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Message de sani2 posté le 21-02-2007 à 12:50:59 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,merci de me dire si mon texte est correct/Rewrite the following sentences in order:
Last night I had a dream.
I was in a long dark street.
I didn’t know why I was there.
I walked very quickly.
Because I felt frightened.
Suddenly a man come out of the shops in front of me.
His face was cruel and his eyes shine green in the night.
I went past him.
He followed me.
I didn’t look behind me but I could hear him.
I to shout for help but when I open my month nothing came out.
At first I though there was no one Else in the street but then I saw a police man I was safe at last.
I ran to him and touched his arm.
The police man turned round and smile his face was cruel and his eyes shine in the night.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-02-2007 13:49
Il manque les formules de politesse d'usage.
Si c'est un exercice il n'est pas à sa place.
Merci de nous renseigner.
Message de sani2 posté le 21-02-2007 à 12:50:59 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,merci de me dire si mon texte est correct/Rewrite the following sentences in order:
Last night I had a dream.
I was in a long dark street.
I didn’t know why I was there.
I walked very quickly.
Because I felt frightened.
Suddenly a man come out of the shops in front of me.
His face was cruel and his eyes shine green in the night.
I went past him.
He followed me.
I didn’t look behind me but I could hear him.
I to shout for help but when I open my month nothing came out.
At first I though there was no one Else in the street but then I saw a police man I was safe at last.
I ran to him and touched his arm.
The police man turned round and smile his face was cruel and his eyes shine in the night.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-02-2007 13:49
Il manque les formules de politesse d'usage.
Si c'est un exercice il n'est pas à sa place.
Merci de nous renseigner.
Réponse: En ordre ou pas? de mp27, postée le 21-02-2007 à 13:13:10 (S | E)
Hello sani2!
Oui, la succession semble logique.
Ton texte est au passé, alors, pourrais-tu revoir les points ci-dessous?:
- Suddenly a man come out
- his eyes shine green
- I to shout for help
- when I open
- I though
- turned round and smile
- my month -> inattention
- pourquoi une majuscule au mot "else"?
- dernière ligne. Relis et tu verras qu'il manque quelque chose(ponctuation)
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