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Petit Texte correction
Message de yoyo69 posté le 15-02-2006 à 17:05:05 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous
Voila j'ai ecrit un petit texte vraiment tout simple.je travaille actuellement les temps. pourriez voir si cela est correct.
I was going to house, when I saw red car in front of at home. I was coming close to the car when I saw to appear suddenly my parent. They got up and wished for me a happy birthday.
We went to home, mom was in the kitchen while dad was making a fire in the fireplace. I was impatient to eat for to open my presents.
It was around/average nine o’clock, when we did us in the table (Se mettre à table). In the finish meal, I opened my presents and I was happy. We went to a bed.
merci beaucoup
Message de yoyo69 posté le 15-02-2006 à 17:05:05 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous
Voila j'ai ecrit un petit texte vraiment tout simple.je travaille actuellement les temps. pourriez voir si cela est correct.
I was going to house, when I saw red car in front of at home. I was coming close to the car when I saw to appear suddenly my parent. They got up and wished for me a happy birthday.
We went to home, mom was in the kitchen while dad was making a fire in the fireplace. I was impatient to eat for to open my presents.
It was around/average nine o’clock, when we did us in the table (Se mettre à table). In the finish meal, I opened my presents and I was happy. We went to a bed.
merci beaucoup
Réponse: Petit Texte correction de jardin62, postée le 16-02-2006 à 13:46:25 (S | E)
Bonjour.
- I was going home when I saw a red car in front of my house.
( Répétition => home et house )
- As / While / I was coming close to the car my parents appeared suddenly.
( Construction )
- They ( sens 'curieux ) ...wished me a Happy Birthday.
- We came into the house.
- My mum went into the kitchen. My father made a fire in the fireplace. ( Actions séparées, bien délimitées : récit au prétérit )
- I was looking forward to seeing ( ce verbe est suivi d'un gérondif malgré la présence de 'to' = être impatient de... ) my presents but dinner wasn't ready yet.
- It was about nine o'clock whe we started to eat...When the meal was finished I opened the parcels at last.
- I was very happy.
- We went to bed.
INDISPENSABLES : 