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Could someone correct me ? :þ
Message de hackmetal posté le 01-10-2006 à 12:14:38 (S | E | F | I)
reBonjour
Pouvez vous corriger mes fautes de conjugaison surtout mais aussi mes fautes d'orthographes s'il y en a ?
Merci d'avance !!
(bee bop company n'existe pas )
Hello I am *****, the public relations manager and i will presenting you the history of our company . The bee bop Communication agency was set up in Montreal in The first half of 1999 by ***, ****, ****and ****. By January of 2000 the company started a period of expantion and of market exporation especially in Québec and Ontario. In the beggining, we had just 4 wage earners but through the first half of 2001 we really received the four big orders and we could hire 5 more members of staff a few year later we began to work for large companies like ***, ***or ****. already in 2003, we were concidered as specialists of the creation of logos for industrial and electronic companies ! And in late 2004 we could hire 28 wage earners and one art director for the subsidiary company we intend to open in torronto .Our wish came true in February of 2005 when we opened the expected subsidiary in torronto, Managed by a new art director, named ****. Today, in a era of success and expansion, we have 252 wage earners. The general manager of the company, **** is very satisfied because we have more and more well known customers English and French speaking as well which is a must in canada What's next from Bee Bop's ? It's hard to say but We should hire 20 more people next year if the company figures are satisfactory !
Message de hackmetal posté le 01-10-2006 à 12:14:38 (S | E | F | I)
reBonjour
Pouvez vous corriger mes fautes de conjugaison surtout mais aussi mes fautes d'orthographes s'il y en a ?
Merci d'avance !!
(bee bop company n'existe pas
)Hello I am *****, the public relations manager and i will presenting you the history of our company . The bee bop Communication agency was set up in Montreal in The first half of 1999 by ***, ****, ****and ****. By January of 2000 the company started a period of expantion and of market exporation especially in Québec and Ontario. In the beggining, we had just 4 wage earners but through the first half of 2001 we really received the four big orders and we could hire 5 more members of staff a few year later we began to work for large companies like ***, ***or ****. already in 2003, we were concidered as specialists of the creation of logos for industrial and electronic companies ! And in late 2004 we could hire 28 wage earners and one art director for the subsidiary company we intend to open in torronto .Our wish came true in February of 2005 when we opened the expected subsidiary in torronto, Managed by a new art director, named ****. Today, in a era of success and expansion, we have 252 wage earners. The general manager of the company, **** is very satisfied because we have more and more well known customers English and French speaking as well which is a must in canada What's next from Bee Bop's ? It's hard to say but We should hire 20 more people next year if the company figures are satisfactory !
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de jean31, postée le 01-10-2006 à 12:54:53 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Les fautes sont signalées, expliquées mais pas corrigées.
C'est à toi que ce travail incombe.
Ce qui est entre [...] est à supprimer.
Hello I am *****, the public relations manager and i (1) will presenting (2) you the history of our company . The (3) bee bop Communication agency was set up in Montreal in The first half of 1999 ( 4) by ***, ****, ****and ****. By January [of] 2000 the company started a period of expantion(5) and [of] market exporation (6) especially in Québec and Ontario. In(7) the beggining,(8) we had just 4 wage earners but through the first half of 2001 we really received the four big orders and we could hire 5 more members of staff. (Nouvelle phrase, SVP !) A few year (9) later we began to work for large companies like ***, ***or ****. Already in 2003, we were concidered (10) as specialists of the creation of logos for industrial and electronic companies ! And in late 2004 we could hire 28 wage earners and one art director for the subsidiary company we intend to open in torronto.(11) Our wish came true in February [of] 2005 when we opened the expected subsidiary in torronto,(11 bis !) Managed (12) by a new art director, named ****. Today, in a era of success and expansion, we have 252 wage earners. The general manager of the company, **** is very satisfied because we have more and more well known customers English and French speaking(13) as well, which is a must in canada (14) What's next from Bee Bop's ? It's hard to say but We should hire 20 more people next year if the company figures are satisfactory !
