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Message de ririne771 posté le 16-02-2006 à 14:45:14 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour je m'appelle perrine ,je suis en 3eme .
pourriez vous si ça ne vous derange pas me corriger ceci?

-Hello ! My name is Perrine See and I am a journalist.
-hello ! My name is jimmy
-do you agree answer some questions?
-yes , I agree
-how old are you?
-I am 14 years old
-where do you live
-In Harlem
-are you always at school?
-no , I’m not! One year ago , I left.
-Why do you left school?
-I left school because one year ago , I did not participate of the courses and I skip classes because it’s not funny .With my friends we go for a walk to make silliness whereas now I’d like to go to school but my parents don’t want !
-so , you regrets?
-yes !a lot ! because now I could not make the job of my dream : paediatrician. I have to make a job that I don’t like very much whereas continuing I would maybe obtain scholarships to continue my studies.
-are you alone in this situation?
-no !I’m not !many of my friends have stopped listening .I’d like to take again the class whereas they don’t.
-thank you very much and good luck!!


MERCI D'AVANCE Merci d'avance


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Edité par lucile83 le 16-02-2006 14:47