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Message de omega28 posté le 07-12-2006 à 18:19:10 (S | E | F | I)
Bonsoir tout le monde.
J'ai récemment fait un petit devoir sur une cassette audio, devoir que j' ai eu à rendre et que je corrige. La prof' ayant indiqué les erreurs. C' est souvent des erreurs de " tournures", mais je n' en trouve pas vraiment d ' autres qui font plus " anglais". Pouvez-vous m' aider s' il vous plaît ? Merci d ' avance.
We can see a lot of people who are doing a demonstration. The cause of this demonstration is School Segregation. In my opinion, it was at the time of Martin Luther King.
At the time of Martin Luther King, it had Segregation between white people and black people. White people was privilegied. They couldn't progress if they didn't access to High school. The sign says: " Don't treat our children like prisoners ". It's like a plea to Justice.
They protest because black people can't access to High school. However, they are as clever as white people.
Voilà, merci beaucoup
ps: j' ai corrigé quelques fautes déjà, mais il en reste encore que je n' arrive pas ( encore ) à rectifier.
Message de omega28 posté le 07-12-2006 à 18:19:10 (S | E | F | I)
Bonsoir tout le monde.
J'ai récemment fait un petit devoir sur une cassette audio, devoir que j' ai eu à rendre et que je corrige. La prof' ayant indiqué les erreurs. C' est souvent des erreurs de " tournures", mais je n' en trouve pas vraiment d ' autres qui font plus " anglais". Pouvez-vous m' aider s' il vous plaît ? Merci d ' avance.
We can see a lot of people who are doing a demonstration. The cause of this demonstration is School Segregation. In my opinion, it was at the time of Martin Luther King.
At the time of Martin Luther King, it had Segregation between white people and black people. White people was privilegied. They couldn't progress if they didn't access to High school. The sign says: " Don't treat our children like prisoners ". It's like a plea to Justice.
They protest because black people can't access to High school. However, they are as clever as white people.
Voilà, merci beaucoup
ps: j' ai corrigé quelques fautes déjà, mais il en reste encore que je n' arrive pas ( encore ) à rectifier.
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de jean31, postée le 07-12-2006 à 19:11:10 (S | E)
Good evening,
Here's a little help.
who are doing a demonstration => who are demonstrating.
it had Segregation between white people and black => there was segregation (pas de majuscule) ...
White people was privilegEd => people est un pluriel, donc le verbe doit être au pluriel aussi !
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Modifié par jean31 le 07-12-2006 19:11
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de omega28, postée le 07-12-2006 à 21:08:23 (S | E)
Merci pour ton aide. Y a t-il d ' autres " grosses erreurs" ?
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de aimen7, postée le 07-12-2006 à 21:25:33 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Here is a little more help!
"They couldn't progress if they didn't access to High school."
-They...de qui s'agit-il?
-They couldn't progress if they didn't have the right to attend high school/if they didn't have access to high school/ if they weren't allowed to attend high school...
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de omega28, postée le 07-12-2006 à 21:28:49 (S | E)
merci pour cette " petite aide de plus"
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de isma28, postée le 07-12-2006 à 22:31:04 (S | E)
Hi !There are a lot of repetitions. "access "is a noun and not a verb. I didn'
understand what do you mean by"sign". Why have you used the present simple and the past simple at the same time ?
We can see a lot of people who are demonstrating. The reason is school segregation . According to me,this happened during Martin Luther King time's. There was a racial segregation. Black students were less previleged than white ones . They couldn't accede to High School .
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de isma28, postée le 07-12-2006 à 22:55:14 (S | E)
Sorry ,erreue de frappe: Martin Luther King's time. .........white. (there is no "ones")
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de omega28, postée le 08-12-2006 à 06:59:47 (S | E)
merci pour ton aide ;)
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de traviskidd, postée le 09-12-2006 à 16:27:08 (S | E)
In fact "white ones" is correct, or more simply "whites".
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de rania1, postée le 10-12-2006 à 00:15:12 (S | E)
je souhaite apprendre la bonne prononciation de l'anglais
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de rams, postée le 10-12-2006 à 01:34:02 (S | E)
BONJOUR a tous, et a omega. je suis "a new comer" dans la famille . a propos du texte voici une version que je propose :
we can see a lot of people doing a demonstration.
the cause of this, is school segragation.
in my opinion, it was at the time of Martin Luther King. At that time , there was segragation between white people and the black one. the White was privilegied...............(le reste est bon .)
merci
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de espoire80, postée le 10-12-2006 à 10:18:36 (S | E)
salut tout le monde , j'aimerais bien apprendre l'anglais.
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de hpesoj, postée le 11-12-2006 à 00:34:11 (S | E)
Here are my corrections:
We can see a lot of people who are demonstrating
At the time of Martin Luther King, there was
They protest because black people can't have access to High school. However, they are as clever as white people.
Réponse: Correction: prononciation de mp27, postée le 11-12-2006 à 01:57:38 (S | E)
Hello!
-- privilegied --> ......ged, pas gied
-- a plea for Justice --> pas de majuscule pour "justice".
-- mieux vaudrait ne pas répéter "At the time of Martin Luther King".
Passe tout de suite à --> There was segregation (pas de majuscule ici pour segregation).
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