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Message de habiba posté le 24-04-2005 à 19:59:22 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour j'ai une rédaction à faire est ce que vous pouvez me la corriger s'il vous plaît ? merci
Write the narrator's account of his first encounter with Dracula.you will mix narrative and dialogue.
One day in May in the morning i decided to go to Dracula's Castle. Admittedly i was afraid because it was the first time I meet Dracula and everybody knows that they represent (Dracula's) the danger of the world, since they find their feed in the human beings, it's horrible. But i did not have another choice if i wanted to buy his castle.
when i arrived, i have seen a big Castle which gave to me strange sensations, I opened the door of the castle suddenly I saw Dracula. Never had I imagined him like that, he looked nice
-Welcome to my home!
-thank you, I want to see Dracula
-I am Dracula
-nice to meet you.
And he proposed to me to eat something and he started to speak with me , at this moment I field he was like other human beings, he spoke me about his wife.
- I love her and she is a always in my heart
- I feel that he is like other person and he has a heart, their eyes grace more sadness .
In fact I see in him someone very nice but he try to show himself like a monster.
-how long have you lived in this castle
-I've live in this castle for 30 years and it makes me crazy because I see everywhere in this castle my wife who leaved me, so I want to sell this castle to forget my wife in order to live like other Dracula's and above all to find my feed.
-I hope to help you, I have to leave you because it's too late, I will come to see you tomorrow.
-I'll see you again.
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Edité par bridg le 24-04-2005 20:03
Message de habiba posté le 24-04-2005 à 19:59:22 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour j'ai une rédaction à faire est ce que vous pouvez me la corriger s'il vous plaît ? merci
Write the narrator's account of his first encounter with Dracula.you will mix narrative and dialogue.
One day in May in the morning i decided to go to Dracula's Castle. Admittedly i was afraid because it was the first time I meet Dracula and everybody knows that they represent (Dracula's) the danger of the world, since they find their feed in the human beings, it's horrible. But i did not have another choice if i wanted to buy his castle.
when i arrived, i have seen a big Castle which gave to me strange sensations, I opened the door of the castle suddenly I saw Dracula. Never had I imagined him like that, he looked nice
-Welcome to my home!
-thank you, I want to see Dracula
-I am Dracula
-nice to meet you.
And he proposed to me to eat something and he started to speak with me , at this moment I field he was like other human beings, he spoke me about his wife.
- I love her and she is a always in my heart
- I feel that he is like other person and he has a heart, their eyes grace more sadness .
In fact I see in him someone very nice but he try to show himself like a monster.
-how long have you lived in this castle
-I've live in this castle for 30 years and it makes me crazy because I see everywhere in this castle my wife who leaved me, so I want to sell this castle to forget my wife in order to live like other Dracula's and above all to find my feed.
-I hope to help you, I have to leave you because it's too late, I will come to see you tomorrow.
-I'll see you again.
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Edité par bridg le 24-04-2005 20:03
Réponse: essay de jardin62, postée le 24-04-2005 à 21:10:23 (S | E)
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' In May, one morning, I decided to go to Dracula's castle.
I must admit I was afraid because it was the first time I met Dracula.
Everyone knows that he has symbolized all the dangers of the world since he found how to feed himself from human beings. I felt awful.
However I didn't have the choice: I had to buy this castle!
When I arrived I saw a big castle which gave me strange feelings. I was opening the heavy door when I suddenly saw Dracula! Never had I imagined he would be like that! He looked rather pleasant.
- Welcome to my home!
- Thank you sir, I would like to see Count Dracula.
- I am Count Dracula.
- Er...Nice to meet you...
And he suggested I eat something. While I was eating he talked about his wife. For a while, I felt as if he was like any other human being.
- I love her. She is always in my heart.
So, he had a heart...His eyes were full of sadness.
I saw him as someone nice although he tried to show himself as a monster.
- How long have you been living in the castle?
- Well, for thirty years! Seeing everywhere in this castle, the woman who left me, makes me mad! That's why I want to sell it. I want to forget her in order to live like the other Draculas! Above all I want to feed myself.
- I would like to help you but I don't know how to. Now, you will excuse me, for it's being late and I am exhausted. May I come back and see you tomorrow?
- It will be a pleasure.'
* Voilà, mais j'aurais aimé expliquer car, vas-tu comprendre les changements faits dans les constructions et le vocabulaire apporté? J'espère que oui.
Bon courage.
Réponse: essay de habiba, postée le 24-04-2005 à 22:01:50 (S | E)
merci jardin62 j'ai tout compris sauf l'expression "For a while"
Réponse: essay de traviskidd, postée le 25-04-2005 à 00:53:04 (S | E)
"It's late" (if it is already late) or "It's getting late." (Never "It's being late.")
Réponse: essay de jardin62, postée le 25-04-2005 à 05:54:53 (S | E)
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habiba: 'for a while' est une expression de temps signfiant 'pendant un moment/ pendant un instant'
Bonne journée.
Réponse: essay de habiba, postée le 26-04-2005 à 19:47:57 (S | E)
merci
Réponse: essay de habiba, postée le 26-04-2005 à 21:51:16 (S | E)
une autre question svp pourquoi "er...nice to meet you" pourquoi "er"
Réponse: essay de habiba, postée le 26-04-2005 à 21:58:47 (S | E)
I had to buy this castle! ce ne serait pas plutot sauf erreur de ma part I have to buy this castle!
Réponse: essay de habiba, postée le 26-04-2005 à 21:59:47 (S | E)
NON!!!!! desolé c'était mon inconscient je n'ai pas fait attention!!!