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Message de faith29390 posté le 22-03-2006 à 11:38:15 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
I think that in the school of the future, there will be professors but not vooks because computers will have remplaced them. The advantages of a teaching by internet would be that one could work at the time of the moment which plait us more, but the disavantages would be that certain people wouldn't do their work, I also think that a computer would explain less well than one professor a thing why a pupil wouldn't have understood, and no matter who could cheat to make his exercises by sending somebody of more gifted doing them for example, which wouldn't make progress teaching.
Merci d'avance de vos corrections.
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Modifié par bridg le 22-03-2006 14:29
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Message de faith29390 posté le 22-03-2006 à 11:38:15 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
I think that in the school of the future, there will be professors but not vooks because computers will have remplaced them. The advantages of a teaching by internet would be that one could work at the time of the moment which plait us more, but the disavantages would be that certain people wouldn't do their work, I also think that a computer would explain less well than one professor a thing why a pupil wouldn't have understood, and no matter who could cheat to make his exercises by sending somebody of more gifted doing them for example, which wouldn't make progress teaching.
Merci d'avance de vos corrections.
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Modifié par bridg le 22-03-2006 14:29
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Réponse: Une petite correction please... de jean31, postée le 22-03-2006 à 12:34:57 (S | E)
Bonjour faith,
Mes propositions sont signalées en majuscules.
... professors/teachers but not Books (faute de frappe) because computers will have rEPlaced (orthographe) them. A teaching by the Internet would ENABLE YOU to work at THE MOST SUITABLE time and moment. (et nouvelle phrase !) But certain people MIGHT FEEL ENCOURAGED not to do their work.
I also think that, CONTRARY TO A TEACHER, a computer COULD not explain SOMETHING a pupil wouldn't have understood. MOREOVER, DISHONEST PUPILS COULD cheat AND HAVE THEIR exercises DONE BY BETTER ONES, which wouldn't make THEM progress.
NB Il faut vite te mettre en tête que l'anglais n'obéit pas aux mêmes règles que le français.
Apprends à construire des phrases courtes, une principale + une subordonnée et basta !
Seule ma longue expérience du charabia scolaire m'a permis de te déchiffrer.
Il y a sûrement mieux, mais au moins c'est correct.
Dernier conseil : utilise toutes les ressources du site pour progresser.
Bon courage.
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Modifié par jean31 le 22-03-2006 16:31
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