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Message de tuxkimbo posté le 01-02-2005 à 12:08:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, pouvez vous m'aider à corriger ces quelques lignes ???? merci beaucoup.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently visited your annual exhibition. I would like to give my impression and suggestions to you.
First able, I think that it’s a good idea to leave open this exhibition throughout the year. That makes it possible to justify local artistic creation and to make know the artists.
On the other hand, I wonder how the 250 art objects are selected, because I saw incredible horror. However I wanted to congratulate you for the splendid sculptures. Allow me to suggest you creating a public jury to elect best works.
I also found interesting to be able to acquire all these things at a very reasonable prices.
In spite of that I find damage to make pay the entry, because there would be more visitors.
Finally I think that the place of exhibition is badly selected. It would be better to move it to the Downtown Hall, because currently there id no public transport to go there.
I hope that these some constructive remarks will allow to improve the next editions of this annual exhibition.
Yours faithfully,
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Edité par emy64 le 01-02-2005 19:28
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Message de tuxkimbo posté le 01-02-2005 à 12:08:01 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour, pouvez vous m'aider à corriger ces quelques lignes ???? merci beaucoup.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently visited your annual exhibition. I would like to give my impression and suggestions to you.
First able, I think that it’s a good idea to leave open this exhibition throughout the year. That makes it possible to justify local artistic creation and to make know the artists.
On the other hand, I wonder how the 250 art objects are selected, because I saw incredible horror. However I wanted to congratulate you for the splendid sculptures. Allow me to suggest you creating a public jury to elect best works.
I also found interesting to be able to acquire all these things at a very reasonable prices.
In spite of that I find damage to make pay the entry, because there would be more visitors.
Finally I think that the place of exhibition is badly selected. It would be better to move it to the Downtown Hall, because currently there id no public transport to go there.
I hope that these some constructive remarks will allow to improve the next editions of this annual exhibition.
Yours faithfully,
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Edité par emy64 le 01-02-2005 19:28
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