Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
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Seidman / correction
Message de kikrammstein posté le 23-01-2005 à 10:38:26 (S | E | F | I)
Salut voilà j'ai un texte a faire en anglais et je fais des fautes est ce que vous pouvez me corriger merci d'avance
Seidman is back home
-Hello darling!
What's happened during your day?
-Nothing, I was spending the day to the bed
I'm so tired infact yesterday I'm going to miss Starling for help him.
-OK
-And you?in your office
Today we have convoked Andrew in the white room!
You know it?
Certainly!It's a strange room, when you enter you are worried because she is so big so large and she havn't luminosity because the windows are already close!
Andrew! he is the best of your colleague!
-Yes but today he was kicked out because yesterday he has making a professional error!
He has lose the Highline case the more important case of the months.Monday he was in charge to his first big case and to days before to passing by the Court he lose all his files.And he can't prepare the case correctly.The day of the passage all the files was replacing on his desk.So he couldn't plead this case!
This error is unforgivable
What have steal his files?
Me and the other
-No you are break the Andrew's career.
-Yes probably!
-You have any remorses!
-Yes a little, but he have AIDS
-What Andrew have AIDS? It's not a reason to fired him
-But he resigned from his post
And if he was stay he could't contamining me and the other!
-Why you and the other have making that ? because he have aids
they should have shame
you are a two faced and a damn
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Edité par bridg le 23-01-2005 10:52
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Message de kikrammstein posté le 23-01-2005 à 10:38:26 (S | E | F | I)
Salut voilà j'ai un texte a faire en anglais et je fais des fautes est ce que vous pouvez me corriger merci d'avance
Seidman is back home
-Hello darling!
What's happened during your day?
-Nothing, I was spending the day to the bed
I'm so tired infact yesterday I'm going to miss Starling for help him.
-OK
-And you?in your office
Today we have convoked Andrew in the white room!
You know it?
Certainly!It's a strange room, when you enter you are worried because she is so big so large and she havn't luminosity because the windows are already close!
Andrew! he is the best of your colleague!
-Yes but today he was kicked out because yesterday he has making a professional error!
He has lose the Highline case the more important case of the months.Monday he was in charge to his first big case and to days before to passing by the Court he lose all his files.And he can't prepare the case correctly.The day of the passage all the files was replacing on his desk.So he couldn't plead this case!
This error is unforgivable
What have steal his files?
Me and the other
-No you are break the Andrew's career.
-Yes probably!
-You have any remorses!
-Yes a little, but he have AIDS
-What Andrew have AIDS? It's not a reason to fired him
-But he resigned from his post
And if he was stay he could't contamining me and the other!
-Why you and the other have making that ? because he have aids
they should have shame
you are a two faced and a damn
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Edité par bridg le 23-01-2005 10:52
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