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Rosa Parks(correction)
Message de memen posté le 01-05-2006 à 22:40:25 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
Voilà j'ai une petite rédaction à faire en anglais et j'ai peur d'avoir fait pas mal d'erreurs:accepteriez-vous de me les corriger? Merci pour votre aide.
What would have happened if Rosa Parks had got up on December, 1St 1955
Useless to point out the history of RP today. She's so famous, that to quote , it's least details would be only one waste time.
This day, the hitory of all blacks people would to be changed. But what would have happened if RP got on 1/12/1955?
The United States was formerly very difficult for the men afro-American. It was could have still lasted if RP had not this courage which reversed the segregation, because mentalities were not advanced enough for agree what were formerly to regard as slaves.
The public parks and other places would still not be authorized towards the black men.
That could have worsened because racism was often shown to the extreme.
today, the act of RP was shown and of the thousands of continuous people to fight for the equality of the man.
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Modifié par bridg le 01-05-2006 22:44
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Message de memen posté le 01-05-2006 à 22:40:25 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
Voilà j'ai une petite rédaction à faire en anglais et j'ai peur d'avoir fait pas mal d'erreurs:accepteriez-vous de me les corriger? Merci pour votre aide.
What would have happened if Rosa Parks had got up on December, 1St 1955
Useless to point out the history of RP today. She's so famous, that to quote , it's least details would be only one waste time.
This day, the hitory of all blacks people would to be changed. But what would have happened if RP got on 1/12/1955?
The United States was formerly very difficult for the men afro-American. It was could have still lasted if RP had not this courage which reversed the segregation, because mentalities were not advanced enough for agree what were formerly to regard as slaves.
The public parks and other places would still not be authorized towards the black men.
That could have worsened because racism was often shown to the extreme.
today, the act of RP was shown and of the thousands of continuous people to fight for the equality of the man.
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Modifié par bridg le 01-05-2006 22:44
+ titre
Réponse: Rosa Parks(correction) de willy, postée le 02-05-2006 à 10:47:05 (S | E)
Hello !
Si tu veux des détails sur Rosa Parks, tape ce nom dans le cadre "rechercher sur le site" ; ce sujet a déjà été traité. Tu y trouveras des tournures de phrases utiles.
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