Handwashing / Correction
Message de minipoucette posté le 20-03-2006 à 16:30:18 (S | E | F | I)

BonjourJe suis étudiante en médecine et pour mes examens je dois faire des synthèses autour de thèmes variés . Ayant appris l'anglais comme deuxième langue et n'ayant pas eu la possibilité de pratiquer la langue mon niveau est médiodre . Pour ne pas être ridicule à l'oral en anglais , j'espère pouvoir compter sur votre aide . Voici mon premier sujet

Handwashing.

Before speaking of Handwashing we have to think of our hands.

The hand are the way to communicate. They are all the time in touch with outside.
When you watch you foots , they was protect by your shoes all the day .
But the hands are yours slaves all the day without any protection.
So it make sense your hands are the more dirty part of your body.

Watch your hands, it’s probably one of the first gesture that you parents learn you.

The hands are the most important means by which germs travel from person to person.
On hands we carry virus , bacteria and a lot of other germs.


Also you can esealy understand that wash your hands would be a strategy for protecting yourself.

Some simple rules like wash your hands , or cough into a facial tissue must be observed to avoid contagion.

Moreover it’s a child plays . The best way to wash your hands is to use soap and water , scrube for teen of fiveteen seconds , then rinse with running water and use papertovel.

But have you think on that , a lot of public restroom d’ont have soap and paper tovel.
Health experts explain that it’s better don’t wash your hands that close the faucet with any paper directly with your hands

Nevertheless soap and water may be washed up . They are more easilly : antibiotic gel
They stop dangerous germs fatser and better then soap

The spread of microbes in hospital is a huge health problem.
The nosocomial infection is a medical and financial problem.

Germs on the hands of nurses , doctors move from patient to patient due to the lake of basic hygiene.
Hospital workers are busy and skip the handwashing between topatient in order to save time.

During the visit, they can’t eseally wash their hands with soap because water and skin is too far .
But antibiotic gel is transportable everywhere or dispensers can be installed beside every bed.
The time saving is amazing.

It’s very simple to use . A blod on one palm , then rub the hands together and it’s dry .

It’s composed of alcohol which kills the germs and one other advantage is the moistunizers , it don’t dry the skin on contrary of soap.

The alcohol gel is dearer than soap but since it reduces the cost of treatment for infection by half, it’s a revolutionary

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Modifié par emy64 le 20-03-2006 17:01
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J espère que vous vous rendez compte que votre demande va nécessiter beaucoup de temps de la part des membres qui voudront bien vous aider. Vous dîtes: voici mon "premier" sujet, merci d'espacer ces sujets car ces demandes nécessitent du travail et du temps. Merci de votre compréhension


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Modifié par minipoucette le 20-03-2006 17:29

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Modifié par minipoucette le 20-03-2006 17:30