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Tourism in London
Message de toufa57 posté le 13-05-2006 à 17:46:24 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je fais un essai personnel , concernant mon souhait d'aller visiter Londres et ses curiosités,afin de m'exercer dans l'expression écrite.Je voudrais être corrigée.Merci et bienvenue(s) à toutes les idées qui seront proposées.
Since I started to learn English language, my dream is to visit London because I think it is a really beautiful and wonderful city!
I know there are so many lovely of buildings to see .Supposing I travel to, first I'm curious about to discover the both houses of Parliament ,this famous building particularly for its clock tower Big Ben ; the tower bridge, and Windsor this great castle which was built by William the Conqueror.
I guess myself already there visiting ancient monuments ,old churches,Buckingham Palace and the changing ofthe guard.Why not?
Than,I suspect it will be interesting to visit Oxford which is a famous University.
After there are gardens ,parks too, and the Madam Tussand's, the museum where you can see all the England personalities in wax.
It seems to me that it would be quiet impressive and interesting.
In case I would go-Ihope that- my conviction is that I'd be happy provided I can live in B and B,bad and breakfast place because I am conviced that it's cheaper than staying in a hotel , and I will be able to improve my English in the same way.
It goes without saying that I 'd like to take a guided tour on one of those neat double-decker buses to see all the sights.
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Modifié par bridg le 13-05-2006 17:48
Message de toufa57 posté le 13-05-2006 à 17:46:24 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je fais un essai personnel , concernant mon souhait d'aller visiter Londres et ses curiosités,afin de m'exercer dans l'expression écrite.Je voudrais être corrigée.Merci et bienvenue(
Since I started to learn English language, my dream is to visit London because I think it is a really beautiful and wonderful city!
I know there are so many lovely of buildings to see .Supposing I travel to, first I'm curious about to discover the both houses of Parliament ,this famous building particularly for its clock tower Big Ben ; the tower bridge, and Windsor this great castle which was built by William the Conqueror.
I guess myself already there visiting ancient monuments ,old churches,Buckingham Palace and the changing ofthe guard.Why not?
Than,I suspect it will be interesting to visit Oxford which is a famous University.
After there are gardens ,parks too, and the Madam Tussand's, the museum where you can see all the England personalities in wax.
It seems to me that it would be quiet impressive and interesting.
In case I would go-Ihope that- my conviction is that I'd be happy provided I can live in B and B,bad and breakfast place because I am conviced that it's cheaper than staying in a hotel , and I will be able to improve my English in the same way.
It goes without saying that I 'd like to take a guided tour on one of those neat double-decker buses to see all the sights.
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Modifié par bridg le 13-05-2006 17:48
Réponse: Tourism in London de jean31, postée le 13-05-2006 à 19:18:39 (S | E)
Hello,
Ce que j'ai remarqué est signalé en majuscules.
(0) signale une suppression.
Since I started to learn THE English language (ou bien ...learn English tout court) my dream HAS BEEN to visit (ou bien I HAVE DREAMT OF visitING) London because I think it is a really beautiful and wonderful city! I know there are so many lovely (0) buildings to see. Supposing I COULD travel THERE, I WOULD BE (irréel = conditionnel) curious to visit THE Houses of Parliament, this SO famous building, particularly (0) its clock tower, Big Ben; Tower Bridge and Windsor Castle which was built by William the Conqueror.
I CAN IMAGINE myself already there, visiting ancient monuments, old churches, Buckingham Palace and the changing of the Guard. Why not?
ThEn, I suspect it WOULD be interesting to visit Oxford AND ITS famous university.
There are ALSO gardens, parks and (0) Madame Tussaud's, the museum where you can see THE WAXWORK DUMMIES OF MANY famous personalities in Britain.
It seems to me that it would be QUITE (confusion avec "quiet") impressive and interesting.
In case I would go -I hope SO- I AM CONVINCED that I'd be happy provided I can STAY AT Bed & Breakfast places because it's cheaper than staying in a hotel, and I WOULD be able to improve my English BY the same way.
It goes without saying I'd like to take a guided tour on BOARD one of those neat double-decker buses to see all the sights.
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Modifié par jean31 le 13-05-2006 19:20
Réponse: Tourism in London de toufa57, postée le 13-05-2006 à 19:58:25 (S | E)
Excusez-moi Bridg et MERCI de me le faire remarquer.
BBOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNJJOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUURR!!!!
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Modifié par bridg le 13-05-2006 20:03
Réponse: Tourism in London de toufa57, postée le 13-05-2006 à 20:47:26 (S | E)
Merci Jean31 pour cette correction, j'ai encore beaucoup à apprendre...
Réponse: Tourism in London de jean31, postée le 13-05-2006 à 20:57:37 (S | E)
You're very
As the saying goes, "It is never too late to learn".
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