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Perrine /bonne traduction?
Message de ririne771 posté le 16-02-2006 à 17:40:39 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour je m'appelle perrine ,je suis en 3eme .
pourriez vous si ça ne vous derange pas me corriger ceci?

-Hello ! My name is Perrine See and I am a journalist.
-hello ! My name is jimmy
-do you agree answer some questions?
-yes , I agree
-how old are you?
-I am 14 years old
-where do you live
-In Harlem
-are you always at school?
-no , I’m not! One year ago , I left.
-Why do you left school?
-I left school because one year ago , I did not participate of the courses and I skip classes because it’s not funny .With my friends we go for a walk to make silliness whereas now I’d like to go to school but my parents don’t want !
-so , you regrets -yes !a lot ! because now I could not make the job of my dream : paediatrician. I have to make a job that I don’t like very much whereas continuing I would maybe obtain scholarships to continue my studies.
-are you alone in this situation?
-no !I’m not !many of my friends have stopped listening .I’d like to take again the class whereas they don’t.
-thank you very much and good luck!!
Merci d'avance
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Edité par bridg le 16-02-2006 17:41
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Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de port58, postée le 16-02-2006 à 21:31:56 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Juste quelques corrections entre parenthèses :

Hello ! My name is Perrine See and I am a journalist.
-hello ! My name is jimmy (Jimmy)
-do you agree answer some questions? (to answer)
-yes , I agree
-how old are you?
-I am 14 years old
-where do you live
-In Harlem
-are you ~~always~~ at school? (are you still at school ?)
-no , I’m not! One year ago , I left.
-Why do you left school? (why did you leave school ?)
-I left school because one year ago , I did not participate of ~~the~~ ~~courses~~ and I ~~skip~~ (didn't attend) classes because it’s was not funny .With my friends we go (went) for a walk to make silliness ~~whereas~~. Now I’d like to go to school but my parents don’t want !
-so , you regrets (regret) -yes !a lot ! because now I could not make the job of my dream : paediatrician. I have to make a job that I don’t like very much whereas continuing I would maybe obtain scholarships to continue my studies.
-are you alone in this situation?
-no !I’m not !many of my friends have stopped listening .I’d like to take again the ~~class~~ (studies) whereas they don’t.
-thank you very much and good luck!!.

Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de jardin62, postée le 17-02-2006 à 20:53:32 (S | E)
Bonjour.

- Hello ! My name is Perrine See and I am a journalist.
- Hello ! My name is Jimmy.
- Do you agree to answer some questions ?
- Yes, of course.
- How old are you ?
- I am 14 years old.
- Where do you live ?
- I live in Harlem.
- Do you still go to school ?
- Oh, no ! I left school one year ago.
- Why did you leave ? ( il faut redonner au verbe sa base verbale dans une question : 'did' sert à indiquer le prétérit à lui tout seul )
- Well, I left school because I didn't take an active part in the lessons. I used to skip classes because I thought they were boring.
( = je sautais des cours parce que je les trouvais ennuyants ). My friends and I did silly things instead of going to school... Now I would like to go back to school but my parents don't agree.
- You mean => vous voulez dire que you regret...
- Oh yes, quite a lot ! You see I won't be able to be a paediatrician. It's a job I have always dreamt of doing. >( = c'est un métier que j'ai toujours rêvé de faire ). Now I am obliged to accept any job even if I don't like it whereas if I had gone on ( = si j'avais continué ) I would perhaps have ( = j'aurais peut-être ) obtained a scholarship and the money to study.
- Are a lot of young people in the same situation, do you think ?
- Oh, yes ! Lots of my friends have stopped school. The big difference is that I would like to go back to school whereas they don't.
- Well, That's all I have to ask you. Thank you very much for having answered and ...good luck !
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Pardonnez-moi de m'être mal débrouillée avec la couleur verte !
Modifié par jardin62 le 17-02-2006 20:54

Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de ririne771, postée le 18-02-2006 à 19:57:06 (S | E)
merci beaucoup a ces deux personnes qui m'ont beaucoup aidé ! j'aimerais une derniere petite information : dans la phrase : lots of my friends . . . . est ce que je peut remplacer lots par so many?

je dois aussi rajouté expression de similitude ! comment faire???

Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de jardin62, postée le 18-02-2006 à 20:19:02 (S | E)

Bonjour.

It's a pity ( = Il est dommage que ...) so many ( = tant ) of my friends have stopped school : apparently we now are in a similar situation.
Well... I want to mention that I feel there's a little difference between us : it seems that most of them ( = la plupart d'entre eux ) have accepted their life as a fate ( = une fatalité ). It's not my case : I know I have been stupid but I also know that nothing is lost. I want to get out of this ( = me sortir de là ) and achieve ( = réaliser ) my project.

Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de ririne771, postée le 18-02-2006 à 23:05:37 (S | E)
jardin 62 ! ! ! je t'adore ! ! !

Réponse: Perrine /bonne traduction? de jardin62, postée le 19-02-2006 à 06:12:19 (S | E)
Et bé ! C'est 'ben' la première fois qu'on me dit ça pour de l'anglais !

Thanks a thousand times !
Good luck !

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