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Message de choupie67 posté le 27-05-2006 à 17:21:28 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour est ce que quelqu'un pourrait jeter un coup d'oeil et me signaler mes fautes d'orthographe ou de temps merci !
I'm Carmen. I'm fifteen years. I live in Schleithal. My father is Joseph his job is at Karlshruhe. My mother is Mireille and her job is at Soultz. I have a sister Marine she is nine and she go at scholl at schleithal. When I have free time I practise tennis. I'm happy to do this because I past a good time with my friends. I have make dance for five years but the trainesse (entraineuse) is left. The last years I was in holidays at Italy, it was very good holidays, I have meet four personn very nice. This years I go probabely two weeks in the sud on the france. My friends are always here for mee. I know Joanne for fifteen years ans stephanie for four years, they are very special girls. I don't bore mee with them !
Message de choupie67 posté le 27-05-2006 à 17:21:28 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour est ce que quelqu'un pourrait jeter un coup d'oeil et me signaler mes fautes d'orthographe ou de temps merci !
I'm Carmen. I'm fifteen years. I live in Schleithal. My father is Joseph his job is at Karlshruhe. My mother is Mireille and her job is at Soultz. I have a sister Marine she is nine and she go at scholl at schleithal. When I have free time I practise tennis. I'm happy to do this because I past a good time with my friends. I have make dance for five years but the trainesse (entraineuse) is left. The last years I was in holidays at Italy, it was very good holidays, I have meet four personn very nice. This years I go probabely two weeks in the sud on the france. My friends are always here for mee. I know Joanne for fifteen years ans stephanie for four years, they are very special girls. I don't bore mee with them !
Réponse: biographie de rypervenche, postée le 27-05-2006 à 18:09:22 (S | E)
I'm Carmen. I'm fifteen years old. I live in Schleithal. My father's name is Joseph and he works at Karlshruhe. My mother's name is Mireille and she works at Soultz. I have a sister, Marine, she is nine and she goes to scholl at Schleithal. When I have free time, I practice tennis. I like doing this because I have a good time with my friends. I have been dancing for five years but my instructor left. Last year I spent the holidays in Italy, it was a very nice, I even met four very nice people. This years I will probably go to the south of France for two weeks. My friends are always here for me. I've known Joanne for fifteen years and Stephanie for four years; they are very special girls. "I don't bore me with them !"
Je ne sais pas exactement ce que tu veux dire ici. "I don't bore them!" peut-être?
Réponse: biographie de bridg, postée le 27-05-2006 à 18:18:50 (S | E)
Bonjour choupie47.
Vous avez de la chance un membre anglophone ne connaissant pas les règles du site vous a donné immédiatement une traduction de votre texte. Je vous conseille néanmoins de regarder point par point les erreurs que vous aviez commises et que vous en tiriez profit avec un livre de grammaire.
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Réponse: biographie de choupie67, postée le 27-05-2006 à 22:03:29 (S | E)
Merci rypervenche ! A la fin je voulais dire que je ne m'ennuie pas avec eux.
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