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Message de saidou posté le 29-01-2007 à 20:23:53 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour(s) j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider, j'ai un essai(s) d'anglais à faire et j'aimerais avoir des idées sur le sujet suivant:
you could even talk to each other face to face.
do you think the internet is altering human relationship? List the advantages and drawbacks you can think out.
j'ai déja commencé à répondre voilà:
since we have been using INTERNET we begin to forget that they are others means of communication like talk to each other face to face so we can say that INTERNET begin to altering human relationship.It's why we are going to list the advantages and drawbacks we can think out.
in developing country everyone can say that INTERNET had revolutionised our life.
in fact, a lot of people access to INTERNET and use it as a means of communication because we can communicated all over the world and it take just a minute to arrived where we want.
moreover with e-mails we can share information, video or images with our family, colleagues or friends. for example a head of a company can send an information to all his employee with just an e-mail whereas it would take a time to phone to each other.
so they are a lot of advantages of using INTERNET.
J'AIMERAIS BEIN QU'ON ME CORRIGE SI J4AI DES FAUTES MERCI D'AVANCE
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Modifié par bridg le 29-01-2007 20:26
Merci de ne pas crier en majuscules
Message de saidou posté le 29-01-2007 à 20:23:53 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour(
you could even talk to each other face to face.
do you think the internet is altering human relationship? List the advantages and drawbacks you can think out.
j'ai déja commencé à répondre voilà:
since we have been using INTERNET we begin to forget that they are others means of communication like talk to each other face to face so we can say that INTERNET begin to altering human relationship.It's why we are going to list the advantages and drawbacks we can think out.
in developing country everyone can say that INTERNET had revolutionised our life.
in fact, a lot of people access to INTERNET and use it as a means of communication because we can communicated all over the world and it take just a minute to arrived where we want.
moreover with e-mails we can share information, video or images with our family, colleagues or friends. for example a head of a company can send an information to all his employee with just an e-mail whereas it would take a time to phone to each other.
so they are a lot of advantages of using INTERNET.
J'AIMERAIS BEIN QU'ON ME CORRIGE SI J4AI DES FAUTES MERCI D'AVANCE
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Modifié par bridg le 29-01-2007 20:26
Merci de ne pas crier en majuscules
Réponse: Internet (aide essai) de fenics, postée le 29-01-2007 à 22:32:16 (S | E)
Hello,
Je vais essayer de t'indiquer les fautes les plus grossières mais je ne peux pas te presenter une correction compléte.
that they are others means of communication-> what the other means of communication are.
talk-> talking
begin to altering-> begin to alter/begin altering
in developing country-> in the developed countries? en tout cas ce que tu as écrit est tout l'inverse de ce que tu voulais dire.
had revolutionised our life.-> revolutionized their life
it take just a minute to arrived where we want.-> it only takes a minute to arrive where we want.
an information-> information est indénombrable et ne peut donc pas être précédé de l'article indéfini.
all his employee-> all his employees
to each other-> to each one/everyone
they are-> there are
Réponse: Internet (aide essai) de jean31, postée le 31-01-2007 à 11:30:54 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Remarques supplémentaires:
=> Majuscule au premier mot d'une phrase, quel qu'il soit.
=> The Internet. L'écrire tout en majuscules est une erreur.
=> Ne pas confondre "There are" = il y a + pluriel avec "They are" = ils sont.
=> Ne pas confondre present perfect et past perfect has/had revolutionized.
=> Access est un verbe transitif direct = pas de préposition devant le COD.
=> Ecrire que "des tas de gens accèdent à l'Internet et s'en servent de moyen de communication parce qu'ils peuvent communiquer dans le monde entier"(sic) est une fort belle lapalissade !
=> Each other est un pronom réciproque. Or dans ta phrase, seul le boss fait l'action de téléphoner à ses employés. Employer each one of them.
=> La dernière phrase est à revoir entièrement.
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