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Message de juliendebxl posté le 06-01-2007 à 18:19:51 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je ne suis pas super doué en Anglais, donc si quelqu'un pouvait corriger mes fautes... s'il vous plaît.
Electric car is less polluting than cars that run on petrol.
Sharing a car is more economical than driving on your own.
Cycling is more tiring than driving.
Walking is more healthy than using public transport.
Going out to work is less enjoyable than working at home.
Driving is more expensive than walking.
Using public transport is less cheap than cycling.
Small cars is less expensive than big cars.
Working at home is as practical as electric car.
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Modifié par bridg le 06-01-2007 18:36
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Message de juliendebxl posté le 06-01-2007 à 18:19:51 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
Je ne suis pas super doué en Anglais, donc si quelqu'un pouvait corriger mes fautes... s'il vous plaît.
Electric car is less polluting than cars that run on petrol.
Sharing a car is more economical than driving on your own.
Cycling is more tiring than driving.
Walking is more healthy than using public transport.
Going out to work is less enjoyable than working at home.
Driving is more expensive than walking.
Using public transport is less cheap than cycling.
Small cars is less expensive than big cars.
Working at home is as practical as electric car.
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Modifié par bridg le 06-01-2007 18:36
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Réponse: Anglais (correction) de nick27, postée le 06-01-2007 à 19:52:26 (S | E)
Hello !
Electric car is less polluting than cars that run on petrol.
=> Electric car ne veut rien dire. (=> Electric cars + changement du verbe)
Sharing a car is more economical than driving on your own.
OK
Cycling is more tiring than driving.
OK
Walking is more healthy than using public transport.
=> Le comparatif de supériorité de "healthy" n'est pas "more healthy" (bien que rencontré quelques fois)
Going out to work is less enjoyable than working at home.
=> To go to work (pas besoin du "out")
Driving is more expensive than walking.
OK
Using public transport is less cheap than cycling.
OK
Small cars is less expensive than big cars.
=> small cars ... ("is" est singulier)
Working at home is as practical as electric car.
=> carS
Bye
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Modifié par nick27 le 06-01-2007 23:13
After having read Mp27's post I realized "less cheap than" had escaped my attention. Thanks mp27
Réponse: Anglais (correction) de mp27, postée le 06-01-2007 à 22:01:00 (S | E)
Hello juliendebxl!
D'accord avec le post précédent, mais il y a deux phrases qui m'intriguent (point de vue sens)
Using public transport is less cheap than cycling.
a) cheap est un adjectif court (une seule syllabe)---> donc je ne mettrais pas “less cheap than”
b) Je ne comprends pas. A mon avis, cycling et public transport ont été inversés, par conséquent, il y a un problème au point de vue du sens. Tu vois ce que je veux dire?...
Working at home is as practical as electric car.
Tout d'abord, on parle de: electric cars (en général)donc, "s", comme nick l'a indiqué. Toutefois, je ne comprends pas bien le sens de cette phrase car je ne vois pas la relation. N'y a -t- il pas un mot qui manque, ou.....?
Have a nice evening!
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