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Message de zazafraise posté le 2004-09-13 18:05:55 (S | E | F | I)
"The woman was in the twins when the two airliners have crashed into them. Before they collapsed, she has had the time and the chance to escape from the flammes. Later, she explained to a journalist what she had felt at this time and her feelings during the following days. First of all, she felt obsessed, depresses, confused but not afraid because she didn't know what it was going on. The days after, she didn't watch tv, she was unsafe and now she's terrorised at the idea of being another one, a target. She thinks that it can start again because NY is a concentrate of people.
"The woman was in the twins when the two airliners have crashed into them. Before they collapsed, she has had the time and the chance to escape from the flammes. Later, she explained to a journalist what she had felt at this time and her feelings during the following days. First of all, she felt obsessed, depresses, confused but not afraid because she didn't know what it was going on. The days after, she didn't watch tv, she was unsafe and now she's terrorised at the idea of being another one, a target. She thinks that it can start again because NY is a concentrate of people.
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de zazafraise, postée le 2004-09-13 18:24:24 (S | E)
ce serait super sympa de me répondre
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Edité par bridg le 13-09-2004 19:02
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de sangohan, postée le 2004-09-13 18:48:02 (S | E)
Je t'aurai bien répondu si je comprenais
au moins qu'est-ce-que je dois faire
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Edité par bridg le 13-09-2004 19:03
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de bridg, postée le 2004-09-13 19:07:13 (S | E)
Laisse le temps aux gens et aux professeurs de te répondre. Ils le font gentillement quand ils ont le temps mais ils ne sont pas à notre service.Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de gorgayles, postée le 2004-09-13 20:08:56 (S | E)
bridg c'est vraiment joliment dit bravo
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de zazafraise, postée le 2004-09-13 20:34:02 (S | E)
ba vi mai c que jdoi le rendre mercredi :'(Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de webmaster, postée le 2004-09-13 20:51:33 (S | E)
bonjour,
quelques aides, je vous conseillerais de revoir les points suivants:
have crashed into them (tps)
she has had the time (tps)
flammes (voc)
depresses (voc)
what it was going on (phrase)
a concentrate of people (phrase/voc)
sinon, c'est plutôt bien tourné! bravo!
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de kayrol, postée le 2004-09-13 21:22:50 (S | E)
Hello,
Je me permets de rajouter les commentaires suivants :
Après before : ing (before collapsing)
And her feelings : redondance. "What she had felt at this time (ou moment) and during the following days" serait suffisant, mais sinon c'est correct.
Ensuite, mêmes remarques que le webmaster.
Good luck
Kayrol
Réponse: re:correction texte anglais de zazafraise, postée le 2004-09-14 20:43:32 (S | E)
merci beaucoup ca me touche vraiment énorme bisous à vous et votre site est génial!
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