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Mail pour Italiens(correction)
Message de muc72 posté le 11-11-2005 à 15:31:06 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour,ceci est un mail écrit en cours pour des correspondants italiens .pouriez-vous me corriger les fautes s'il vousplé. plaît
Dear palfriend(s),
We are really enjoy to correspond with you.We are five french boys on the secondary school Marguerite yourcenar in Le Mans.
Then we are going to introduce ourselves separetely :
-Julien is 16,tall.he’s got brown,short hair and brown eyes.He’ s fond of football,basketball,tennis,golf.His favourite kind of music are pop music,rock’n roll and rap.
-Jean-Hugues is 15 years old.he’s tall with brown spiky gelled hair,blue eyes.He’s very very lazy.j-h’s got two sisters.he enjoys punk rock especially Sum forty one and Green Day but he hates rap.Otherwise,he likes football and Americain football .He is crazy about internet where he spends all his time !
-Damien is 15,he’s a bit shy,doesn’t speak very much.he likes football and tennis.His favourite bands are The Rasmus ans Prophets.As Jean-Hugues « he spends his life » on the net.
-Pierre is 15, is crazy about sport,in particular judo because he has been practising this sport for 9 years.He has too a passion for our national sport : he knows all of players of european football teams !
-François is 15,likes all of sort of music.Thanks to the team of Le Mans he’s very fond of football.He loves read , above all Aghatha Christie’novels and he’s mad on playstation.
At the moment,with our history’s teacher ,we are descussing about « inequality between men and women »on sport,on work ,in politics.
So we would like to know your opinion(s)about this subject.
We look forward to hearing from you.
Regards.
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Edité par bridg le 11-11-2005 15:35
Courrier => divers
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Message de muc72 posté le 11-11-2005 à 15:31:06 (S | E | F | I)
bonjour,ceci est un mail écrit en cours pour des correspondants italiens .pouriez-vous me corriger les fautes s'il vous
Dear palfriend(s),
We are really enjoy to correspond with you.We are five french boys on the secondary school Marguerite yourcenar in Le Mans.
Then we are going to introduce ourselves separetely :
-Julien is 16,tall.he’s got brown,short hair and brown eyes.He’ s fond of football,basketball,tennis,golf.His favourite kind of music are pop music,rock’n roll and rap.
-Jean-Hugues is 15 years old.he’s tall with brown spiky gelled hair,blue eyes.He’s very very lazy.j-h’s got two sisters.he enjoys punk rock especially Sum forty one and Green Day but he hates rap.Otherwise,he likes football and Americain football .He is crazy about internet where he spends all his time !
-Damien is 15,he’s a bit shy,doesn’t speak very much.he likes football and tennis.His favourite bands are The Rasmus ans Prophets.As Jean-Hugues « he spends his life » on the net.
-Pierre is 15, is crazy about sport,in particular judo because he has been practising this sport for 9 years.He has too a passion for our national sport : he knows all of players of european football teams !
-François is 15,likes all of sort of music.Thanks to the team of Le Mans he’s very fond of football.He loves read , above all Aghatha Christie’novels and he’s mad on playstation.
At the moment,with our history’s teacher ,we are descussing about « inequality between men and women »on sport,on work ,in politics.
So we would like to know your opinion(s)about this subject.
We look forward to hearing from you.
Regards.
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Edité par bridg le 11-11-2005 15:35
Courrier => divers
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Réponse: Mail pour Italiens(correction) de jerem72, postée le 12-11-2005 à 09:34:29 (S | E)
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