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Message de sushi91 posté le 14-03-2007 à 16:04:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'ai un dialogue à rendre en anglais, bon il n'est pas terrible et il y a sûrement quelques fautes mais je ne sais pas trop où. Si vous pouviez me corriger ce serait sympa^^.
My brother Justin and his friends want to go on an adventurous trip, but they don't seem to be aware of the difficulty of such a journey.
- Well, Justin, what have you decided? I began.
-We will go abroad, probably in Spain! he exclaimed. A friend of mine knows a place where we could stay during the trip.
[...]
-Of course not! But if I were you I wouldn't take any risk, I explained. You don't even know how to speak spanish!
-We aren't stupid. Each of us will have a good dictionnary. It can do the trick.
-Oh, no it can't! And you know what? You had better stay at home, I added, you're not mature enough!
-Why do you think I can't do it? You always try to discourage me, I hate you! And I'm definitely going to do this trip! he shouted, leaving the room.
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Modifié par bridg le 14-03-2007 16:04
Message de sushi91 posté le 14-03-2007 à 16:04:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, j'ai un dialogue à rendre en anglais, bon il n'est pas terrible et il y a sûrement quelques fautes mais je ne sais pas trop où. Si vous pouviez me corriger ce serait sympa^^.
My brother Justin and his friends want to go on an adventurous trip, but they don't seem to be aware of the difficulty of such a journey.
- Well, Justin, what have you decided? I began.
-We will go abroad, probably in Spain! he exclaimed. A friend of mine knows a place where we could stay during the trip.
[...]
-Of course not! But if I were you I wouldn't take any risk, I explained. You don't even know how to speak spanish!
-We aren't stupid. Each of us will have a good dictionnary. It can do the trick.
-Oh, no it can't! And you know what? You had better stay at home, I added, you're not mature enough!
-Why do you think I can't do it? You always try to discourage me, I hate you! And I'm definitely going to do this trip! he shouted, leaving the room.
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Modifié par bridg le 14-03-2007 16:04
Réponse: Aidez-moi à trouver mes fautes! de marlond, postée le 14-03-2007 à 16:42:45 (S | E)
Hi, it's in a near-perfect English - I've put a few errors in red and explained a couple but I'll leave you to look at the others to see if you can spot where you've gone wrong yourself. Also, note how English punctuation works in dialogue - it's very different to the French and you would not find the French style ever in English. ALL speech goes between " " (speech marks), and things which aren't said (e.g. 'he said', 'he exclaimed') do NOT go in the speech marks. Also, you tend to put a comma (,) before the speech mark when the sentence continues (unless there is another punctuation mark) - I've corrected the punctuation for you:
My brother Justin and his friends want to go on an adventurous trip, but they don't seem to be aware of the difficulty of such a journey.
"Well, Justin, what have you decided?" I began.
"We will go abroad, probably in Spain!" he exclaimed. A friend of mine knows a place where we could stay during the trip.
[...]
"Of course not! But if I were you I wouldn't take any riskS," I explained. "You don't even know how to speak spanish!"
"We aren't stupid. Each of us will have a good dictionnary. It can do the trick."
"Oh, no it can't! And you know what? You had better stay at home," I added, "you're not mature enough!"
"Why do you think I can't do it? You always try to discourage me, I hate you! And I'm definitely going to do this trip!" he shouted, leaving the room.
Réponse: Aidez-moi à trouver mes fautes! de sushi91, postée le 15-03-2007 à 18:26:31 (S | E)
Thanks very much for your help, I think I've rectified my mistakes now
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