1 Le pronom sujet 1ère personne singulier ne s'écrit pas de cette façon !
2 Un modal doit TOUJOURS être suivi d'une base verbale.
3 Article zéro devant un nom propre.
4 On emploie plutôt un adjectif pour ce type d'expression temporelle.
5 Orthographe.
6 Orthographe.
7 Ce n'est pas la bonne préposition.
8 Orthographe.
9 A few gouverne un pluriel dénombrable.
10 Orthographe.
11 Orthographe.
11 bis Idem !
12 Pourquoi la majuscule, subitement ?
13 Je crois savoir qu'en anglais, les adjectifs se placent avant le nom.
14 Orthographe.
Allez, corrige-moi tout ça et que ça saute.
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de bridg, postée le 01-10-2006 à 13:36:52 (S | E)
Jean est en grande forme je vois
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de hackmetal, postée le 01-10-2006 à 14:35:19 (S | E)
Merci pour votre aide
voici les corrections que j'ai apporté, mais je n'ai pas très bien compris le N°4 ?Hello I am *****, the public relations manager and I will present you the history of our company .Bee bop Communication agency was set up in Montreal in The first half of 1999 ( 4) by ***, ****, ****and ****. By January 2000 the company started a period of expansion and market exploration especially in Québec and Ontario. At the beginning, we had just 4 wage earners but through the first half of 2001 we really received the four big orders and we could hire 5 more members of staff.
A year later we began to work for large companies like ***, ***or ****. Already in 2003, we were considered as specialists of the creation of logos for industrial and electronic companies ! And in late 2004 we could hire 28 wage earners and one art director for the subsidiary company we intend to open in Torronto. Our wish came true in February 2005 when we opened the expected subsidiary in Torronto, managed by a new art director, named ****. Today, in a era of success and expansion, we have 252 wage earners. The general manager of the company, **** is very satisfied because we have more and more well known English and French customers speaking as well, which is a must in Canada.
What's next from Bee Bop's ? It's hard to say but We should hire 20 more people next year if the company figures are satisfactory !
4 On emploie plutôt un adjectif pour ce type d'expression temporelle.
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de jean31, postée le 01-10-2006 à 15:02:52 (S | E)
Hello again,
Hello I am *****, the public relations manager and I will present you the history of our company .Bee bop Communication agency was set up in Montreal in the first half of 1999 (4)( by ***, ****, ****and ****. By January 2000 the company started a period of expansion and market exploration especially in Québec and Ontario. At the beginning, we had just 4 wage earners but through the first half of 2001 we really received the four big orders and we could hire 5 more members of staff.
A year later we began to work for large companies like ***, ***or ****. Already in 2003, we were considered as specialists of the creation of logos for industrial and electronic companies ! And in THE late MONTHS OF 2004 we could hire 28 wage earners and one art director for the subsidiary company we intend to open in Toronto.(1 seul R !) Our wish came true in February 2005 when we opened the expected subsidiary in Toronto,(idem) managed by a new art director, named ****. Today, in aN era of success and expansion, we have 252 wage earners. The general manager of the company, **** is very satisfied because we have more and more well known English and French customers speaking as well, which is a must in Canada.
What's next from Bee Bop's ? It's hard to say but we should hire 20 more people next year if the company figures are satisfactory !
Quite good !
Pour le (4), tu peux oublier. C'est moi qui ai mal lu. Je croyais avoir lu 1990, autrement dit la décennie.
Dans le cas "première moitié des années 1990", on dirait "in the EARLY 1990's".
D'où mon allusion à un adjectif.
Sorry about that. Please, forget it.
Il faut croire que je ne suis pas aussi en forme que bridg veut bien le dire !
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Modifié par jean31 le 01-10-2006 15:03
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de traviskidd, postée le 01-10-2006 à 15:16:14 (S | E)
...in the LATTER PART of 2004 we WERE ABLE TO (avons pu) hire...
Réponse: Could someone correct me ? :þ de hackmetal, postée le 03-10-2006 à 21:00:59 (S | E)
merci beaucoup pour toutes ces précisions !
c'est vraiment impecable, je reviendrais :þ
INDISPENSABLES : 