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Message de mweiss posté le 2004-11-02 16:13:42 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour
Pourriez vous m'aider à trouver mes fautes d'orthographes et de langue.
le sujet est : Doit on dire la verité dans toutes les circonstances?
on devait juste faire le plan l'introduction et la conclusion
In today’s world truthis an important value for everybody. First it allows somebody to knows himself, in addition to this is basis of all confidence between two people. Nevertheless the truth isn’t really present in our society.
When does truth can be to tell and lie is it inevitable in some circumstances?
1) Truth in the society
First thing first we can say that we serach everywherre and all the time of this and that.
- Indeed we search truth for undestand.
- Next we search it for know us.
- Finally truth is omnipresent and basic in our society.
2) The usefullness of the lie
Few people would deny that we often lie but there are different form of lie.
- First and foremost lie avoid sorrow.
- Next lie can protect a person.
- Lastly we can say that lie as so important as truth.
To sum up, I believe that lie is not a bad in some circumstances. Lie for help a man or a woman is a good thing. Obviously there are very strict limits and we mustn’tabuse of this.
merci
Bonjour
Pourriez vous m'aider à trouver mes fautes d'orthographes et de langue.
le sujet est : Doit on dire la verité dans toutes les circonstances?
on devait juste faire le plan l'introduction et la conclusion
In today’s world truthis an important value for everybody. First it allows somebody to knows himself, in addition to this is basis of all confidence between two people. Nevertheless the truth isn’t really present in our society.
When does truth can be to tell and lie is it inevitable in some circumstances?
1) Truth in the society
First thing first we can say that we serach everywherre and all the time of this and that.
- Indeed we search truth for undestand.
- Next we search it for know us.
- Finally truth is omnipresent and basic in our society.
2) The usefullness of the lie
Few people would deny that we often lie but there are different form of lie.
- First and foremost lie avoid sorrow.
- Next lie can protect a person.
- Lastly we can say that lie as so important as truth.
To sum up, I believe that lie is not a bad in some circumstances. Lie for help a man or a woman is a good thing. Obviously there are very strict limits and we mustn’tabuse of this.
merci
Réponse: re:aide pour la correction de kayrol, postée le 2004-11-02 21:51:04 (S | E)
Hello, voici quelques remarques,
In today’s world truth is an important value for everybody. First it allows somebody to knows (to know => pas de S) himself, in addition to this it is the basis of
When does truth can be to tell and lie is it inevitable in some circumstances? je ne comprends pas ce que tu veux dire il doit manquer des mots, peux-tu me donner la phrase en français ?
1) Truth in the society
First
- Indeed we search truth
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- Finally truth is omnipresent and basic in our society.
2) The usefullness of
Few people would deny that we often lie but there are different forms (pluriel) of lie.
- First and foremost lie avoids sorrow.
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To sum up, I believe that lie is not a bad thing in certain circumstances. Lying in order to
En espérant avoir aidé un peu,
Kayrol
Réponse: re:aide pour la correction de mweiss, postée le 2004-11-02 22:04:02 (S | E)
pour la question je voulais dire : quand la verité peut elle etre raconté et le mensong est il inevitable dans certain cas?
this of that sa voulais dire : pour ceci et cela.
et merci pour le reste sa m a bcp aider
Réponse: re:aide pour la correction de kayrol, postée le 2004-11-02 22:51:15 (S | E)
quand la verité peut elle être racontée et le mensonge est il inevitable dans certains cas?
=> When can truth be told, and is lie inevitable in certain circumstances ?
Pour ceci ou cela : mieux vaut dire "for one thing or another"
See you
Kayrol
Réponse: re:aide pour la correction de elbisee, postée le 2004-11-02 23:16:26 (S | E)
Salut, mweiss.
J'ajoute quelques corrections à celles de kayrol.
In today’s world truth is an important value for everybody. First it allows
When
1) The truth in
First of all we can say that we
- Indeed we search for the truth in order to understand.
- Next we search for it in order to know
- Finally truth is omnipresent and basic in our society.
2) The useful
Few people would deny that we often lie but there are different forms of
- First and foremost
- Next
- Lastly we can say that
To sum up, I believe that
Bon courage!
Réponse: re:aide pour la correction de mweiss, postée le 2004-11-03 19:18:26 (S | E)
je vous remercie tous
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