great length.
Good luck.
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Edité par jean31 le 15-11-2005 10:43
Réponse: travelling abroad de matheuse62, postée le 16-11-2005 à 17:01:36 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup !Réponse: travelling abroad de jean31, postée le 16-11-2005 à 17:19:11 (S | E)
You're welcome.
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