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Message de babydoll100703 posté le 2004-11-08 21:51:54 (S | E | F | I)
hello, grace à vos conseils j'ai fini mon expression ecrite. Pour terminer je vou demande une dernière petite chose:
Pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs?:
Travelling abroad
I like to travel and I like to know different cultures that why
I love travelling abroad and especially on my holydays.
I prefer to spend my holidays abroad because the holidays in Belgium are so boring. But it’s not always possible to go abroad each year.
However if I go abroad I'll choose a warm country because I like the sun.
When I go on holidays I’m a perfect tourist : I go to the museum, I like to visit historic places and monuments, I eat the local food, and the most important think: I never go out without my camera.
This year, I would like to go to Egypt. If I have enough money, I would visit the pyramids of Gizeh, the Sphinx as well as the wonderful temples, palaces and pharaoh’s tombs.
Last year, I went to Rome with my boyfriend. We travelled by plane, we stay over there three days and we slept in a big hotel.
We visited “el coloseo”, “la Basilica di San Pietro” and “la Villa Medici. We took a lot of photos. These holidays are the best of my life.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide
hello, grace à vos conseils j'ai fini mon expression ecrite. Pour terminer je vou demande une dernière petite chose:
Pouvez-vous corriger mes erreurs?:
Travelling abroad
I like to travel and I like to know different cultures that why
I love travelling abroad and especially on my holydays.
I prefer to spend my holidays abroad because the holidays in Belgium are so boring. But it’s not always possible to go abroad each year.
However if I go abroad I'll choose a warm country because I like the sun.
When I go on holidays I’m a perfect tourist : I go to the museum, I like to visit historic places and monuments, I eat the local food, and the most important think: I never go out without my camera.
This year, I would like to go to Egypt. If I have enough money, I would visit the pyramids of Gizeh, the Sphinx as well as the wonderful temples, palaces and pharaoh’s tombs.
Last year, I went to Rome with my boyfriend. We travelled by plane, we stay over there three days and we slept in a big hotel.
We visited “el coloseo”, “la Basilica di San Pietro” and “la Villa Medici. We took a lot of photos. These holidays are the best of my life.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide
Réponse: re:correction d'un texte de frederiquebain, postée le 2004-11-08 22:03:18 (S | E)
I like to travel and I like to discover different cultures ,that why
I love travelling abroad and especially on my holidays.
I prefer to spend my holidays abroad because staying in Belgium is so boring. But it’s not always possible to go abroad each year.
However when I go abroad I choose a warm country because I like the sun.
When I go on holidays ,I’m a perfect tourist : I go to the museum, I visit historic places and monuments, I eat local food, and the most important think: I never go out without my camera.
This year, I would like to visit Egypt. If I had enough money, I would like to visit the pyramids of Gizeh, the Sphinx as well as the wonderful temples, palaces and pharaoh’s tombs.
Last year, I went to Rome with my boyfriend. We travelled by plane, we stayed over there three days and we slept in a palace.
We visited “el coloseo”, “la Basilica di San Pietro” and “la Villa Medici". We took a lot of photos. These holidays were the best of my life.
Il y a quelques répétitions mais c'est très correcte.J'ai changé quelque temps mais j'ai laissé ta structure et tes maladresses pour que ça reste ton exo,bye
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Edité par frederiquebain le 2004-11-08 22:14:11
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Edité par frederiquebain le 2004-11-08 22:20:12
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Edité par frederiquebain le 2004-11-08 22:20:55
Réponse: re:correction d'un texte de morenita, postée le 2004-11-08 22:34:50 (S | E)
just a little mistake:
....and the most important thinG...(you wrote think)
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