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Message de habiba posté le 24-04-2005 à 19:59:22 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour j'ai une rédaction à faire est ce que vous pouvez me la corriger s'il vous plaît ? merci

Write the narrator's account of his first encounter with Dracula.you will mix narrative and dialogue.

One day in May in the morning i decided to go to Dracula's Castle. Admittedly i was afraid because it was the first time I meet Dracula and everybody knows that they represent (Dracula's) the danger of the world, since they find their feed in the human beings, it's horrible. But i did not have another choice if i wanted to buy his castle.
when i arrived, i have seen a big Castle which gave to me strange sensations, I opened the door of the castle suddenly I saw Dracula. Never had I imagined him like that, he looked nice
-Welcome to my home!
-thank you, I want to see Dracula
-I am Dracula
-nice to meet you.
And he proposed to me to eat something and he started to speak with me , at this moment I field he was like other human beings, he spoke me about his wife.
- I love her and she is a always in my heart
- I feel that he is like other person and he has a heart, their eyes grace more sadness .
In fact I see in him someone very nice but he try to show himself like a monster.
-how long have you lived in this castle
-I've live in this castle for 30 years and it makes me crazy because I see everywhere in this castle my wife who leaved me, so I want to sell this castle to forget my wife in order to live like other Dracula's and above all to find my feed.
-I hope to help you, I have to leave you because it's too late, I will come to see you tomorrow.
-I'll see you again.
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Edité par bridg le 24-04-2005 20:03