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Message de kiruban posté le 17-12-2006 à 15:08:47 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez-vous me corriger mes phrases s'il vous plaît?
1/ I had high skilled teachers some years ago.
2/ Now days, I have low skilled teachers whatever all are not like that, Only one or two.
3/ Moreover, I don't even understand courses. In fact, courses are not completed at all.
4/ They reproach me to be shy whatever how to talk if nobody stand up their hand.
5/ Maybe teachers need to rebuild their rules?
6/ It's very worse to say that from someone like me but what to do?
Cordialement,
Kiruban
Message de kiruban posté le 17-12-2006 à 15:08:47 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous,
Pourriez-vous me corriger mes phrases s'il vous plaît?
1/ I had high skilled teachers some years ago.
2/ Now days, I have low skilled teachers whatever all are not like that, Only one or two.
3/ Moreover, I don't even understand courses. In fact, courses are not completed at all.
4/ They reproach me to be shy whatever how to talk if nobody stand up their hand.
5/ Maybe teachers need to rebuild their rules?
6/ It's very worse to say that from someone like me but what to do?
Cordialement,
Kiruban
Réponse: Correction de phrases de jean31, postée le 17-12-2006 à 15:40:54 (S | E)
Hello, kiruban
Ou je me trompe, ou tu n'apprécies guère ton prof d'anlais !
D'ailleurs, tu te débrouilles plutôt bien.
1 => OK
2 => Nowadays (1 seul mot) whatever ne convient pas ici => however = cependant
3 => OK
4 => They reproach me + for + V-ing// whatever how est incorrect => even if = même si // lever la main = to put up/raise/ one's hand (où il faut employer l'adjectif possessif correspondant au pronom sujet)
5 => Employer plutôt le modal should = conseil . => Teachers should ...
6 => On ne dit pas "c'est très pire" ! => It's hard to say from someone like me but what can I do?
Good luck.
Réponse: Correction de phrases de kiruban, postée le 17-12-2006 à 16:18:58 (S | E)
Bonjour,
J'ai fait quelques modifications et réctifications.
Merci pour votre aide précieuse
1/ I had high skilled teachers some years ago.
2/ Nowadays, I have low skilled teachers however all are not like that, only one or two.
3/ Moreover, I don't even understand courses. In fact, courses are not completed at all.
4/ Besides, they reproach me for being shy but how to talk if pupils still talking too much without raising their hand.
5/ Maybe, Teachers may rebuild their rules.
6/ I know, it's very hard to hear that from someone like me but what can I do?
7/ I just wanted to let you know about my studies, don't forgot me mum.
Réponse: Correction de phrases de jean31, postée le 17-12-2006 à 19:38:17 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Comme tu as bien travaillé et que c'est aujourd'hui dimanche, je te donne un dernier coup de main.
1 OK
2 ...however NOT all OF THEM are like that, ...
3 OK
4 ... but how CAN I talk if OTHER pupils KEEP on ANSWERING without raising their handS?
5 Maybe teachers SHOULD rebuild their rules.
6 OK ;o)
7 ... don't forgEt me, Mum.
Good job.
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Modifié par jean31 le 17-12-2006 19:38
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