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Message de bonbon-rose posté le 23-01-2005 à 18:52:56 (S | E | F | I)
voilà j'ai écrit un writing en anglais...je sais qu'il est plein de fautes alors s'y vous pouviez m'aider svp!!!!!!
de plus si vous voulez ajouter quelque chose, n'hésitez SURTOUT pas
merci
SUJET:Can watching an average of six soap operas a day and reading about four novels a week help understand sentimental questions?
Some people watching an average of six soap operas a day and reading about four novels a week.They think that they can help understand sentimental questions.We'll see the advantages and drawbacks to do that;
Now people are used to spending long hours watching tv...Everyday they can see impossible love, parental hostility, lovers in the soap operas.Some people identified with them.In fact, they can be interesting because they can help for exemple in the real life..
Nevertheless, it's the opposite of real life.People are actors for soap operas and in the novels it's an amplificated romance.Love affairs are very complicated and isn't all the same as everyday life.The trulY important things aren't in this things.All the more, people spend their timefor not very interesting things...People can go out, try something new or can improve in something...Only the realistic can help in sentimental questions because all of people are different.
In my point of vue, reading four novels a week and see six operas a day isn't a good solution.People can imaginate the life like a dream...and it's not true! Sometimes they can help with this , on condition that they can see the borderline between the dream and the real life.
VOILA.SVP aidez moi!
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Edité par bridg le 23-01-2005 19:01
Message de bonbon-rose posté le 23-01-2005 à 18:52:56 (S | E | F | I)
voilà j'ai écrit un writing en anglais...je sais qu'il est plein de fautes alors s'y vous pouviez m'aider svp!!!!!!
de plus si vous voulez ajouter quelque chose, n'hésitez SURTOUT pas
merci
SUJET:Can watching an average of six soap operas a day and reading about four novels a week help understand sentimental questions?
Some people watching an average of six soap operas a day and reading about four novels a week.They think that they can help understand sentimental questions.We'll see the advantages and drawbacks to do that;
Now people are used to spending long hours watching tv...Everyday they can see impossible love, parental hostility, lovers in the soap operas.Some people identified with them.In fact, they can be interesting because they can help for exemple in the real life..
Nevertheless, it's the opposite of real life.People are actors for soap operas and in the novels it's an amplificated romance.Love affairs are very complicated and isn't all the same as everyday life.The trulY important things aren't in this things.All the more, people spend their timefor not very interesting things...People can go out, try something new or can improve in something...Only the realistic can help in sentimental questions because all of people are different.
In my point of vue, reading four novels a week and see six operas a day isn't a good solution.People can imaginate the life like a dream...and it's not true! Sometimes they can help with this , on condition that they can see the borderline between the dream and the real life.
VOILA.SVP aidez moi!
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Edité par bridg le 23-01-2005 19:01
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