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Message de fct89 posté le 01-01-2005 à 18:11:04 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les tournures de phrases et les fautes d'orthographe dans cette rédaction merci d'avance
These days we must accept to leave one’s country, I am conscious. On one hand for get an interesting job that correspond at the qualification. Moreover to get the possibility to climb the career ladder and to perfect my knowledge. Moreover remunerative are attractive from a personal enrichment. Vocational training course in the foreign country become compulsory in higher education can permit to go to an encounter of new landscapes, new cultures, new customs and places of living who can give at your the desire to live one’s country and to be ambitious. Seeing the deepening of the decolonization of all industries at the abroad. I think, it appeared difficult not to think other same if you don’t possess an adventure soul as me. I must say that I am more attracting with countries as Canada, Finland, and Sweden for living form and for landscapes. However my choice direct for a country in development as India who permit to enrich rapidly. Leave one’s country for three or five years seem look for me satisfactory but beyond I preferred to live in a country house, happy and modestly.
Message de fct89 posté le 01-01-2005 à 18:11:04 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour à tous pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les tournures de phrases et les fautes d'orthographe dans cette rédaction merci d'avance
These days we must accept to leave one’s country, I am conscious. On one hand for get an interesting job that correspond at the qualification. Moreover to get the possibility to climb the career ladder and to perfect my knowledge. Moreover remunerative are attractive from a personal enrichment. Vocational training course in the foreign country become compulsory in higher education can permit to go to an encounter of new landscapes, new cultures, new customs and places of living who can give at your the desire to live one’s country and to be ambitious. Seeing the deepening of the decolonization of all industries at the abroad. I think, it appeared difficult not to think other same if you don’t possess an adventure soul as me. I must say that I am more attracting with countries as Canada, Finland, and Sweden for living form and for landscapes. However my choice direct for a country in development as India who permit to enrich rapidly. Leave one’s country for three or five years seem look for me satisfactory but beyond I preferred to live in a country house, happy and modestly.
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