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Message de trogloti posté le 14-11-2006 à 20:40:40 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous
Je voudrais savoir si mes phrases sont justes
Pouvez vous me corriger les erreurs

1/ If you want to have good results, you should doing you homework
2/You had better go to the cinema instend of of doing your homework
3/You shouldn't doing your homework, you should go out
4/To have a good job, you had better doing your homework
5/You should doing your homework if you want to pass your exams
6/If you want to be good at english you had better learn the lessons.
7/You oughtn't to go out all your times, you should doing your homework.
8/You should listen your english teatcher, you will be good at english
9/To be good at english, you ought to see your english courses
10/ You had better ask your english teatcher if you is not good at english

MERCI ENCORE à vous tous
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Modifié par bridg le 15-11-2006 06:14
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Réponse: anglais corec de jean31, postée le 14-11-2006 à 21:12:12 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

Quelques dérapages, signalés en couleur.

1 => Base verbale après un modal. Toujours.
2 OK sauf instead of. (orthographe et répétition)
3 Voir remarque 1.
4 Idem. Had better est considéré comme un modal.
5 Idem.
6 Majuscule aux noms de nationalités ou/et de langues vivantes . Sinon OK.
7 ...all the time, + voir remarque 1.
8 Ecouter = to listen to. .. teacher (orthographe) + English x 2.
9 Bis, voir ci-dessus en 8 .
10 Ter ... = if you --- not good ... (You est toujours pluriel, donc...?)

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Réponse: anglais corec de trogloti, postée le 14-11-2006 à 22:02:23 (S | E)
je n'arrive pas a me corriger
bonne soirée

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Réponse: anglais corec de trogloti, postée le 14-11-2006 à 22:03:23 (S | E)
base verbale apres un modal c est pas ce que j'ai fait?

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Réponse: anglais corec de jean31, postée le 14-11-2006 à 22:34:27 (S | E)
Hé non !

=> En 1, ... you should doing ..., je ne vois aucune base verbale, désolé.

Indice : -ed, -ing sont des sortes de suffixes qui s'ajoutent à une base verbale dans des buts précis.
Do you see what I mean now?

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Réponse: anglais corec de hotmustard, postée le 15-11-2006 à 00:27:36 (S | E)
la base verbale c'est DO

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Réponse: anglais correction de trogloti, postée le 15-11-2006 à 18:17:36 (S | E)
quelles modification je dois faire merci de m'aider parsque je ne comprends pas de trop

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Réponse: anglais correction de ourimba, postée le 15-11-2006 à 18:31:20 (S | E)
1/ If you want to have good results, you should doing your homework
2/You had better go to the cinema instead of of doing your homework OK
3/You shouldn't be doing your homework, you should go out
4/To have get a good job, you had better doing your homework
5/You should be doing your homework if you want to pass your exams
6/If you want to be good at english you had better learn the lessons. OK
7/You oughtn't shouldn't to go out all your the times, you should doing your homework.
8/You should listen to your english teatcher, then you will be good at english
9/To be good at english, you ought to see follow your english courses
10/ You had better ask your english teatcher if you is are not good at english

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Réponse: anglais correction de misty, postée le 15-11-2006 à 18:56:25 (S | E)
1/ If you want to have good results, you should do your homework.
2/You'd better go to the cinema instead of doing your homework.
3/You shouldn't do your homework, you should rather go out
4/To have a good job, you'd better do your homework.
5/You should do your homework if you want to pass your exams
6/If you want to be good at english you'd better learn the lessons.
7/You oughtn't to go out all your time, you should do your homework.
8/You should listen your english teatcher, you will be good at english
9/To be good at english, you ought to follow your english courses
10/ You'd better ask your english teatcher if you are not good at english

voila ce que j'aurais répondu! par contre, je ne connais pas la question mais si les phrases sont totalement de toi, je te conseille de rajouter "because" à la place de la virgule en 7! Il me semble que ça passe mieux en anglais ! mais bon .... après, qu'est ce que j'en sais vraiment ?


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Modifié par misty le 15-11-2006 18:56

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Modifié par misty le 15-11-2006 18:58

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Réponse: anglais correction de paraodeus, postée le 15-11-2006 à 22:51:44 (S | E)
1/refer to ourimba
2/refer to misty
3/You shouldn't be doing * your homework, you should be going out *(here it is important to have agreement of tenses. If you use an ing word there you must use it in the next clause as well. You could of course say "You shouldn't do your homework, you should go out" So long as the clauses agree!)
4/To have a good job, you had better doing your homework
5/You should doing your homework if you want to pass your exams
6/If you want to be good at english you had better learn the lessons. maybe "you had better learn each lesson" would be better here
7-->refer to ourimba (Contractions in english are a little tricky. We don't contract ought and not because it is hard to say. For the most part it is better to avoid them entirely, as my english professor told me for my papers. contractions are for spoken language and not for writing!)
8/You should listen to your english teatcher, you will be good at english probably you should say "If you listen to your english teacher, you will become good at english" ourimba's is fine here too!
9/To be good at english, you ought to see replace with "to go to" your english courses
10/ You had better ask your english teatcher if you is are not good at english

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Modifié par paraodeus le 15-11-2006 22:52

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